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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice part dear
Continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: robinblue91

hey
shilpa...!!
uff..!! itz too gud..!!
u r really amazing...
just lubed every bit ov it..!!
cant wait or next part..
plsh PM me ven u update...!!

LUB
RABBIA


thnx so much rabia di...will defo pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@shilpu
i know its like ageeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssss
kaisi ho..kahaan ho yaar
10th kaisa chal raha hai???????/
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 3

Shanta tai- chalo teenon bachche log fatafat haath dho ke aao'khaana taiyaar hai (still in the view that 3 little girls will come in their school dresses "tai tai jaldi khana do bahut bhuk lagi hai")

SCENE CHANGE

Mayank applying all logic n calculations to efficiently to operate the hand pump in the verandah without realizing that he is washing his clothes along with his hands and is interrupted by nupur's loud giggle.

N- by god mayank! Haathon ke saath saath tumne apne kapdon ko bhi dho dala'.chalo achcha hai'.tai ko dhone ke liye ek jodi kapde toh kam hue

M- bahut hansi aa rahi hai na ?

N- aur nahi toh kya ?? mayank jab tumhe handpump chalana nahi aata toh mujhe bula liya hota.....dimaag ke ghode daudane ki kya zaroorat thi ?? ab ruko main aati hun

Nups cums to help mayu n he throws water on her

M 'ab main toh bheeg hi chukka hunt oh tumhein bhi geela hona padega'.yaad hai pichli baar beach par tumne mujhe kaise bhigaya tha?? Uska badalaa baaki hai'.

N 'nahin nahin'.mayank'..(soon the verandah is echoing with sounds of laughter n screams)

Washing hands turns into a playful waterfight n continues till both of them are drenched n starving'.

CUT TO LUNCH TABLE

Sapna-Nupur in unison- Tai tai jaldi khana laao bahut bhuk lagi hai (not knowing the importance of this one line in their tai's life)

Sh 'itni badi ho gayi hain par zara sabar nahin'.laati hun

All of them enjoying the poori, sabzi n raita. Nupur telling stories about excel college. Though all of them find it odd but nupur talking with her mouthful is new, neither for nupur and nor for anyone present there.

M- ab college ki sari stories khana khate hue hi suna digi kya nupur'

N- oh'sorry mayank'..main baadme bolungi

Bauji(with a wide grin)- pehli baar maine dekha hai ki kisi ne nupur ko iss tarah toka aur uss par barasne ki bajaye nupur ne apni galati maani. Mujhe bahut khushi hai nupur beta ki tumhein aisa sachcha dost mila hai jo tumhari galatiyan sudhaar sake warna humari baat toh ye shaitan sunti hi nahi thi.

Smile on MayUr's face'.afteall sasurji se appreciation koi choti baat nahin lol.

Everyone finishes lunch n its time for kheer'


N- waah tai kya kheer banayi hai aapne'.mann toh karta hai aapke hathon ko chum lun

Sh-chal badmaash

N-kyuuun?? Aapke haathon mein jaadu nahin hai kya??

Sh-shaitan kahin ki'..ab saari zindagi tai ki hi tareef karegi ya kabhi kuch pakane ke liye khud bhi rasoi mein kadam rakhegi'..

N-uski koi zaroorat nahin kyunki mayank ko toh khana banana aata hai

Strange luks on each face'.n nups takes notice of mayank's awkwardness

N 'mera matlab hai ki aajkal toh ladke ladkiyon se zyaada achcha khana banate hain toh mujhe fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahin

S –magar nupur….teri raajkumar ki khoobiyon waali list mein khana pakaana toh tha hi nahin…ye nayi entry hai kya….ya phir kahin tujhe koi mil??

N –sapna tu bhi na….jab dekho yeh raaj kumar ka topic lekar baith jaati hai

S (thoughts)– kya?? Main?? Par ye toh humesha khud hi….akhir ho kya gaya hai is ladki ko

Sh-arey nupur main toh batana hi bhul gayi…who gunjan ki teacher hain na….kya naam tha

N –lekha ma'am

Sh- haan woh tujhe aur gunjan ko yaad kar rahi thi….gunjan toh hai nahin tu hu chali jaana

N –thik hai tai

SCENE CHANGE

Nups and sapna are showing mayank the town…. they encounter some lads milking a buffalo lol

M – yeh kya kar rahe hain?? Animals ko aise treat kiya jaata hai kya??

One of the boys- aap shehri logon ko kya maloom bhains ka doodh kaise nikala jaata hai..

M – aisa kya hai ismein….itna simple sa toh algorithm hai

Another guy- algr algo?? Kya?? Arey nupur ji, kahan se le aayi inhein?? Angrez chale gaye aur inhein chod gaye yahan…

S – nupur chal yahan se chalte hain

Another guy- chale kahan?? Hum bhi toh dekhein Mumbai walon mein kitna dum hai

Mayank goes to milk the bhains lol….nups trying to stop him but he doesn't

N(thoughts)- by god ye mayank bhi na!! kaise samjhaun ki isse kitaabon mein hi rehna chahiye….yeh iski bas ki baat nahin hai….sadu kahin ka

Mayu is able to do the milking…it's a gud start n every one is surprised but suddenly the bhains gets angry…phir kyat tha….mayu ko padi ek laath aur seedha jaa gira bhuse ke dher mein

All the guys are laughin n so is sapna…

N – in a very angry tone- tum sab hans kyun rahe ho?? Koi girega toh tum hansoge….aur sapna tub hi….tujhe toh pata hai na ki mayank ne yeh sab pehle kabhi nahi kiya….ek doodh nahi nikaal paya toh kya?? Baki saare kaam hum sab se achcha karta hai mayank…pata nahin morena waalon ki sari tameez kahan gayi(nups doesn't realize how much this line hurts

Mayu is seein all dis frm da bhoose ka dher. He's touched by the way nups defended him. Nups goes to him.

N – brushing off the bhoosa frm mayu's clothes- utho mayank…maine mana kiya than a tumhein….agar kahin lag jaati toh

M – toh woh chot bahut special hoti….kyunki TUM us par first aid karti

N –blushing

One of d boys interruptin d scene- humein maaf kar do mayank ji….aap pehli baar morena aaye ho….humein aisa nahin karma chahiye tha aapke saath

M –its okay

Another – humse galati ho gayi nupur….tera dost toh humara bhi dost hua…

N – aur nahin toh kya….ab chalo der aae drust aae…aage se dhyan rakhna….ab main koi lekha ma'm thodi hun jo tum sab ko punishment dungi

Everyone laughs.

S –chalo ab ghar chalte hain….chachaji chinta kar rahe honge kit u itni der se kahan hai

The trio leaves

CUT TO BHUSHAN HOUSE

N –mayank tum jaa kar naha lo….dekho kitne gande ho gaye ho

M –thik hai….

Nahethe nahathe mayu realizes ki pani nahin aa raha…..he wraps a towel n goes out to the room but finds nobody…..he goes back to the bathroom n forgets to bolt….nupur cums there….he is in a corner n nups can't see him….she gets in slips on the soap n is about to fall when our MAN cums there n catches his lady right in time.

Mayu holding nups by the waist….both lost in each other's eyes....long staring session

Mayu stretches his right hand n brings his index finger near her lips….she's too shy now….

M –woh…saabun laga tha…

N –oh….

Nupuuuurrr….school nahin jaana kya …..a voice interrupts the romance n mayor part.

Shanta Tai arrives-tum log yahan kya kar rahe ho??….nups is faar too nervous….far too shy to say anything….she's all red!! Lol

M –aunty woh...…

T –beta tum chaho toh mujhe tai keh sakte ho

M – tai who paani khatam ho gaya that oh isliye nupur…

T –achcha….maine toh pehle hi kaha tha nupur se zyaada paani rakhne ko par yeh ladki sune tabna

M –smiles n nups gives "haan haan padwalo mujhe daant" kinda look.

T –achcha ab tum dono lekha ma'am se mil aao….aur kal sapna ki sagai aur sangeet hai….toh aate hue kuch samaan laana ho toh le aana.


CUT TO THE SCHOOL


Nups goes to meet her n gunji's old teachers....while sapna shows mayank around.


M- viswaas hi nahin hota ki nupur kabhi school mein thi....books toh uski sabse badi enemies hai...


S- woh toh hai....par agar doosron ki madad karne ki baat aaye toh nupur padhai se bhi dosti kar leti hai...


M-matlab??




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Edited by Shilpa.Agarwal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shinella

@shilpu
i know its like ageeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssss
kaisi ho..kahaan ho yaar
10th kaisa chal raha hai???????/


i'm gud....10th is goin fine....jus that IF ke liye time nahin milta....tu bata shinzi....howz u
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
shlipa..!!
wow... luved it..!!
i juust luved nupur babbling...
so sweet..!!
keep it up..!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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me....toh thikthak yaar
mayuring hi karti hun..
waise the 3rd part is aweeeeesome yaar
i wish kabhui to mayank sach mein show me morena jaaye
yaar ab to mayank ko aur jealous dikhana plzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: robinblue91

hey
shlipa..!!
wow... luved it..!!
i juust luved nupur babbling...
so sweet..!!
keep it up..!!


thnx a lot rabbia di
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shinella

me....toh thikthak yaar
mayuring hi karti hun..
waise the 3rd part is aweeeeesome yaar
i wish kabhui to mayank sach mein show me morena jaaye
yaar ab to mayank ko aur jealous dikhana plzzzzzzzz


even i wish he goes to morena....i'll try to show him jealous...thnx yaar
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Posted: 16 years ago
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shilpuuuu........once again rockin update dear........superbbbbbbb.......my fav most part toh woh eyelock session(bathroom) tha ...........thnxxxxxxx a special ton for tht scene alone........😳😳.....

plzzz continueeee soooooooon dear....😃😃

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