ONE SHOT-MayUr in Morena...part 4 pg 8 - Page 5

Hi
nice update.
like mayur cute scene.
keep it up
faria

Originally posted by: hgrhr

wow shilpa..!! I'm loving this FF..mayu in morena...hehe...mazaa aa raha hai....

Loved that..."Par Mayank ko to khana banana aata hai..!!" Nupur ne toh pol khol hi di thi..!! haha...

woh bhains wala scene hilarious tha..!! I'm so glad ke Nupur nahi hasi Mayank par...!!

And romance in the bathroom...by god....hehe.....soo cute..!!
And shanta tai wahan aa gayi...aise dekh ke unhe shaq nahi hua..!! LOL...

awesome update yaar...do continue soon..!! Can't wait to read next part..!

😆😆 thnx so much....u r a sweetheart nidhi di....aur haan nups ke liye toh mast hai....khana banane ka no jhanjhat
😆😆

Originally posted by: Senny

hey awesome shilpa, i had no idea you write a ff on the forum too. wow mayur and morena, mast hai, it was really really cute and mayank falling down and the tai scene was cute to. tai means an aunt right shilpa?

hey shinella, my doll how have you been?

yes tai is aunt.....thnx....n this is my first ff on the forum

oh Shilpa.. I jus read part 1 until now... totally cool. only today saw ur FF. so jumped in to see watz the theme cooking here... and Morena aur Mayur ko dekhte hi i booked a seat in here to watch all the coming episodes... Hope u PM me... wud like to read all of them..

Originally posted by: little_dragon

oh Shilpa.. I jus read part 1 until now... totally cool. only today saw ur FF. so jumped in to see watz the theme cooking here... and Morena aur Mayur ko dekhte hi i booked a seat in here to watch all the coming episodes... Hope u PM me... wud like to read all of them..

Part 1: college mei nupz as usual rocking and her friend comes for inviting is soo sweet,... pity mayu felt left out and had to leave...

Part 2: Gambhir Welcome (jus like in Jab We Met Style). Too cute and making mayu feel the J factor was toooo gooooooood.

Part 3: Romance ke saat saat masti bhi.. perfectly wow combination. Again pity mayu.. Buffalo ki laat padi... hero banne gaya aur zero banke wapas aaya.. But nupur ki positivity hats off...

P.S. add me to ur PM list huni..

thnx so much yaar....ur aalysis was amazing.....glad u liked mah ff....will defo pm u....keep reading n commenting😉

its amazing shilpa loved reading i have a request dear plz pm when u continue ...... i just sinply loved ur ff it is a very new concept .........

Originally posted by: stuti123

its amazing shilpa loved reading i have a request dear plz pm when u continue ...... i just sinply loved ur ff it is a very new concept .........

thnx hun....will surely pm

RECAP:

CUT TO THE SCHOOL

Nups goes to meet her n gunji's old teachers....while sapna shows mayank around.

M- viswaas hi nahin hota ki nupur kabhi school mein thi....books toh uski sabse badi enemies hai...

S- woh toh hai....par agar doosron ki madad karne ki baat aaye toh nupur padhai se bhi dosti kar leti hai...

M-matlab??

PART 4

S –matlab yeh… ki yeh baat toh sach hai ki gunjan iss school ki best student thi aur yeh baat toh sab jaante hain….magar agar yeh school kisi ke wajah se chal raha tha toh woh sirf nupur…

M –tum saaf saaf kyun nahi batati??

S –saaf saaf baat yeh hai ki … morena mein toh nupur ke do hi kaam thhe….shyam ko saara time aas paas ke bachchon ke saath khelna aur aas paas ke gharon ke sheeshe todna aur subah unhi bachchon ki class lena…

M –class lena?

S – haan….nupur in sab bachchon ko padhaya karti thi aur woh bhi muft mein!

M –sach?? (mayank full of joy n pride)

S – haan….waise toh yeh bachche kabhi school nahin aate thhe….sabne inhein padhane ki bahut koshish kari par bachcon ne kisi ki bhi ek na suni….. par sirf nupur ne iss namumkin ko mumkin kar dikhaya….khel khel mein bachchon ko sab kuch sikha diya….

M –nupur sabki help karti hai yeh toh main jaanta thha….par woh itni achchi social-service karti thi yeh jaanke toh bahut khushi hui by god!

S(giggling) – by god???

M –haan….akhir sangat ka asar hai!

Both laugh.

SCENE CHANGE

After meeting the teachers nups goes on to meet the kids, nups n kids r playing blindfold all of them are in total masti ka mood…..nups doesn't realize that she is heading towards the end of a wall with sharp nail. she's can't see anything n sapna shouts- dekh ke nupur….wahan keel hai…

But before she can move away she bumps into sumone. She quickly removes her blindfold n its none other than mayank! once again he's right in time to save her….she's delighted to see him n both have an eye-lock.

M – tum bhi na bachchon mein bachchi ban jaati ho ….apna khayal tak nahin rakh paati…tum theek toh ho na nupur ?

N –main toh theek hun mayank par mujhe pata hai ki tumhein chot aayi hai….ab chupane ki koshish mat karna

Nups leads him into the school clinic, takes his hand in hers n cleans d wound with cotton.

N –kya zaroorat thi uss keel ke age khade hone ki?? Agar zyada lag jaati toh??

M (holds her so close that both can feel each other's breath)- zaroorat thi nupur….kyunki har problem, har dard ko tum tak pahunchne se pehle mujhse guzarna hoga

Nups is bowled over by his dialogue. Sapna, who had scene the whole scene in the garden n mayu's concern, arrives n d scene is interrupted. Mayur part quickly n r feelin awkward. Sapna changes topic….

S – nupur main chalti hun….mujhe shaadi ke liye kuch tayariyan karni hai

N – thik hai….mai tujhse kal sagai par milti hun.

SCENE CHANGE

Mayur r roaming in the streets of morena.

N –mayur dekho bhuttewala….chalo na khate hain

M –thik hai…..tum lo main baadmein le lunga

After a long process of selecting n bargaining, nups buys a bhutta.

N – morena ke bhutte ki toh baat hi alag hai by god!

M suddenly holds her hand, takes her bhutta from her hand and starts eating…

N – ek min mayank….yeh toh mera jhootha hai aur tum toh kabhi jhutha nahin…

M –haan par nupur se bhutta share karne ka maza hi kuch alag hai…

Nups blushing badly n flashbacks of the academic meet bhutta scene.

Nups changes topic- arey haan mayank….main toh bhul hi gayi…..mujhe tumhein apne boyfriend se milwana hai…

M – kya?? Mayu toh itna jealous ho gaya ki jaise job hi hoga usse chewing ki tarah chaba jayega...

N –arey bas mayank….apni imagination par thoda control rakho aur thoda sabr karo….jab tum mere boyfriend se miloge na toh apna saara gussa bhul jaoge by god!

SCENE CHANGE

Mayur are in front of a door and nups rings the doorbell.

M –yeh tum mujhe kahan le aayi ho nupur?? Yeh kiska ghar hai….

N –mere boyfriend ka aur kiska?? Milna nahin hai kya ?? (giggling)

M(very angry at nups) - yeh tumne kya boyfriend boyfriend laga rakha hai?? Aakhir tum dikhana kya chahti ho mujhe…

The door is opened by an old man.

Old man- honey?? Tum?? Wapas morena mein??

N –haan boyfriend (hugging the old man) kaise hain aap??

M –boyfriend?? Aap??

Old man- kyun main nupur ka boyfriend nahi ho sakta??

M –nahin….mera matlab

N –actually boyfriend aapke jaisa smart aur dashing man kabhi dekha nahin na iss sadu ne isliye vishwaas hi nahin kar paa raha hai. Kyun mayank??(angry young man luk of mayu's face instantly turns into a cute smile) aapke dashing luks ko dekh kar hi toh nupur bhushan pehli nazar mein flat ho gayi thi

All laugh n get inside. 3 old men and are sitting in the living room. Nups goes n greets each of them with a hi5! N they chat for sumtime. Then all of them start looking at mayu suspiciously….

The old lady- nupur tumhare saath yeh handsome kaun hai??

N –yeh mera….mera friend hai mayank

One of the men-toh tum khade kyun ho baitho na…

Toh mayank….tum kaam kya karte ho??

M – abhi toh main college mein hun….

N –aur college ka topper bhi

Nups had lied but it was of no use. The intelligent oldies were experienced enough to understand wat was cooking b/w mayur but now they wanted to make sure whether he was suitable for nups. Mayu sat n hence negan his interview. Saare logon ne 5 min mein uski history geography sab pooch dali.

M(thoughts)- main toh kabhi exams ke liye bhi itna nervous nahin hua….yeh log kyun mera test le rahe hain….

N(noticing the awkwardness on mayu's face)- aap sab kyun mayank ke peeche pade hain??

Oldies –peeche pade hain?? Hum sab toh yunhi tumhare dost se baat kar rahe thhe…

One of them- waise ladka tho achcha hai…..samajhdaar bhi lagta hai…..bas iske baal zara zyada khade khade se hain

A new voice- tea aur cookies ready hain…..sab aa jao…

Nups goes running toward the lady n hugs her…..kaisi hain aap aunty cool??

The lady- main tumse baat nahi kar rahi….mumbai jaa ke aunty ki itni bhi yaad nahin aayi ki ek phone kar lo

N –aayi thi naa….par mujhe pata tha ki aap kisike saath busy hongi..ahem ahem….toh mujhe phone karke kabaab mein haddi nahin banna tha…

Her anger vanishes n she's blushing- u naughty girl….

N- waise DD kahan hain??

The lady- as always….apne room ke kisi kisi corner mein sad face banake baitha hoga

N – hmmmm phir toh unka mood thik karke lana hoga…

Nups goes on to his room n mayu follows and stands at the door seeing all that happens next. An old man is sitting…looking really upset. Nupur goes to him n says something in his hear that makes him really happy….he goes out into the living room, looking really excited. Nups is still in the room, sitting on the bed…..mayu goes in n sits next to her.

M –nupur yeh log….

N – bahut khush lagte hain na….bahut filmy….bilkul lagey raho munnabhai ki tarah….par kaun inhe dekh kar bata sakta hai ki yeh kitne dukhi hain

M – tum inn sabko kabse jaanti ho??

N –kaafi salon se. gunjan roz yahan inke liye kabhi halwa ya kabhi Prasad laaya karti thi toh main bhi aa jaati thhi uske saath….phi dheere dheere yeh saare log apne se lagne lage.

Nups tells mayank about all of them…

Jinhein main boyfriend bulati hun woh Rajeev uncle hain. Yeh ghar unhi ka hai. Karib 10 saal pehle unke bete aur wife ki ek accident mein death ho gayi. Uske baad woh delhi mein bilkul akele ho gaye isliye yahan morena mein aa gaye. Rajeev uncle iss duniya mein bilkul akele….yeh sabhi log unki family. Mere liye toh who sirf mere bofriend hain aur main unki honey.

M- aur aunty cool??

N – woh hain Elizabeth aunty….is not so small family ki not so young member….unki beti Catherine London gayi thi padhne….whan par usne kisi angrez se shaadi kar li aur wahin settle ho gayi. Elizabeth aunty akeli ho gayin isliye who bhi yahan aa gayi

Aur jinko tumne abhi dekha who hain salim uncle. Unka beta unhen apne saath rakhna nahin chahta yeh soch ke who bahut dukhi rehte.....yahan par sab log unhein manane ki koshish karte hain par unke chehre par smile hai ki aati hi nahin….isliye humne unka naam DD rakha hai….delicate darling.

M –toh tumne unse kya kaha??

N –yehi ki aunty cool ne unke liye unki favorite chocolate cookies banaye hain….aur agar unhone jaldi se jaakar cookies khali aur soup bhi pee liya toh hum sab unke saath unka favorite game antakshari khelenge.

M –toh chalo??

N –kahan mayank??

M – antakshari khelne

N –yeh tum keh rahe ho??

M –kyun tumhein kya lagta hai main antakshari nahin khel sakta?? Phir toh tum aaj mayank ka yeh talent bhi dekh lo…

SCENE CHANGE

Everyone plays antakshari. Mayu sings "hum dil de chuke sanam" kuking straight in nups eyes. She's blushing badly. Everyone's having a great time. Once again nups has succeeded in bringing a smile on the face of everybody around her….that's her magic.

N –mujhe time ka toh pata hi nahin chala by god…bahut raat ho gayi hai mayank….humein chalna chahiye…..bauji bahut chinta kar rahe honge kaafi raat ho gayi hai

M –thik hai nupur….

Mayur bid farewell to all of them and return back to bhushan house. Mayu got to know a completely new side of nupur…..he realized how her jolly and fun-loving nature could make a difference to other's and bring happiness in a colourless life.

COMING UP- sapna's sangeet…..with all the wedding fun n mast plus a surprise revelation!

hey that was really cool