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Posted: 9 years ago

#781

Perfect ! Your chapters are just a beautifully polished and carved out piece of perfection from your brilliant mind and fantastic imagination , again superb job on this one LM ! :D

Filch is such a daredevil to mess up with RV. He read RV's diaries ?! What a brilliantly unfaithful pal he is *evil grin* . By the way , everybody ranging from Filch to Chirag knows that Ishani loved him too and even though madame was too naive to understand this but she does now ! I really feel heart broken to see how much impact his status had on him , he too knows somewhere inside that she loved him but is too broken to accept this fact and what comes out is just anguish but I don't blame him for that :( :(

One can live in the most luxurious of places and have a cottony soft mattress to sleep on but the most comfortable & safest place for him will always be his mother's lap and her protective arms , this is what Ranveer made me feel when he finally came to India , his motherland after 6 whole years , it is such a long time ! And obviously the way you described our Mumbai was no less than heaven , the city of dreams indeed has a welcoming atmosphere and an essence of its own which can't be found anywhere else at least for us , the Mumbaikars <3

Ranveer has a strange, scary air about him , he gives me goosebumps to be honest . Heartbreaks and cold realizations has a surprisingly dangerous effect on people at times. Both the epistle's Ranveer & the Interlude one show such a bloody contrast ! Gone is the warmth which his mere name gave me , not even a single word of him looks like his own now its just the sonorous effect of his broken heart which stings the ears X( Now only Ishveer can bring back my old Ishveer .

Amba , god , I can't believe that I am saying this but yes , she was such a relief in the cold atmosphere of the chapter. Their conversation was lighthearted and sweet and lovely :) . Mothers will always remain the same , don't they ? ^_^ And Amba was the mystery caller ?! Now that was overly unexpected I must say , claps.

Ranveer and Kailash's conversation made me nostalgic. The friend circle is an entertaining one , Ranveer , liquor & Kailash *sighs*. Happy that RV's parents met her and even more happy to hear that they weren't cross. But the thought of what happened between Ishveer is terrifying , can't wait for the next Interlude !!

Ranveer's insomnia is frightening , poor guy needs a break from all this but I know it's too far :(

Hope to see some peace in his life ( this one single chapter was not enough I'm telling you ). Ishveer are fighters , I really admire both of them <3

PS : Is this an FF or a chat group ?! The gossiping girls are on fire !! I salute your talent of talking so much MM , IshveerForever , Pluviophile XD . You'll need a new thread soon LM. Till then girls- chak de phatte !! XD

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life_is_ok

@life_is_ok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#782

Dictionary does not have words to appreciate the level of brilliance u have in ur writing skills LM... 👏 👏 👏

I feel like voluntarily drowning in ur stories whenever I read them..😊 😊..

So much depth of emotions, the characters have,...

Speechless yaar...Really Speechless... I just feel short of words to describe what I have actually experienced while reading the chapters... 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

Its beyond perfect... From emotions to the character sketches to "the beautiful language" u have used... everything is so crystal clear... So synchronized... 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I don't have even half of the talent u have to arrange the proper words and tell u how wonderful it has been reading IshVeer through ur eyes, through ur pen...

I m sorry I hardly comment but I always wanted to write this for u ...

Both ur stories The Untold Stories and The Napolean City, which I read very lately are immensely special to my heart... ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

They r beautiful gifts to ur readers... 😳

With loads and loads of love and hugs ...

Pooja... 🤗

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-FlameOfHope-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#783

Originally posted by: life_is_ok
Dictionary does not have words to appreciate the level of brilliance u have in ur writing skills LM... 👏 👏 👏
I feel like voluntarily drowning in ur stories whenever I read them..😊 😊..

So much depth of emotions, the characters have,...
Speechless yaar...Really Speechless... I just feel short of words to describe what I have actually experienced while reading the chapters... 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

Its beyond perfect... From emotions to the character sketches to "the beautiful language" u have used... everything is so crystal clear... So synchronized... 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I don't have even half of the talent u have to arrange the proper words and tell u how wonderful it has been reading IshVeer through ur eyes, through ur pen...

I m sorry I hardly comment but I always wanted to write this for u ...
Both ur stories The Untold Stories and The Napolean City, which I read very lately are immensely special to my heart... ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

They r beautiful gifts to ur readers... 😳

With loads and loads of love and hugs ...

Pooja... 🤗

Poo! Welcome to LM's thread. She should be doing this, but never mind. I'm her choti behen. 🤣

The main reason I quoted your post is... I too had first read LM's Neapolitan City as Napolean City. 🤣🤣

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-FlameOfHope-

@-FlameOfHope-

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#784

Originally posted by: Katniss07
Perfect ! Your chapters are just a beautifully polished and carved out piece of perfection from your brilliant mind and fantastic imagination , again superb job on this one LM ! :D

Filch is such a daredevil to mess up with RV. He read RV's diaries ?! What a brilliantly unfaithful pal he is *evil grin* . By the way , everybody ranging from Filch to Chirag knows that Ishani loved him too and even though madame was too naive to understand this but she does now ! I really feel heart broken to see how much impact his status had on him , he too knows somewhere inside that she loved him but is too broken to accept this fact and what comes out is just anguish but I don't blame him for that :( :(

One can live in the most luxurious of places and have a cottony soft mattress to sleep on but the most comfortable & safest place for him will always be his mother's lap and her protective arms , this is what Ranveer made me feel when he finally came to India , his motherland after 6 whole years , it is such a long time ! And obviously the way you described our Mumbai was no less than heaven , the city of dreams indeed has a welcoming atmosphere and an essence of its own which can't be found anywhere else at least for us , the Mumbaikars <3

Ranveer has a strange, scary air about him , he gives me goosebumps to be honest . Heartbreaks and cold realizations has a surprisingly dangerous effect on people at times. Both the epistle's Ranveer & the Interlude one show such a bloody contrast ! Gone is the warmth which his mere name gave me , not even a single word of him looks like his own now its just the sonorous effect of his broken heart which stings the ears X( Now only Ishveer can bring back my old Ishveer .

Amba , god , I can't believe that I am saying this but yes , she was such a relief in the cold atmosphere of the chapter. Their conversation was lighthearted and sweet and lovely :) . Mothers will always remain the same , don't they ? ^_^ And Amba was the mystery caller ?! Now that was overly unexpected I must say , claps.

Ranveer and Kailash's conversation made me nostalgic. The friend circle is an entertaining one , Ranveer , liquor & Kailash *sighs*. Happy that RV's parents met her and even more happy to hear that they weren't cross. But the thought of what happened between Ishveer is terrifying , can't wait for the next Interlude !!

Ranveer's insomnia is frightening , poor guy needs a break from all this but I know it's too far :(
Hope to see some peace in his life ( this one single chapter was not enough I'm telling you ). Ishveer are fighters , I really admire both of them <3

PS : Is this an FF or a chat group ?! The gossiping girls are on fire !! I salute your talent of talking so much MM , IshveerForever , Pluviophile XD . You'll need a new thread soon LM. Till then girls- chak de phatte !! XD

It's our CC. 🤣🤣 Just joking, on a serious note, LM won't throw us out. Because we are her cute rule-breakers. 😆😆

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life_is_ok

@life_is_ok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#785

Originally posted by: Pluviophile

Poo! Welcome to LM's thread. She should be doing this, but never mind. I'm her choti behen. 🤣

The main reason I quoted your post is... I too had first read LM's Neapolitan City as Napolean City. 🤣🤣

Ohh...And I really dnt know since how long I had been reading it as Napolean instead of Neapolean City... Small but huge mistake... 🤣 🤣

Thanks 4 correcting dear...

She has wonderful reviewers as well... 😳

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-FlameOfHope-

@-FlameOfHope-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#786

Originally posted by: life_is_ok

Ohh...And I really dnt know since how long I had been reading it as Napolean instead of Neapolean City... Small but huge mistake... 🤣 🤣

Thanks 4 correcting dear...

She has wonderful reviewers as well... 😳

He-he. I was like that too. 😆😆 And no need of any thanks. 😊😊 Recover your old account safely and go back to it. 😳😳

Oh. Thank you, on behalf of my badi behen. 😆😆

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-FlameOfHope-

@-FlameOfHope-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#787

Oh God! Why do I end up spamming your thread here.

And I'll give the review now. I broke my promise. 😒😒 I had to give it before night falls and now it's midnight. But I'll give it now. And it would be a little short too. I'm so sorry, LM. 😭😭

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-FlameOfHope-

@-FlameOfHope-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#788

Review for Interlude 9.

Aha! A surprise update! Thanks a lot for this, LM. As I said, you take care of your readers so well!

Coming back. Ranveer and Finch are travelling to India. Ranveer's land of miseries (yeah, bechara). And Finch got a taste of Indians' diversity and roughness. Poor guy! He was the only foreigner in that train/compartment.

And Ranveer is always insecure. Thinks that Ishaani doesn't love him when others can see that they're madly in love. Boy, this is his biggest problem. He has to overcome it and his life will be bliss. But he has valid reasons to be so insecure. He feels that she was the one who pulled him down. I remembered Hassan and Amir's lake story. The one with, "There's no monster." And Amir was the monster there.

Again, I deviated. Coming back. Finch is such a daredevil, huh? Reading Ranveer's diary? Bohut himmat chahiye yeh karne ke liye! And they come to Borivali, finally. Amba is such a sensible woman here. She feels that Ishaani is not at fault. And the incident of the diamond conference was one of my favourite parts. And Amba was the caller! I didn't even think of it. As you said, the simplest answers are often the solutions and I was thinking of Disha!

Kailash and Ranveer's drinking spree was good to read, though! And Ranveer has such side-effects of insomnia! He has to catch sleep as much as possible. 40 hours! My God. This bechara, as you said, has already a lot on his plate. In the epistles as well as the interludes.

Ranveer's thought process of Ishaani scares me. It's like he hates her. Though sometimes he does, but love never fades away! And your Ranveer is charmingly mysterious here. And you also know how we girls like him! Ishaani! You lucky girl!

On the whole, an awesome update. Kf face to face takes a longer time still, I have no problem. I believe that it'll be worth the wait. And I wonder how many updates you might've finished my April 1st. Yeah, I'm leaving IF for ten days. Heavy subjects on the way.

I'll miss you, my badi behen. Take care!

Love,

Effulgent

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-FlameOfHope-

@-FlameOfHope-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#789

Wow! Not bad. I wrote a considerably long review. :)

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#790

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py
Hey hi LM hope you are fine and your exams are going on well
Now u don't need to be thankful to us actually we should thank you for giving us such soulfully connected ishveer and making them what we always wanted them to be.
Now I must say u heard my secret wish of reading your update today
😳 😉
So ranveer was reading along with finch peeking in well I cannot blame finch specially if the story is about your best friend and so interesting that to even I cannot resist
Well this guy is really interesting I mean just by reading few pages he understood how much ishveer love each other but ranveer's sentence totally cuts his thought I just wondering what dreadful thing must have happened that night that made these two lovers to tear apart with so much dead hatred between them it feels as if they no longer feel emotion
That airport and borivali chaos I know very well as i am from m amazed infact how perfectly you have depicted it 👏
Well amba and rv banter was so cute loved it that very much
So again father son duo are with their favourite work 😉
I liked it that both amba and kailash are sane people who don't hold any grudges of the past but they don't know whole thing neither they know what happened to ishani they still think she is married
I just thought how much lonely our girl had been in all these years and have bear each and every brunt all alone without pitying herself and rose again but karma is bitch she got what she put ranveer through all these years.
But ranveer's reaction is most awaited after knowing that what he thought a betrayal was so bad time for ishani and so much happened to her
Well now u left cliffhanger m just wondering what must have happened
Last but most important thing that u are truly gem dear you write each and every situation so well that everyday you make me fall more for your writing
Thnx for pm
Plz update next soon.

Hi there, sweetheart! 😃😃 I'm doing well and my exams also went off pretty smoothly. 😛😛 And I'm glad that you've been loving this story so far.

Firstly, I'm so, so, so sorry for missing this! I was wondering how come you hadn't left a reveiw and when I went searching today, I found that you had already posted this yesterday but I got lost amongst the waves of spamming. 😕😕 (See girls, another reason why you must stick to the rules I put up 😉😉)

Coming to your review, thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ Well, I love Finch and his ways that manage to infuriate Ranveer yet he cannot do without them. 😆😆 But yeah, you've got an excellent point - when there's so much mystery revolving around your best friend's life, you're bound to get curious. 😈😈

The whole world can understand Ranveer and Ishaani's equation except for the two of them. Ironic. As to what happened, you'll get your answers in Interludes 10 and 15 respectively. You've mentioned their emotional state brilliantly, as always. 👏👏 Coming to the Mumbai chaos, well I know it because I live in Mumbai as well. I know the madness. 🤣🤣

Hehe, I enjoyed writing that banter between the mother and son. 👍🏼👍🏼 As to the father and son duo, well that's something I've been itching to write for quite some time now. 😎😎 And again here, you've stated it perfectly. What they don't know can't hurt them. 🤔🤔 And even Ranveer himself doesn't know till date that Ishaani is divorced. 😳😳

Yeah, she did get what she unwittingly put Ranveer through. 😭😭 Stupid girl, she doesn't know what she did to both of them. Screwed up her life as well as Ranveer's too. 😡😡 As to Ranveer's reaction, that too, is still far away, but like always, I hope that it's worth the wait. 🤡🤡

You are too sweet, dearie. ☺️☺️ Thank you so much once again and I'll update the next part soon! ❤️❤️