Os:A day in ishveers life turned Ss..updated part 6*page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys, most of u dont noe me here,mostly silent reader here.I am so obsessed with ishveer that they are all over my mind day and night 😉.
So here is my first ever OS inspired by OS:pure bliss thanks to the writer😛.sorry for any typos.Hope u all will love it.


As its early in the morning,the beautiful young pale beam of sunlight passes through the window curtains of their bedroom.
Ranveer wakes up from Shaveer's kicks in his sleep (Shaveer,ishveers 4 yrs old son,shaveer coz it have ishani n ranveer in it)as he was moving right to left as in moving from his mumma's to his dad's side,throwing his little arm and leg over ranveer.This breaks ranveers sleep.
He opens his eyes to see his 2 special ones sleeping peacefully next to him,ranveer carefully turns to ishaani making sure not to disturb his lil Shaveer's sleep.
He moves slowly close to ishaani,he slips his arms around her and rubs his face against hers soft pink cheeks he croons "Good morning jaan" hearing this ishaani smiles exquisitely and wraps her warm arms around her son and hubby.
Ranveer kisses & smooches ishani's lips & tries to get naughty by nibbling her ear and placing wet kisses on her neck.Ishaani with shyness struggling to open her eyes says "kya kar rahe ho Ranveer! U will wake up shaveer now"(whos sleeping still in middle of them).
Ranveer then wakes up and get freshn up to go for his regular morning jog,comes out from the washroom sees ishani still sleeping,he goes to her presses his lips on her forehead and holding her 8 months pregnant belly and says I am leaving for walk wakeup until then, she kisses him back n says OK baby.
She freshens up& wears a white sheer saare with red embroidery on it perfectly fitting her beautiful baby bump.She opens the curtains and windows breaths deeply the fresh air and says "What a beautiful morning".
She goes to her son saying " mela baby" shaveer wakeup beta,he moves from side to side,she tickles him and laughs ,he sits up rubbing his eyes hugs saying mummaaa...she takes him to washroom gives him a warm bath,makes him to stand on bed until then ranveer comes,holds ishani and pregnant belly from the back lovingly.
'Aagye tum' she says; go and have a quick shower until i make him to wear clothes.Ranveer comes from d shower wearing black jeans only and towel on his shoulder. Shaveer is running here and there in the room,Ishaani comes to ranveer takes the towel and pats the water gently on his bare chest and shoulders,ranveer come closer takes her hands and places it on his heart to make her feel his heartbeat and says softly in her ears u have become even more hotter,beautiful and
radiant with the baby bump.
She laughs and move to the cupboard to take Ranveers black tshirt and white jacket.Ranveer wear the tshirt and says lets go down.Shaveer runs first to the stairs, Ishaani says slow down beta u will fell,Ishaanis leg slips trying to get hold of shaveer,Ranveer holds her protectively from back.
Ishaani kya kar rahi ho,gir jaati tou? Dhyan rakha karo apna.
She says 'jab tum saath ho tou mai kaise girti'.Ishaani be serious tumne meri jaan nikaaldi
thi abhi,Ok baby I will be more careful next time,abhi chale niche? says Ishani.He lovingly holds her n brings her downstairs.
Ranveer sits in the hall with his office files,Ishaani brings Shaveer's glass of milk, seeing this shaveer runs here and there saying nahi mumma mujhe nahi pina,Ishani gets tired running back of shaveer,Ishaani goes to Ranveer,holding her hand on her waist n says "uff mujhse nahi hota is ladke ko sambhalna".Ranveer says leave him I will make sure he drinks his milk.Ok I will get ur breakfast until then says ishaani...


Will come up with more updates if u all want it😛 damn really nervous😕😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey🤗🤗
Told you there is no reason to be nervouse, because you write shoo beautiful and there is such an innoncense , charm and beauty with what you write that I am like this

Okey can IshVeer get cuter 😳😳 Ranveer is just such a sweet hubby and ishu is no less than cute and caring😃😃 And there son is shoo cute , loved there family and the romance you showed between IshVeer👏☺️☺️

You wrote so beautiful , damn you all are so great writers⭐️⭐️ One thing sweetie , do have sectiones it makes it cleaner😊😊

Do continue , cant wait to read more from you🤗🤗 Also thanks for mentioning me & my OS😉😉 I loved it that I can be to help and be an inspiration😳😳 Hugs🤗🤗

With love & best wishes
MM❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsmmm work... Do write more 👏 make it ff plzz 😊 u have a good writing ability 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi dear🤗
Wow what an amazing OS👏👏👏
I just loved reading it 😉😉
It was too cute ,no need of getting nervous at all,cause ur story was just simply amazing dear😃😃
Wow Ishveer and their son ,I just love this a lot 😳😳
So cute dear,keep writing more😃
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Jenni😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Arfah..hope u r dng gud.im fine.after a long time i read an Os..its ur first os..what a beautiful start dear.claps.claps..

Ur os is so poetic .it is so cute..i had a huge smile throughout reading it.trust me such a treat to eyes n heart..awww ishveer luv is so beautiful.even vn they r expecting their 2nd child the love of ranveer for ishani grows more n more oly...luvd tht caring hubby ranveer..yes he is..u hv describd so beautifully..
Shaveer is so cute..i dnt knw who is the real kid ishani or shaveer...hope to see a similar day in show too.

Lovely os arfah dear.do continue.dnt feel nervous..forum is full of lovely supportive friends..n u gt inspired by Our MM.Shes a beautiful writer..vnever i read her ff moments of happiness i cn visualize all the scenes in front of me vch she wrote.shes a magical writer.her mesmerising words for ishveerluv reaches heart so much tht it vl tk sme time 4 me to come out of tht zone..sach mey her writings brings hpy tears.luv u mm.hugs.
N Arfah i was able to visualize ur os scenes too.its so beautiful..u hv a vry gud writing skill..i cn feel the emotions frm ur lovely words..so b confident n continue..All the best Arfah dear.hugs.god bless..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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QUOTE=ShadikaIshVeer]Hey🤗🤗
Told you there is no reason to be nervouse, because you write shoo beautiful and there is such an innoncense , charm and beauty with what you write that I am like this

Okey can IshVeer get cuter 😳😳 Ranveer is just such a sweet hubby and ishu is no less than cute and caring😃😃 And there son is shoo cute , loved there family and the romance you showed between IshVeer👏☺️☺️

You wrote so beautiful , damn you all are so great writers⭐️⭐️ One thing sweetie , do have sectiones it makes it cleaner😊😊

Do continue , cant wait to read more from you🤗🤗 Also thanks for mentioning me & my OS😉😉 I loved it that I can be to help and be an inspiration😳😳 Hugs🤗🤗

With love & best wishes
MM❤️❤️

Tnx, I am glad u loved it , yhh i wanted d sections to be clear so I put evrything in small paras but fogot to check out d spaces, posted from mob soo and as my first post hope i will get better and clear with further writings...its though for me to put my in thoughts in words as i am not that expressive in my life too😭...🤗🤗
hug u too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: naxathira

Hi Arfah..hope u r dng gud.im fine.after a long time i read an Os..its ur first os..what a beautiful start dear.claps.claps..

Ur os is so poetic .it is so cute..i had a huge smile throughout reading it.trust me such a treat to eyes n heart..awww ishveer luv is so beautiful.even vn they r expecting their 2nd child the love of ranveer for ishani grows more n more oly...luvd tht caring hubby ranveer..yes he is..u hv describd so beautifully..
Shaveer is so cute..i dnt knw who is the real kid ishani or shaveer...hope to see a similar day in show too.

Lovely os arfah dear.do continue.dnt feel nervous..forum is full of lovely supportive friends..n u gt inspired by Our MM.Shes a beautiful writer..vnever i read her ff moments of happiness i cn visualize all the scenes in front of me vch she wrote.shes a magical writer.her mesmerising words for ishveerluv reaches heart so much tht it vl tk sme time 4 me to come out of tht zone..sach mey her writings brings hpy tears.luv u mm.hugs.

N Arfah i was able to visualize ur os scenes too.its so beautiful..u hv a vry gud writing skill..i cn feel the emotions frm ur lovely words..so b confident n continue..All the best Arfah dear.hugs.god bless..



Hi jo 😛, tnx a lot reading ua reply gave me a boost to my confidence to continue further,will update soon and my name is Afrah nt arfah😉

Indeed MM is a lovly writer...my imaginations startd from her writing..visualizing her OS... This OS came in mind so decided to put it down in words...🤗❤️ hugs n lov u too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishveerfankittu

Awsmmm work... Do write more 👏 make it ff plzz 😊 u have a good writing ability 👏


Hey tnx... will try to make an ff if possible bt i will do update a second part soon 😛😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Hi dear🤗

Wow what an amazing OS👏👏👏
I just loved reading it 😉😉
It was too cute ,no need of getting nervous at all,cause ur story was just simply amazing dear😃😃
Wow Ishveer and their son ,I just love this a lot 😳😳
So cute dear,keep writing more😃
LOve
Jenni😊


Hi jenni 😛
Tnxxa tonnn,i am sooo glad u liked it😊
Will update soon, you can call me Afrah 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Arfah!

I have noticed you here a few times...But yeah, Welcome to the forum!

I liked MM's OS actually. I wanted her to make it an FF. But sadly, she is already writing three. :( So, I am asking you, can you make it an FF? Would love to know more <3

This was beautiful, poetic! <3

AV

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