#2 ~FF : Untold Stories~ - Page 80

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Is HP so awesome? 😲😲 Then, I'll surely try it in my holidays! Ten more days. Then I can go back to my novels. 😆😆 And I find it the same way. So, I will have to try it. My friends also were recommending it to me a long time ago. I kept quiet. 🥱🥱

Originally posted by: Katniss07

Perfect ! Your chapters are just a beautifully polished and carved out piece of perfection from your brilliant mind and fantastic imagination , again superb job on this one LM ! :D

Filch is such a daredevil to mess up with RV. He read RV's diaries ?! What a brilliantly unfaithful pal he is *evil grin* . By the way , everybody ranging from Filch to Chirag knows that Ishani loved him too and even though madame was too naive to understand this but she does now ! I really feel heart broken to see how much impact his status had on him , he too knows somewhere inside that she loved him but is too broken to accept this fact and what comes out is just anguish but I don't blame him for that :( :(

One can live in the most luxurious of places and have a cottony soft mattress to sleep on but the most comfortable & safest place for him will always be his mother's lap and her protective arms , this is what Ranveer made me feel when he finally came to India , his motherland after 6 whole years , it is such a long time ! And obviously the way you described our Mumbai was no less than heaven , the city of dreams indeed has a welcoming atmosphere and an essence of its own which can't be found anywhere else at least for us , the Mumbaikars <3

Ranveer has a strange, scary air about him , he gives me goosebumps to be honest . Heartbreaks and cold realizations has a surprisingly dangerous effect on people at times. Both the epistle's Ranveer & the Interlude one show such a bloody contrast ! Gone is the warmth which his mere name gave me , not even a single word of him looks like his own now its just the sonorous effect of his broken heart which stings the ears X( Now only Ishveer can bring back my old Ishveer .

Amba , god , I can't believe that I am saying this but yes , she was such a relief in the cold atmosphere of the chapter. Their conversation was lighthearted and sweet and lovely :) . Mothers will always remain the same , don't they ? ^_^ And Amba was the mystery caller ?! Now that was overly unexpected I must say , claps.

Ranveer and Kailash's conversation made me nostalgic. The friend circle is an entertaining one , Ranveer , liquor & Kailash *sighs*. Happy that RV's parents met her and even more happy to hear that they weren't cross. But the thought of what happened between Ishveer is terrifying , can't wait for the next Interlude !!

Ranveer's insomnia is frightening , poor guy needs a break from all this but I know it's too far :(

Hope to see some peace in his life ( this one single chapter was not enough I'm telling you ). Ishveer are fighters , I really admire both of them <3

PS : Is this an FF or a chat group ?! The gossiping girls are on fire !! I salute your talent of talking so much MM , IshveerForever , Pluviophile XD . You'll need a new thread soon LM. Till then girls- chak de phatte !! XD

Originally posted by: life_is_ok

Dictionary does not have words to appreciate the level of brilliance u have in ur writing skills LM... 👏 👏 👏

I feel like voluntarily drowning in ur stories whenever I read them..😊 😊..

So much depth of emotions, the characters have,...

Speechless yaar...Really Speechless... I just feel short of words to describe what I have actually experienced while reading the chapters... 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

Its beyond perfect... From emotions to the character sketches to "the beautiful language" u have used... everything is so crystal clear... So synchronized... 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I don't have even half of the talent u have to arrange the proper words and tell u how wonderful it has been reading IshVeer through ur eyes, through ur pen...

I m sorry I hardly comment but I always wanted to write this for u ...

Both ur stories The Untold Stories and The Napolean City, which I read very lately are immensely special to my heart... ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

They r beautiful gifts to ur readers... 😳

With loads and loads of love and hugs ...

Pooja... 🤗

Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you've been liking my work so far! ⭐️⭐️ It's nothing short than an honour for me that both of these works are so close to your heart, because both of them are vry special parts of my life.

You praise my skills far too much, but I'm humbled that you feel so highly of what I write. ☺️☺️ It's the encouragement that you guys constantly keep showering me with and the love and support that I've been getting is something that always motivates me to work harder and harder so that I can live up to your expectations.

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

A big co-incidence. 😆😆 That girl seriously needs to know who is who. I mean she seriously needed to know. 😕😕 And he's got more? Well, it's welcome with open arms. 🤗🤗

Your Chirag scares me sometimes. Because the show one is such an adorable (yeah, we know how we liked such an awesome 'villain'), I expected somewhat the same here too. 😆😆

I love her determination. Reminds me of myself when I'd been confined to wheelchair in seventh (😭😭), and they'd told me that I wouldn't/would not be able to walk. But I finally regained my motor functions (it was not paralysis) after two months. 😃😃 And that's been a turning point of my life. ⭐️⭐️

I think that Chiru baba will take revenge again. As I told you, he's been more villainous here.

Love,

Effulgent.

Well, she learnt her lesson in the worst way possible. 🥺🥺 And Chiru baba... well, he's messed with two people burning in the ashes of lost love. There's no greater strength than a heart burning with a fire of vengeance in love. 😳😳 He's screwed. 😉😉

And now this makes me curious - did I make sense in the ten epistles in relation to Ranveer's condition and emotional turmoil?

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Review for Interlude 9.

Aha! A surprise update! Thanks a lot for this, LM. As I said, you take care of your readers so well!

Coming back. Ranveer and Finch are travelling to India. Ranveer's land of miseries (yeah, bechara). And Finch got a taste of Indians' diversity and roughness. Poor guy! He was the only foreigner in that train/compartment.

And Ranveer is always insecure. Thinks that Ishaani doesn't love him when others can see that they're madly in love. Boy, this is his biggest problem. He has to overcome it and his life will be bliss. But he has valid reasons to be so insecure. He feels that she was the one who pulled him down. I remembered Hassan and Amir's lake story. The one with, "There's no monster." And Amir was the monster there.

Again, I deviated. Coming back. Finch is such a daredevil, huh? Reading Ranveer's diary? Bohut himmat chahiye yeh karne ke liye! And they come to Borivali, finally. Amba is such a sensible woman here. She feels that Ishaani is not at fault. And the incident of the diamond conference was one of my favourite parts. And Amba was the caller! I didn't even think of it. As you said, the simplest answers are often the solutions and I was thinking of Disha!

Kailash and Ranveer's drinking spree was good to read, though! And Ranveer has such side-effects of insomnia! He has to catch sleep as much as possible. 40 hours! My God. This bechara, as you said, has already a lot on his plate. In the epistles as well as the interludes.

Ranveer's thought process of Ishaani scares me. It's like he hates her. Though sometimes he does, but love never fades away! And your Ranveer is charmingly mysterious here. And you also know how we girls like him! Ishaani! You lucky girl!

On the whole, an awesome update. Kf face to face takes a longer time still, I have no problem. I believe that it'll be worth the wait. And I wonder how many updates you might've finished my April 1st. Yeah, I'm leaving IF for ten days. Heavy subjects on the way.

I'll miss you, my badi behen. Take care!

Love,

Effulgent

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hey dear that's fine u dont need to apologies for replying late because when I got no reply for that msg I understood that my small msg got blown away in storm of spamming by these cute girls who drool over you .
Nd m Waitng for your next update.and do you really think I write some sense coz I thought I was nly blabbering.
By d way m overwhelmed to know that u waited for my response thanks dear

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

There are many.

Throw us out. 😭 Prohibit spamming. 😭 Restrict the spamming limit again. 😡 Forgive us.
• Or make more rules. 🤢

On a lighter note.

Take the gun to shoot us. Don't worry. MM is our suraksha kavach. 😆 Remove the page limit.
• Literally kick us out. 😉

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Oh God! Why do I end up spamming your thread here.

And I'll give the review now. I broke my promise. 😒😒 I had to give it before night falls and now it's midnight. But I'll give it now. And it would be a little short too. I'm so sorry, LM. 😭😭