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yashasvini

@Yashh...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

OMG...!! Mehak
awesoem parts yaar
\but I dont like this drug dealing n all 😔
well...........yayy...!! Mayank is here 🤪....excited

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

thank u everyone for the compliments..😊

PART 8:

Nupur was still on her place, and mayank was heading towards her, she could feel her 3 years of patience being paid off and mayank finally couldnt believe that he was actually heading towards nupur, mayank finally reached her and gently brushed his fingers on her cheeks, nupur closed her eyes as she wanted to feel the moment, mayank joined his forehead with nupur's, both of them were silent, sometimes when u want to say countless things to a person, silence and tears become the best way to communicate, and that is what happened with MAYUR.,, mayank kissed her eyes gently, which had been crying for him so long, and then nupur hugged him, as she wanted to get lost into mayank, she tigtly cluthced the collar of his shirt and mayank's hands tangling in between her half-open hair and , mayank's lips gently touching her shoulder, it was the moment of re union after three years of seperation,a seperation apperantly had no end, it was like paradise on earth, but then suddenly the door started banging very loudly..., they both drew apart and wiping thier tears they headed towards the door!..it was samrat..mayank opened the door

S..main ne yahan JD ko dekha hai...yahan neche...

nupur left mayank's hand, which mayank held after a micro second..

N...tum dono jao yahan se, wo tum sab ko mar de ga..please jao..

M..samrat tum nupur ko le k jao yahan se, JD ka samna main karta hoon.

N...nahin, is liye main tumhe batana nai chati thi mayank, tumhe nahin pata,abhi main us k pas chali jati hon, hum sham ko phir mil ken gey aur kuch soch len gey..

M.. nupur tum ab ik minuite b us k pas nahi jao gi..

S..guys argument ka time nahi hai..

M...samrat nupur k le k HOTEL SUNSTAR jao, wahan mere naam pe room book hai, excel clg ki taraf se, JD whan kabhi nahi phonch sake ga, tum jao..

N...mayank tum..

M..nupur go!

they both left and mayank went and sat on the chair calmly, he left the door open.

JD...Mrs Sharma tumhe kia laga k tum kuch be karo gi aur mujhe pata nahi chaley ga?

Mayank stood up and JD was shocked to see him...whereas mayank had hatred full in his eyes, but he stayed calm..

M...OMG!...Mr. Devraj...tumhe abhi bhi tameez nahi ayi k ander aney se pehle knock kiya jata hai..

JD..tum yahan kiya kar rahe ho.?

M...excuse me?...ye jaga tumhari property hai?

JD... nupur kahan hai?

Finally he said what mayank wanted him to say..

M..Devraj nupur ko marey teen saal ho chuke hain.., tum kis nupur ki baat kar rahe ho?

JD was confused , he couldnt figure out that whether mayank was playing him or was he really unaware of nupur's exsistence.

JD...main apni business partner ki baat kar raha hon, NUPUR!..,meri yahan us se meeting thi..

M...well apni business partner ki tu tumhain khud khabar honi chiye, btw mai yahan 1 ghante se hon, main ne kisi ko nahi dekha.

JD...koi baat nahi, main usey khud dhoond lon ga, and btw Nupur ki maut ka sun k bht dukh hua ..i am sorry..

M...dont be, bcz u will be punished...

JD..kia kaha?

M..kuch nahi, now will u please leave.

JD left, and so did mayank, he was now following JD.

Samrat and nupur reached HOTEL SUNSTAR, samrat asked the reciptionist for availibilty of a room,

N..samrat do kamre lo na, ik mera aur ik tumhra.

S..yahan mayank ka room booked hai nupur, tu tum wahan hi rahoi gi na..

samrat was looking at her with that usual mischief and nupur ko do nothing but blush...

N...samrat ye mazak ka waqt nai hai, mujhe lagta hai mujhe JD ko ik phn kar dena chiye, ta ke wo mujhe dhondna band kar dey.

S..are u sure wo tum pe yakeen karey ga..

N..koshish tu kar skte hain na.., *she dails the number*, HELLO JD

JD..kaha ho tum.

N..main delhi railway station pe hon, yahan police ka raid hai, is liye station pe bhikaran ban k bethi hon, police sari talasshi le rahi hai.., ahiyed subha a sakon gi..

JD..main wahn a raha hon..

N..tumhari marzi hai..*disconnects the phn*

S..nupur lekin agr wo sation pe chala gaya tu?

N..wo nahi jaye ga..station pe sach much ka raid hai..

S..tumhe kaise pata?

N..abhi raste main dekha hai..

S..great!...*recptinist hands then the keys*, ye lo mayank k kamre ki chabi, thori dair main lunch pe milte hain,

N..samrat!, mayank ko phn karna hai..

suddenly samrats' mobile vibrates..

S...ye lo us ka sms a gaya hai, wo thek hai nupur!..

Nupur read the sms..it said "main thek hoon, dont worry"

N..thek hai, lunch pe milte hain.

Nupur entered the room and could feel it was maynak's room, not a single thing was displaced,

N..By GOD!!...ye tu kahin bahar a k bhi discpline nahi chorta!!..

there was a knock on the door...

nupur thought it would be samrat and she opened but it was...GUNJAN!!...

do comment 😊

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Fiza

@mayurian-artian

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

brilliant upd

do upd sooon luv it totally

luv

Fiza

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Hey that's nice :D
Hmmm I m getting really curious to know ab kya hog.. 😆

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yashasvini

@Yashh...

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

ohh godd............bhikaran 🤣............bechari jhansi ki Rani Nupur kumari 😆

anywayss..........loved the remaining part..............yay..!! Nupur reached Mayanks room
I wud really want to see more when actually MN meet........I dont want it to end up with just a kiss or hug............i want much more than that (dont ask me what is that "more" 😳)

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

its nice yar...but u r updating very fast and i am not able to catch u 😔
but koi ni i have read all parts and its really awesome...m curious now wat will happen next ???

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Ask me ;)

@Jenny..

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

awesome update loved this part

mayur part was awesome

in next part plz add mayur romantic scenes

thnx for the pm

Edited by jainypatel - 14 years ago

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315925

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Aah Mehak...loved the last three updates!
The MayUr magic was simply MAGIC! <333333
Am totally mesmerized and lost!

And loving SaNu scenes till now! :)

And now waiting for GunUr scene too! =)

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ardhana

@ardhana

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

wow just now finished reading all your parts u r just awesomeplz continue soon

i am eagerly waiting for gunur and mayur reunion in the true sense

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

thanks a lot guys..😊, and OMG..above thousand views..

PART 9:

Gunjan is totally freezed at the sight of nupur, she was expecting maynk but it was NUPUR!...she couldnt move,and on the other hand nupur was also rock steady. Samrat meanwhile came there, he saw gunjan standing outside he room and the door was opened, he understood gunjan had seen nupur..

S..chasmish..

Gunjan suddenly comes out of the shock..

G..samrat ..di..

S..haan chasmish, tumhari di hai...nupur hai...

She looked again at nupur, and nupur opened her arms and she rushed towards her,

G..di tum?....tum kaise?..

N...dekh le gunjan,, tujh se door kabhi gayi hoon..

G..samrat ye...di tum..mujhe yakeen nai ho raha hai..

N... gunajn, kabhi kabhi kismat sath de deti hai..

Gunajn again hugged her

G...di tum kahan chali gayi thi, pata hai tumhe kitna yaad kiya hai ..ik bar b tum ne nai sohca k main kaise rahon gi...

N...yehi soch k tu wapis ayi hon gunjan..

G..di tum kahan thi..

nupur looks confusedly at samrat, alkhough it was not her fault but being a drug dealer was embarrsing...

G..di..kaha thi tum?

S...main bata hon chashmish..

Samart told her the whole story and gunajn couldnt believe her ears, she held nupur's hand tightly,

G...di ik bar bhi hamien nahi bataya, tum ne kaisa ye sab bardasht liya hai...di tum..

nupur started crying...samrat held gunjan's and nupur's hand..

S..please, jo guzr gaya hia, us k bare main ab kal baat karen gey, please thori dair k liye ye sab bhol sakte hain...hum logon ne pehle hi bht sad mode main zindagi guzar di hai...thori dair normal ho jaye please...

both of them laughed..

Samart came out and dialed mayank;s number..

S..hello mayank, kahan ho tum?

M...samrat main yahan JD k ghr k bahir hon, but something is very strange.

S..kia hua?

M..samrat JD nupur ko dhondne nahi gaya..wo tu apne ghr a gaya hai..

S..wo is liye kyunki tumhari wife ik super genious hai..

M..mtlb?

S...mtlb ye k nupur ne JD se kaha k wo ik railway station pe bhikaran ban k police se chup rahi hai..

M...what ..bhikaran?. *laughs*..i dont belive this..

S..well...its nupur for u...super genious.., aur mayank please tum b wapis a jao.., ye sab subha shoro kar len gey, thori dair k liye 3 saal pehle wali life gi lain..

M..ofcourse , main a raha hon...

Samrat went to the room gain, where gunajn was lying in nupur's lap..

S..wah chasmish!...tum tu ik dam bachi ban gayi ho!...thank God nupur tum time se a gayi warna chasmish tu bilkul borhi ho gayi thi..

G...samrat tum!...

S..ok ok..rleax, waise meri mayank se baat ho gai hai, wo araha hai..

Mayank enetered and he could see the joy on every one's face..

He went straight to gunajn and smied towards her, and was about to cry when samrat interupted.

G..ok guys i think enough of crying, khana order karen?

M...haan bilkul..

Four of then had dinner in mayank's room. Only gunajn and nupur were talking during the dinner, whereas samrat could see mayank constantly looking at nupur as if he wanted to look at her whole his life...dinner finished and samrat suddenly looked at gujnan who was in no mood of getting up.

S...chasmish bhi na!...kuch nahi samjhti..

G...samrat tum ne kuch kaha..

S...haan chasmish, i think ab sab ko so jana chaiye, cahlo tum be apne kamre main jao..

G..nahi mujhe abhi di se..

samrat cuts her in between and holds her hand

S..chalo chalo ..good night mayank, good night nupur..

he was dragging gunjan out of thier room

M..samrat tum ye...

S....bye mayank

N..lekin samrat..

S...good night nupur..

He brought gunjan out with her and she was very angry..

G..ye kia mazak hai samrat, mujhe di se abhi kitni batien karni thi...

S...tum pagal ho gai ho!..

G..kia?

S..chasmish, mayank ko bhi mauqa de do apni biwi se baat karne ka, nupur sirf tumhari behn nahi hai, mayank ki biwi bhi hai..

G.. haan, tu jiju baat kar letey..main ne kab man kiya hai..

S...*unbeliveably says*..CHASMISH!

G..ummm...sorry, shaiyed tum thek keh rahe ho, actaully mujhe ehsaas hi nai hua..

S...hmmm..pata tha mujhe..aur agar main tumhe bahar nahi nikata tu tum sari raat wahin bethi rehti..

G..sorry..

S..*smiles*...good night chasmish..

G...good night..

and both of then moved towards thier rooms,

whereas mayank and nupur in thier room were feeling so awkward, it felt as if both of them were married today, even hesitating to look at each other....

do comment..😊

Edited by mehak03 - 14 years ago

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