ONE SHOT-MayUr in Morena...part 4 pg 8

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This is my second piece of writing and the first OS on MayUr so please bear with me.

Excel College is off for the Summer break. It is the last day of college before vacations and the last class for the day.

Shukla sir- kyunki ye aap sab ke greeshma avkaash se purva ki antim kaksha hai toh main asha karta hun ki sabhi vidyarthi apni greesma avkash ko kaise vyateet karma hai iski yojana bataein

All students share thare plans for the vacations. Mayank n nupur r busy in their own worlds.

Discussing holidays is a waste of time for mayank n since this is supposed to be a history n not future plans class, he's busy with his history book. And as for nupur'.let's see what's on her mind'.

Nupur-Hey bhagwaan yeh aakhri paanch minute toh paanch sadiyon se bhi zyaada lambe lag rahe hain'..chuttiyon se pehle itni bechain toh main school mein bhi nahin hoti thi by god! Aur ho bhi kyun na, chuttiyan hongi tabhi toh main mayank ke saath zyada samay bitaa paaungi.

Mayank still lost in his book.

Nupur-by god'.main yahan iss sadu ke saath ke liye mari jaa rahu hun aur yeh hai ki kitaab se aise chipka hai jaise shahed par madhumakhhi.

The bell rings n the class is over. All the students rush out of the class like prisoners set free. Nupur n mayank r also walking n talking.

Nups- kitna mazza ayega na mayank'.ab humein college bhi nahin aana padega'.waise mayank tum itni der se kaunsi kitaab mein nazrein gadaye baithe the??

Mayu-main toh who'.he is unable to complete the sentence

N- sapnaaa?? Tu?? Yahan??? Yeh sach hai ya sapna??? They both hug like do bichade yaar

Sapna- arey sach hai pagli'.chacha ji ne mujhe bataya ki teri chutiyan ho rahi hain toh main seedha morena se yahan Mumbai chali aayi'..tere paas tujhe aur gunjan ko le jaane??

N-arey waah'.par mujhe to bauji ne bataya tha ki teri'

S-haan yaar'..meri shaadi ho rahi hai'..aur main America chali jaungi isiliye toh main yahan ayi hun apni sabse achchi saheli ko apni shaadi par bulane'tu aur gunjan chaloge na??

N-main toh zaroor aaungi'.par gunjan'.woh ek gaane ke contest ke liye bahar gayi hai

S-achcha thik hai'..main usse phone par baat karlungi

Nupur takes notice of mayank who was standing there unable to understand most of what had happened in front of him in the past few mins'.

N-arey main toh bhul hi gayi'.mayank ye hai sapna'.meri bachpan ki saheli'.yeh mere saath morena mein thi'.aur sapna ye hai mayank'.ye mera'.

M- main'main nupur ka friend hoon. Nupur tumhein sapna se bahut saari baat karni hogi'.toh main chalta hun'.main tumhein phone karunga aath baje(looking into her eyes n saying these simple lines with such a charm that makes her go gaga)

N- thik hai mayank'.he leaves but she can't get her eyes off

S-aise kya dekh rahi hai usse??

N- main who'kuch nahin yaar'.chod'.tu bata morena mein sab kaise hain'..

The two friends chat along the way'.on reaching home'.n go on n on n on'they talk abt their childhood, sapna's wedding, gunjan's singing, latest movies'.n every possible topic'...as promised mayu calls nups at 8 exact.

M-hello nupur??

N- hi mayank. Mayank mujhe kal morena jaana hoga. Sapna ki shaadi hai.

M-kya?? Kal?? Par aise kaise??? Gunjan bhi nahin hai....akele ??

N- haan mayank....mera jaana bahut zaroori hai

M-thik hai nupur....toh main bhi chalunga tumhare saath

N-kya ? sach ?? (she's on top of d world as its ek teer se do nishaane for her....time with mayu and time in morena)

M-haan nupur'.main tumhein akele nahin jaane de sakta

N- par tumhein toh kisi exam ke liye

M-meri life mein tumse imp aur kuch nahin hai...

Those words have the power to make NUPUR BHUSHAN speechless'.

M 'think hai nupur'.toh kal milte hain'.bye

N 'bye

S 'kiska phone tha??

N-mayank'kal who bhi aa raha hai humare saath morena'.


next part soon...

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

shilpa i lovedddddddddd ittttttttttttttttt🤗

i alwys want that...............mayu will go morenya...as soon as possibleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....................

waiting for the updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

thnxxxxxxxxxxxx a ton....billionz n millionz nd zillionz tym

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Originally posted by: osprisshowMOU

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

shilpa i lovedddddddddd ittttttttttttttttt🤗

i alwys want that...............mayu will go morenya...as soon as possibleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....................

waiting for the updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

thnxxxxxxxxxxxx a ton....billionz n millionz nd zillionz tym


omg....thnx a lot
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow..shilpa..mayu going to morena....!
I'm looking forward to this...!
do continue soon...and please PM me..!
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Originally posted by: hgrhr

wow..shilpa..mayu going to morena....!

I'm looking forward to this...!
do continue soon...and please PM me..!


thnx...will defo pm
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shilpuuuuuuuuuu............superbbbbbbbbbbbbb awesomeeeeeeeeeee one-shot sweety......lovd it vry vry much.........plzzzzzzz continue sooooooon n pm me abt it........😃
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Imagine Muskaan Mehani or DR.Sapna Shah of Dill Mill Gayye as Sapna.

Part 2

Next morning mayu, nups n sapna, all 3 of them catch d first bus to morena. On the way: flashbacks of previous adventures of MayUr on a bus journey…lol

On the bus stand there is a car waiting for them….its decorated with flowers n leaves n all. Mayu finds it weird but doesn't bother to ask.

N- by god….vishwaas hi nahi ho raha hai ki mai morena pahunch ne wali hun….yahaan kit toh hawa hi kuch aur hai…

WELCOME TO MORENA says the board in front of their eyes as they get out of the car…..but the board was the sole non-living thing in sight in sea of heads.

M-yeh kya ho raha hai yahan?? Lagta hai koi accident hua hai….itne sare log??? Par ye toh khush lag rahein hai….koi festival hai kya??

S- morena ki jaan pure saath mahine baad lauti hai….isse zyaada bada tyohaar toh koi ho hi nahin sakta

What happened next was a never seen or heard before scene for mayank. ppl…or rather guys…came like swarms of flies to nupur….in minutes she was flooded with flowers, gifts, sweets, cards, bouquets, and what not….

Mayu had not seen such a grand welcome even of a celebrity

S- nupur ke liye toh ye koi nayi baat nahin hai….par aaj line zara zyada lambi hai

Random guy- nupur ji….aap nahin janti ki aapke jane ke baad humari life se toh khushi hi chali gayi….jahan bhi jate the humein aap hi nazar aati thi

The surprise on mayu's face soon turning green with jealousy n red with rage…nups trying her best to avoid the crowd but can't get out

S- arey aap log nupur ko uske gharwalon se bhi nahin milne denge kya??? Itni door se aaap sab ki nupur thak kar aayi hai….usse yahin khada rakhenge kya??

Crowd makes way for nups n she runs to her dad….n touches his feet

N-bauji…..kaise hain aap??? Aap thik toh hhain na?? aap ne mujhe aur gunjan ko zyaada yaad toh nahin kiya?? Aap time par doctor ke paas toh gaye na?? time par khana aur dawaiyan toh khaate the na?? boliye na??

B-arey bas bas meri rajdhani….tu mujhe bolne ka mauka degi toh main bolunga na….aate hi ek saans mein itne sawal?? Aakar bauji ke gale bhi nahi lagegi ??

Mayu gives a "nups will be nups" kinda smile.

N(crying n laughing at d same time)-bauji….

Nupur hugs her dad n both father-daughter get teary-eyed

Bauji looks at mayank

N- bauji yeh mera bahut achha dost hai…mayank….mumbai mein isne meri bahut madad ki hai

Mayu touches his feet.

B –jeete raho beta.

Mayank hears acompletely new voice….n a woman comes there.

Shanta tai-ab bahar hi khade khade baap-beti saari baatein kar loge ya andar bhi aaoge…

Nupur hugs shanta tai-the lady who never let her realize that her mother was not with her…

Sh -arey??tai ab tak yaad hain?? Mujhe toh laga tha ki Mumbai jaa kar toh raajkumar mil jayega phir tai ki yaad kahan ayegi…

A blushing luk on mayu's face on hearing the word raajkumar .

N – bas tai…ab rulaogi kya?? Aur waise bhi yeh rone-dhone ka department toh bauji aur gunjan ka hai kyunki humara funda ek hi hai….jiyo zindagi jee bhar ke kyunki

Shanta tai, nupur, n sapna in chorus- KAL HO NA HO

B-lo inka toh aate hi sharukh- sharukh shuru ha gaya….aao beta mayank hum andar chalet hain….yeh log toh ab shuru hue hain toh ab kuch ghanton tak ghar mein shanty milna namumkin hi samjho

All of them get in.

Coming up- mayank becomes aware of hidden talents of nupur…..he understands her n develops respect for her. Also some romantic scenes.

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Originally posted by: nikki028

shilpuuuuuuuuuu............superbbbbbbbbbbbbb awesomeeeeeeeeeee one-shot sweety......lovd it vry vry much.........plzzzzzzz continue sooooooon n pm me abt it........😃


thnx a lot nikki jaan
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowwwwwww...........'grand welcome' huh?????????aisa hi honi chahiye thi.....i srsly want this upda8 to b in serial also..........srsly......................gr8 update dear....plzzzzz continue soon.....
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Loved it . . . continue soon! Please PM me. 😊

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