Os:A day in ishveers life turned Ss..updated part 6*page 15 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnYa_ArMan


Oh I totally forgot to PM u.. I thought soo but I got into something n mere dimag se nikal gaya...as u were read my os 1st I wanted u read the p2 aslo first...so sorry😭

Really was it that nyc??😳😳

Its okey , I understand dearieEmbarrassedEmbarrassed Dont say sorry we are friends naEmbarrassed
It was shoo sweet, verry good job dearieDay Dreaming👏⭐️👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
hey sweety ,,, its really awesomme darl keep update y dont the show d writers are not thinkling like you... kudos to u darl betwn very nice name shaveer
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Hii...its wonderful keep writing I am waiting for net update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Hi dear nice chap. ishveer son so cute and naughty.i alwaye want to see ishveer kid in the show. Keep writing & update soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So here is another one again... I am really nervous about this part because it took me really a loads of effort to put my thoughts into words.. Hope U all will like it..
P3


After the lunch, Ishaani in her bedroom,calls ranveer:
Ishani: hey baby,what are U doing? Still busy?
Ranveer: Yes,lil busy still..what is my baby and baby's mumma doing?
Ishani: nothing getting bored with out you.
Did you check out the pictures which I did send you?
Dekhli apne bete ki harkat?
Ranveer: Haan..haan dekhli, (laughs)...
He can get as mechivious as he can,No worries,no one can say anything to him not even his mumma,Will get the whole world for him,Afterall he is the Ranveer Vaghela's son.
Ishaani: Haan, you will take his side only.When are you returning home??Missing you.
Ranveer: will return as soon as I will be free.Bye love you...muaaah.
Ishaani: Love u too,bye.

In the hall.
Granny and grandson are sitting.

Ishani comes down, Shaveer goes running to her...
Ishani: awww meraa baby.
Shaveer: Mumma its getting so boring now, 'I want to go out'.
Amba: Haan Ishani,I also wanted to get some things.
Lets go for shopping, Shaveer ki outing bhi ho jaayegi.
Ishani: Shopping? Shaveer ko leke?
Ohh maa jaan khajaye ga ye meri.
Pura mall sir pe utha lega.
Amba: 'arre' I am there na, don't worry..when will ranveer be back?
Ishani: Mmm..Don't know,hes still busy.
Amba: Ok then, lets leave meanwhile Ranveer also be back.

At shopping mall, they shop,they go to the fun zone.. play rides, games and have fun...

On the way back to home they stop by a chaat stall, Amba and Ishaani are busy enjoying chaat,Shaveer is running and jumping all-over,sees something attractive and runs towards it, Ishaani turns here and there but he's nowhere to be seen.


Amba and Ishaani starts to panic and scream shaveer...shaveer, they look evrywhere, but no sign of him.
Ishani starts crying, feeling horrendous,chest pains,feeling horrible with sharp pain in her abdomen...she faints
****
Ranveer was passing by the road shocked to find shaveer standing and crying with some unknown lady stops the car, runs to his little boy picks him up hugs him tightly, kisses him... How did u reach here? where's mumma?? He asks feeling terrible..Shaveer is just crying on his shoulder without any response,He calls out for ishani...

****
Ishani's fone rings,Amba receives tells him
everything n asks him to rush to the scene.
****

Ishani gains conscious on hospitals bed, Ranveer standing facing her,holding her hand and the other on her head. She rolls her eyes looking the room ,Ranveer understands shes looking for her son,Ranveer says hes absolutely fine,waiting out of the room with Maa.

Doctor comes for an ultrasound, Gels her abdomen, begins to run the instrument on Ishanis's belly.
The doctor says, "see the baby, its fine", You can hear its heartbeat,it perfectly sounds healthy,No need to worry ishani.

Ranveer and Ishaani breaths a sigh of relief, He strokes and kisses her forehead.Amba comes in with Shaveer.

'Mmumma' cries shaveer, and opens his arms for her to pull him for hug,Ishaani hugs him, caressing his head says ' Shhh..my baby' don't cry, Mumma is it paining?? He asks in a worried tone. If my Shaveer is fine then mumma is also fine she replies.Shaveer holds his little palms on Ishani's stomach and asks the baby if he is also fine, everyone smiles at this
scene.

Ranveer asks Amba to leave for home as Ishaani will take a while to get strong enough to leave from the hospital's bed. Ishani rests for sometime.

The sun is yet to shine,the moon is still glowing, they return home before sunrise.

Ranveer holds up ishani in his arms carries her to their bedroom, lays her on the bed,puts on the blanket to cover her.Ranveer begins to turn.

She grabs his hands,he turns back anxiously looking at her, ishani sits up and asks him to hug her tightly.Ranveer feels the warm tears roll down his shoulder,He breaks the hug, consoles ishani by cupping her face, Don't cry Jaan, everything is alright, Our baby is perfectly fine, nothing has happened, Nor will I let anything happen to my dear wife and kids.

Ishani pulls ranveer back to hug saying she got really scared for the unborn baby and also for shaveer , felt like the worst mother in the whole world..Ranveer press his fingers on Ishanis lips, 'ssshhh' don't say that ever again, you are a best mother already my love,its perfectly allright, Don't be stressed out, It is not good for you, don't worry about shaveer also, I know he gives you hard time being naughty, but me and Maa are there to look after him him.Let the new baby come to this world,andsee how Shaveer will feel responsible being big bro, he will even help you with taking care of baby...

Ishani replys, being pregnant is really tough,its making me more and more uncomfortable Ranveer, my back aches badly.
Ranveer rubs her back for awhile cudding her.

He helps her lay back, kiss her knuckles,gently strokes her forehead, ' Go to sleep sweetheart'.

He sits beside her until she fells asleep.

He begins to move again, she wakes up.

'You aren't sleeping yet?'.

How will I sleep ranveer, your baby is punching and kicking me inside.Ranveer holds his hands lovingly on her baby bump, 'baby enough now, your mumma is really tired, go back to sleep, let ur mumma also rest my baccha'..


Advance Sorry if too long and boring, fingers crossed 😕.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Hey afrah!! 😃

It was really nice!!! 😳

Shaveer is such a naughty boy! 😆 😆

Ranveer still busy in workwork 😭 loved the way how he keeps tabs on shaveer through ishani. Ishani is now missing him a lot!poor she!

Thank goodness! Amba went along with her. Ranveer is so caring! As always! 😳 😳

Good job! And we want it to be as long as it can get. 😆 😆 so no issues with that. 😃 😃

Now relax dear and write next one!

Loads of love
Vaishali
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Hi Afrah!

This was very good! Who told you this was not fine? You really penned it down well <3

I loved the bedroom scene where he makes her sleep. Heye! Nazar na lag jay! :D

Update the next part soon <3

AV
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Wonderful epi ...n ishveers happy family
..how cute ... 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: VC288

Hey afrah!! 😃

It was really nice!!! 😳

Shaveer is such a naughty boy! 😆 😆

Ranveer still busy in workwork 😭 loved the way how he keeps tabs on shaveer through ishani. Ishani is now missing him a lot!poor she!

Thank goodness! Amba went along with her. Ranveer is so caring! As always! 😳 😳


Good job! And we want it to be as long as it can get. 😆 😆 so no issues with that. 😃 😃

Now relax dear and write next one!

Loads of love
Vaishali


Wuohooo 😉 I was blushing throughout reading ua comment😳
Always excited about who reviews first, yeh ranveer is bzy expanding business(surprise comming up)😉
Tnx for ua lovley comment ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Afrah 😃😃
Amazing update dear ,loved it so much👏👏
the way he made her sleep and the granny ,grandson convo was so sweet ,loved it 😳😳
Do continue soon 😛

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