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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey guys..

another awesome MJHT episode which left us all hanging in the suspense furthur, Gosh all of this is getting on my nerves...😕,

anyways i had an idea, why not we continue the story of MAYUR, where it is left in today (13 aug 2010) episode, i mean we will right it in parts..e.g...i would post one part and the next member would continue from where i left and then so on..

we will have so many brains working on the same story and then we would end on the MAYUR REUNION..😍...

here is my part:PART 1

mayank is again sensing nupur close to him, he is looking everywhere with such desperate eyes, and nupur on the other hand moves towards the bus as it is ready to leave, she ran towards the bus when suddenly someone caught her hand!....that touch, that grip was not new, she knew who was it!.....she turned and saw the person she expected...MAYANK!!...

his eyes had tears of joy and satisfaction that at last he has found what he wanted, but suddenly he realised that nupur is trying to free her hand!

, the joy vanished and disbelisf took its place!!...he was staring at thier hands, where on one side mayank was holding it tightly and nupur wanted to free her hand, HE COULD NOT BELIEVE!...

he looked into her eyes and saw the same request, he let her hand loose and the moment thier hands were about to leave , he held her hand again and PULLED HER TOWARDS HIM!!....

M:...mujh se door bhag rahi ho??

N...mujhe jane do mayank!

M...nupur??..*fumbles*....jane don?...

N...haan!..jane do!

the eyes which were filled with joy, were now filled with anger...

M...kyun nupur?

N...mayank please...

mayank's eyes were now filled with disbelief and he said with full stern voice

M...thek hai jane don ga!...per mujhe mujhe jawab chiaye...tum mujhe se pyar nahi karti..

N...mayank main tumhre sare sawalon k jawab doon gi, abhi mujhe jane do!

M...nupur tum....

N... (cuts him) mayank mujhe tumhare sath guzare her lamhe ki kasam hai, main her sawal ka jawab doon gi!...abhi mujhe jane do...

mayank is shocked at his own luck, his love so close to him and begging him to leave her...he couldnt take it more , he let her free..
nupur walked backwards seeing mayank and then finally running away when mayank shouted..

M..IK MINUTE NUPUR..!

she turned....

so this was my part, i would love to read the next post which will start from when nupur turned as mayank called him, please guys do post, i have read awesome, OS here, we can also create a magical story...waiting for ur repiles😳

Edited by mehak03 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome
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relentless.

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Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesomee Mehak!! :) me too eagerly waiting 😍

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Its-My-Life

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Posted: 14 years ago

Mehak .. i just wish ..jaise tumne bola hain waise hee ho.

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Jiya

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Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

OMG ITS BRILLIANT!!!!
I HOPE THIS HAPPENS

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey thank u guys!..although 133 viwews and only 5 replies..😭, but its ok😊.
Well i wanted that we all will complete it, like someone else would have continued in her own style from where i left then so on, but nobdy continued so i will...

PART 2:

she turns and mayank walked towards her..

M...ik bar gunjan se tu mil lo nupur, jis ne dobara apni maa ko kho diya tha, samrat se mil lo jis ne is guilt main ten saal guzare hain k shaiyed us ki waja se tumhari jaan gayi...ik bar please..

nupur turned sideways and saw both of them, they were talking to some stranger with nupur's picture in thier hand, nupur again had tears in her eyes..

N..nahi!...gunajn mujhe jane nahi de gi, us main tum jitna hosla nahi hai mayank.., aur mayank wada karo k mere peche nahi aao gey..

mayank said in a total dry voice.

M...nahi aaon ga!...tumhari kasam..

she turned and ran towards the bus when she again turned and said

N...main wapis zarror aaon gi mayank...bharosa rakho..

M...tum pe bharosa hai nupur, kismat per nahi.

nupur smiled and said..

N...mujhe zinda dekhne k baad bhi kismat pe bharosa nahi hai?

mayank was speechless, and nupur ran away and the bus left.

Mayank didnt know how to react, should he be happy, sad, angry,or hopeful, he knew nothing !..
then gunjan came running from behind

G..jiju, di ka kuch pata chala?

the hope in gunjan's eyes weakened mayank, he couldnt answer her that she left., but he had to answer so

M...nupur nahi hai gunjan..

these words fell like lightening on gunjan.

G..nahi hai mtlb?

M...wo mera veham hi tha..

M...jiju wo form pe sign?..tum kiya keh rahe ho..

Gunjan's tears were making it more difficult fro mayank, and samrat on the other hand was straring mayank in total disbelief.

M....wo main us larki se mila hoon, us ka b naam nupur hai, aur hospital main us ne meri wife hone k is liye bataya that kyun ki doctors treatment shoro nai kar rahe they...*fumbles*..wo hamari nupur nai hai...

Gunjan was stunned, the thing happened which she feared, that despair again, she ran away, mayank couldnt even stop her and samrat was standing there still staring at mayank and then he said..

S..jhoot bol rahe ho?

M...haan!

S..kyun?

M..kyunki sach bolne ki himmat nai hai...

Mayank left and then it was samrat standing there alone..

S...nupur tum phir se chor k cahli gayi na?...pichli bar tumhe rok nai paya, per is bar tumhe jawab dena pare ga!..

He went to the bus record booth, checked the details and found that nupur travelleld in a bus going to delhi... he came out

S... tumhe kio haq nai hai un do logo ko rulane ka jo tum se apni jaan se b ziyada pyar karte hain, and most of all tumhe koi haq nai hai samrat shergill k friends ko rulane ka...main a raha hon nupur AND U WILL HAVE TO ANSWER!!...

hope u liked it guys and i would love if somebdy will contiue from here..:)

Edited by mehak03 - 14 years ago