Os:A day in ishveers life turned Ss..updated part 6*page 15 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Hi Afrah!

This was very good! Who told you this was not fine? You really penned it down well <3

I loved the bedroom scene where he makes her sleep. Heye! Nazar na lag jay! :D

Update the next part soon <3

AV


Hey dear,
Happy that u liked it, arre no1 told anything but I was little worried about this part not to make boring 😆😆

Nazar tou serial ko lagi hai😭😭 but still have to stay strong,
Hope to see such scenes on screen too 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Afrah 😃😃

Amazing update dear ,loved it so much👏👏
the way he made her sleep and the granny ,grandson convo was so sweet ,loved it 😳😳
Do continue soon 😛


Glad😃
Do give your suggestions also like what kind of scenes should I add more 😊.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Wonderful epi ...n ishveers happy family
..how cute ... 👏


Tnx a ton dear zenab 😊, hope to see this cute family on screen too😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnYa_ArMan


Glad😃
Do give your suggestions also like what kind of scenes should I add more 😊.

it seems perfect ,I love ur own style re ,u have unique way of story telling ,which I love the most ,it is perfect as per me😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

it seems perfect ,I love ur own style re ,u have unique way of story telling ,which I love the most ,it is perfect as per me😳😳


Awww 😳 thats soo sweeet of u, but don't raise me up this much warna I will be out of this world hahhah...😆😉
Thanks for the compliment.❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey its really lovely darling awesooome...anya/... yo r doin a great job keep updated dear lots and lots of hug to you👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Hey guys I know I am updating after ages, I am really sorry but finally I posted, sorry I couldn't edit it well because I am posting from my mob, I hope you guys remember the previous part so that you guys can connect well again with the story.



P4

So the next morning,
Ranveer wakes up early before Ishaani...as usual
(Since ishaani is pregnant she sleeps a lot more)
Ranveer leaves from his warmth of blanket and stretched towards the direction of window, the sunlight was striking vibrantly from the sides of the curtains closed window .. to take a look outside.

Ohh..! its already very bright, I am late today I guess but anyways I was waiting for morning, ahhh.. I barely even got time sleep, he says himself and goes to freshen up making sure not to make any single noise to disturb his wife.

Comes out of the washroom, wiping his wet hair, his eyes falls on Ishaani still sleeping resting hands on her bump,looking angelic, Ranveer sits near her and looks adoringly at her,n he is lost in her beauty, ' how peacefully shes sleeping,I hope this moment just het paused here..
she may be in pain...Happy or sad.. ishani has always kept us first before her without asking anything back,I know she had suffered a lot for me,for our love, it wasn't easy to have you in my life,destiny has always teared us apart,but you are my happiness, without you I am nothing, To me you will always be more than I deserve, you are my queen, you have given me a prince and a princess soon,my only desire is to make you happy and to make sure you stay happy.

Ishani wakes up by the sunlight striking her eyelids, she finds ranveer lost in thoughts infront of her.

Ishaani: Goodmorning love,what are you doing?aise kya dekh rahe the??

Ranveer: kuch nahi bas tumhe dekh raha tha meri jaan.
How are you feeling now?

Ishaani wakes up from the bed while saying I am fi..fine, noticing a change in their bedroom, surprised to see that a corner of the room is decorated with pink and white baloons,a baby cradle,baby clothes,baby shoes every thing in pink and white girlie things.

Ranveer says,'here is a rose for my beautiful queen'.

Ishaani: how lovely my dear hubby,when did you do all this ranveer? How come I did not even know? I was in this deep sleep?

Asks Ishani in a surprised tone looking towards ranveer who is standing and smiling at her.

Ranveer: while you were having beauty sleep.

Ishaani: b..but when did you get this all??

Ranveer: RV! Rv aisa hi hai, can do anything any time.(smiles)

Ranveer gets closer to her,
His smell,his wet hair, his warm breath, the smell in it drives her crazy

'If love had a face then its you,
Every little thing you do,
They care you show,
Your touch makes me feel like a woman,
Takes me beyond feeling human,
When you touch me,
Your smell of you drives me crazy,
It makes me not want to leave you,
No, everything is you'


They hear the door open and close,they look in the direction,
Shaveer enters the room..

Ishaani: oh! My baby...come here,come to mumma..

Ishaani opens her arms for her son,he runs and hugs his mom wrapping his arms around her waist, which barely even reach her waist cause of the baby bump.

Shaveer: Mummmaa.. I also have bought something for you..

Ishaani: Really?for me?? what is it my jaan.

Shaveer: This.

Ishaani: Oh! Its a card.

Shaveer: yesh, I made a card for you and baby,open and see..

Ishaani: ohk, lemme see...oh wow! You have made a drawing also.

Shaveer: yesh, this is papa, me and you with the baby.

Ishaani: awww! my baby, this is so cute.

she hugs him back again, breaking the hug, Shaveer puts his little hands on her baby bump, and says, hi baby, this is your big bro, how are you today?are you fine? Can you listen to me?? He moves his hands back in shock, Mumma something just hit my hand.

Shaveer gets scared..

Ranveer: shaveer, there is nothing to be scared..the baby must have been kicking r8 Ishaani??

Ishaani smiles and says yes.

Ranveer holds Shaveer's hands and press it again, stroking gently on her belly.

Ishaani: the baby understood that you are his bro my baby,so he kicked for you.
Ranveer the baby is moving, can you feel that?

Ranveer: Yes! Its amazing, our sweet little baby is moving I can feel that.
They were all swept away in emotions..

The morning passes and its late afternoon already...

The door bell rings, a person from Ranveers office gives a parcel to Ishaani.

A white box with red ribbon tied beautifully around it with a bow.
She unwraps the box and finds a beautiful royal blue colored maxi gown and a note written with Love for my Love.

*beep* *beep*

A message from Ranveer.

'I hope you liked the gift..'

Ishani replys back:
Yes! ofcourse, but kisliye?

Ranveer:
Meri jaan,kyu! kya! kisliye! Don't ask all these, will come by 6, be ready.



Edited by AnYa_ArMan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Awesome updates!your ff is very sweet and romantic.but plz dont take this much time to update.waiting for next and thanx for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Afrah,,
Today only I came know your OS...
Lovely one dear it was beyond amazing
You have done a great job
all were ishveer moments of being Parents

Shaveer wow really a cute son they have
He is so cute in your OS
Loved all the 4 parts

you simply made me speechless lovely os dear keep updating
Nice one👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Hi!!!!
Its amazing...this is the first time I am reading your fiction and its absolutely mind blowing 👏

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