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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was beautifully written dear!!!!!
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thank u again guys...u all really boost up my confidence...😊, and wow above 2000 views...🥳

PART 12:

Samrat, Mayank and gunjan were working on a way that may solve thier problems..

M...JD ko drug-dealing main arrest karwna inpossible hai..

S..hamien 3 saal pehle se shoro karna pare ga, nupur ki wja se JD ka political carrier khatam hua hai tu is liye wo badla le raha hai..

M..haan lekin is k liye tu ye b prove karna pare ga k wo accident JD ne karwaya tha..

G...aur ab tu us k bare main koi proof mil b nai sakta, 3 saal ho gaye hain..

S..exactly!!...lekin kuch tu aisa hoga jo us k against jaye..

M...humain kisi lawyer se milna pare ga...hum log khud ye sab solve nai kar sakte..

S..thek hai,main dekhta hon k delhi k top lawyers kaun kaun hain..

G..main b chalti hon..

Mayank wanted to go also, but he wanted samrat and gunjan to talk, so he held back.

Mayank was reading all the notes again when he was hugged from back..

M..nupur?..

Nupur kissed mayank on his cheek

N...haan nupur, ku tumhain kis aur ka intezar tha?

Mayank pulled her in front, she was smiling so brightly adn her eyes were shining, she could see her old nupur back..

M..tum subha aisey ku chali gayi thi nupur?

N...ku k main tumhare aur apne lliye mushkil kam karana chahti thi..

she wanted to change the topic

N.. waise tum kab uthey they..


M..tumhare jane k 10 min baad..

N...BY GOD!!..sari raat nahi soye aur subha itni jaldi uth gaye...

M...haan tu raat ko bhi tum ne sone nahi duiya aur subha b tumhari waja se jaldi uth gaya!..

Mischief was dropping from his eyes..and he pulled her more close

M...tu ab meri neend kharab karne k liye tumhain punishment milegi..

Nupur was blushing..

N..thek hai..kya?

M...ab se main jab b subha uthon ga, tumhain merey samne hona pare ga!...

Nupur was so touched and her eyes said all..

N..acha mayank samrat aur gunjan kahan hai?

M...wo lawyer hire karne gaye hain..

Nupur got tensed

N...mayank hum ye sab kar paye gey na..

M...tumhain koi shaq hai?

N..nahi..

aur hona b nahi chaiye..

both of them turned on a female voice...

a beautiful, ravsihing, girl entered, she was wearing knee lenght skirt, with her hair tied in a high pony tail..

Hi I am NAINA KHANNA...BARRISTER NAINA KHANNA!..

do comment..😊



Edited by mehak03 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
This part is also awesome!!!!
⭐️😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
part wz short yaar
nxt tym i want a lonnnnnnnggggggggg update
pleashhhhh.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
gr8 going... i m excited to read the next update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
Hey i loved Nupur's confident infront of JD...and i loved that fact that she was never afraid of JD.......😃
and the conversation of MayUr after Nupur's return was really sweet......😳

BTW nice TWIST......and thanks for PM......😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank u guys...and plz no need to thank me for the PM, thank u all for reading..😃

PART 12:

Naina Khanna was extremely beautiful and looked a modern day educated independent girl, with a welcoming smile on her face..

Samrat and gunjan entered just after that..

S...ye hamari lawyer hain...naina khanna..

M..oh hi miss naina..I am mayank sharma..aur ye meri wife hain, nupur..

Nupur gave her a smile

NK..Hello Mr &Mrs Sharma...so lets start the work..

All four of them told the whole story to naina, starting from the rivalry in excel college, and then all the happenings in the past three years..

NK..hmmm...bht filmy story hai.. tu nupur ap batayie JD ne kabhi ap kp phyisaclly harrass karne ki koshish ki hai?

This question was a complete shock , all four of them didnt expected naina to ask such a question and nupur's eyes were filled with tears, samrat couldnt look upwards and gunajn and mayank were looking at nupur as if conveying support through eyes,

NK..dekhiye i know question thora shocking hai, but court main aisi hi batien hongi...

N...i understand,nahi kabhi koshish nahi ki..

NK...hmm...strange, itna bara criminal hai, aur agr revenge chahta tha tu he could have done anything..

N...may be us ko andaza that k agr wo mujhe physically harras kare ga tu shiyed main suicide b attempt kar sakti hon, wo mujhe zinda rakh k torture karna chata tha..

NK...may be...but make one thing very sure JD nupur pe trust karta hai, is had tak k he realisis k agr ap sab nupur k samne a bhi gaye tu bhi nupur ap k pas jane ki himmat nahi kare gi..

S..lekin ap us k trust ka kaise use karen gi..

NK..us ka hi tu use karon gi, bcz sometimes over confident hi kafi hota hai, kisi ko harane k liye..

G...but JD bht dangerous hai

NK...itna bhi nahi hai, yehi tu problem hai civilinas ki, ye sab criminals jitna power show karte hain, itna power in k pas nahi hota...aur hum sab dar jate hain..

S...lekin ap karein gi kya?

NK...wo hum kal discuss karen gey..anyways ab main chalti hoon, bye every one and Mayank can i talk to u for a momant..

M...of course...

Both of them were walking towards the hotel exit..

NK...dekhiye mayank ap ko apni wife pe bht bharosa karna pare ga!

M..wo tu main karta hon..

Nk..that is really sweet of u lekin shayed ap sab is case ki senstivity nahi samjh rahe...

M...mtlb?

NK...mayank JD nupur pe kisi bhi tarah ka counter attack kar sakta hai, ye be k nupur apni marzi se us k pass ayi thi, ya paiso k liye kam karti hai ya even k nupur us ki mistress hai...

M...NAINA!..

NK...i knew it, ye sb koi bhi husband tolerate nahi kare ga!, aur yehi test hai, agr nupur ko ap ki ankhon ain ik pal k liye bhi koi shaq nazr ya tu wo case se peche hat jaye gi.., mayank nupur ne bht suffer kiya hai,i understand ap sab bhi us k bagier rehte they, but u all knew that she was dead, nupur ne ye jante hoye k ap sab zinda hain, ap se door rahi hai, drug dealing ki hai,and believe me its not that simple, ap sab ko shiyed abhi tak nupur ki suffering ka bhi andaza nahi ho paya hai..

M..nahi aisa nahi hai..

NK..dekhiye mayank, main ne bht cases lare hain, aur main ne sach bolne wali larkiyon ko khud peche hatey dekha hai, bcz un k husbands un ka sath nahi detey...bht sare couples aise hi sath case register karne atey hai, per cross questioning k doraan apni biwi ko akela chor k chale jate hain....kyunki k wo khud apni biwi pe shaq karne lagte hain..

M...nahi main aisa nahi karon ga

Naina smiled..

NK..dekhiye mayank mera purpose ap ko bilkul b pereshan karne ka nahi hai, i just want u to realise k agey kia hone walka hai..hum ye case kisi sachai ya proof ki base pe nahi,balke sirf ap k pyar ki base pe jeet sakte hain..

M...mtlb?

NK..mtlb ye k ap nupur se jitna pyar karte hain, ap us pe utna hi bharosa karen gey aur jitna bharosa ap karen gey wo utni hi himmat se court main sab chezon ko face kar paye gi...

M...i understnd..

NK...no u dont mayank, ab agr ap nupur se pyar karte hain tu hi wo ap k pas wapis a sakti haio...ye shiyed God ap ka test le raha hai k kiya ap nupur se pyar karte hain ya nahi..

Naina left and mayank standing there was really shocked, he never thought he would be put into such a big trail, HE LOVED NUPUR and that had no question but NOW HE HAD TO TRUST HER,!...and that was not difficult but that was something he never did. Thinking about his past life with nupur he thought that although they loved each other,but a slightest misuderstanding always led to fights, they had never been able to trust each other, may be this was the only thing lacking in thier relation and now it had to be included...TRUST!...BLIND TRUST!...

do comment!..😊


Edited by mehak03 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
Nice update...
I didn't like Naina ..creating confusion..
Anyways...excited about next part..
continue soon..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 11 ws awesum!!👏
thnx 4 d pm!🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fantastic (part 12)👍🏼

thnx 4 d pm!🤗

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