#2 ~FF : Untold Stories~ - Page 82

Hii LM!!!
HAPPY HOLI DEAR...
ur life get filled with colours ...and have fun dear!
And congratulation for 50 chapters 👏
I wish you reach greater heights in ur life

Now coming! this really heart-touching chapter when ranveer confress her love to ishani but all vain only chirkut ki wajah se 😡 poor ranveer! And the best scene harshad tell ranveer that he alwaye want to ishani luv u and his know that ur love ishani so much you explain this scene so beautiful and akele ka pyar l loved it
Harsha want to ranveer move her life and got more success her life and he said ranveer get out this place!he know about her pain and only his promise is going to make him
Thanks for pm...

Hii LM

congrats for 100 pages dear👏👏👏
heart breaking update dear😭😭😭.ranveer give his opinion about chirag was good dear.poor ranveer his heart was break after know about ishani love chirag was so sad 😭😭😭ranveer angry on ishani was good she deserved this.😡ishani such a fool girl she never understand ranveer felling about her 😡 finally ranveer say to 3 magical word to ishani but i don't like they way😭😭harshad know about ranveer feeling for ishani but he never told her😡😡ranveer and harshad scene is so amazing dear 👏👏he take to all sacrifice to ranveer but he never take any sacrifice to ishani wah what a great Mr.harshad parekh.😡😡i can't stop my tears think about ranveer condition 😭😭ranveer never agents his mota babuji 😲he complete all wish to mota babuji👏👏but ranveer know they wish more difficult for him 😭😭harshad all wish to stay away to ranveer form ishani 😲ranveer should be move on it so difficult for him.

thank for pm dear🤗

hey LM, i need Your help,
I think you can, coz Yo're done with Your exams, so...
Actually i wanted to write an Os but m unable to create a new topic r thread, can You do it for me?
I mean can you suggest anyway?
Can you post my os on my behalf?

Yo're doing a great justice with Your ff Dear,
Your thoughts, way, language every thing is marvelous,
You take me to another world every time,
From me 👏

You still h've't visit the forum, means You are busy 😕

Hey LM!!!

Originally posted by: NidsJ

Hey LM...

Finally we are back to interludes... much awaited... n u r on a roll girl... u r giving exams n still this regular updates... it shows ur passion for writing... kudos to u...
Now coming to the chapters.. interlude 7... the Meeting... awesome yar... how professionally u wrote this... properly from welcome then leave for absence then signing of minutes then item vise agenda... n the discussions in two most relevant topics... u deserve a standing ovation there... it was too good... I always love ur writing but with this u went to another level... keeping ur age in mind I have to say it was magnificent... it was strict business write up n impressed me much more... u r getting master of every genre...

Now to the revelations... Piyush singhvi... when u mentioned him in 40th Epistle it did came to my mind that it must be for some purpose n here he comes... the Legal Counsel... and most amazing one.. takeover of Mehta's by Parekh's... Chirag almost killed Parekh Group but Ishaani did much better... taking his umpire under her control... now deal with RV... well that was again so interesting to read... u covered all important aspects that affects such a big decision... 100 million pounds in huge amount after all... n main question... why special interest in RV Group... hayeee... ab bechari hamari Ishu... kya kya bataye... then the end... she met Chirkut at 8... that was intriguing... I was thinking n thinking... but couldn't make out... as to the title of chapter abhi duopoly kehlo... baad mein to monopoly hi honi hai... sahi me yaar... ye dono milke to baaki sab ko dho denge... unless u have something else in mind...

As I said above u wrote this meeting so effectively and realistically but there are few errors... some corrections are needed so thought of bringing them up... the big one is name of meeting... this is a Board Meeting and not AGM... these two are entirely different things so if u wish u can correct this... I think there is slight mistake in numbering of agenda... expansion of diamond business in London must be sixth (& not 5th) as per my counting... may be I am wrong... then there are few regarding time of previous meeting n minimum holding for takeover but I think that will b too technical if we go in details so it can be overlooked... and one doubt when Chirag already sold his Holdings to that trust n voluntarily accepted takeover then why was he so shocked... he already lost his say in the Company then why so much worry...

Now coming to the next... interlude 8... it was painful... Chirag... he is psycho... really yar... shocking part was base of his revenge... 8 saal ki age ka incident is what he has in spite of the fact that he was culprit there too.. paida hi kameena hua tha... but sahi hai na .. like father like son... itni lambi planning for revenge.. sigh... unbelievable...

Ishaani's regret was good... I always wanted that at good levels in the show also.. but alas... Ishaani's fault was not to love Chirag... but to believe him to the extremes of stupidity... Chirag was actually a perfect guy to her but the way she closed his eyes from other things is not acceptable... but good thing was how fast and clearly she realised everything... next morning even before confronting that leech she took the right path... and hats off to her spirits also... after losing everything the way she rose again is truly commendable...


And now Ranveer is back... this chapter is kinda relief... but I know toofaan se pehle ki shanti... will post in detail soon... till then keep writing ⭐️ 😊

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Originally posted by: NidsJ

We posted together... 😛 😛

now will review both 9 & 10 together...

Congratulations for 50 chapters... 👏 👏... Really wish that century shall follow soon... 😉 😉

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Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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Thank you so much, sweetie. 🤗🤗 I'm happy that you liked them. ⭐️⭐️ And yeah, I'd kinda taken a vow to not write anything during the exams, but I couldn't resist. ☺️☺️

Coming to your review, I'm really, really relieved that you liked the description of the meeting and all. 😛😛 I'm still unaware about a lot of things when it comes to the financial world in spite of my research. 😕😕 And since you come from that background, I'm glad that you found it decent enough. 😊😊 Yeah I must've overlooked some technicalities, so my most sincere apologies for the same. All your errors pointed out are taken, so I'll rectify them. 😳😳 As to the diamon

As to why Chirag was shocked, it was because he did not expect Ishaani to be the anonymous bidder who wanted to over take his company, plus she bought the shares over from the trust as well, that was something he wasn't expecting. 🤔🤔 So when he found out that it was her and she had outwitted him, well you can imagine... 😆😆

Coming to Piyush Sanghvi, his case ended up just like Martin's. 🤣🤣 When I originally introduced him, I did not have any particular idea in mind, but by the end of Interlude 40 I suddenly had my brainstorm, and voila. 😉😉 And her special interest in RV Group of Companies ke jawaab agar bolti phiregi toh baithe baithe izzat dhul jaayegi uski. 🤪🤪 As to her and Chirag's meeting, well you got the answer. 😛😛 And yeah, yeh dono sabko dho daalenge.

Moving on to Interlude 8, yes he's a maha-kameena. 🤢🤢 Show waale ke toh Ranveer pe nigaahein thi toh samajh mein bhi aata hai. But over here, he's the villian he was meant to be. 👎🏼👎🏼 Bas Ranveer aa jaaye... 😭😭 Coming to Ishaani, you've said it perfectly. 😒😒 Her stupidity, naivety or her being manipulated or hoodwinked is where the whole issue lay. 🥺 🥺 But yes, unlike the show-Ishaani, she makes genuine amends to right her wrongs.

Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

O God is it going to be more painful than it is now
Sorry but tears are are stopping from my eyes till and even now also my eyes are brimmed up
First and the most important thing standing ovation from my side no m literally standing on my sofa and giving you this dear you have definitely set your standards a notch hire I mean this update was so flawless that I can imagine picturising each and every event happening before my eyes.
The most painfull part was harshad ranveer's last talk o girl what a masterpiece you have created
So ranveer poor boy was living all alone I know he ll be after all how unceremoniously he was thrown into ruthless reality thanks to ishani
So obvious that ranveer caught on something in chirag's eyes which reminded him of that dark night life of his own but had the boy known what it was both of them would have been spared of all the pain
I smiled at the fact that ranveer's opinion matters to her but she want to listen what her heart wants her to and not what the fact is about chirag
Well our lover boys confession went in vain because all that.
But u know I can understand what was going in her mind because she was to naive to understand the realities because of extra and unconditional love by both harshad and ranveer that she remained to oblivious of her surroundings and hence she got easily manipulated by that chirag 😡 😡
But girl that line hurted so much when she asked whether he loved someone girl he lived only to love
Now coming to most painfull part of ishveer life and in this chapter also ranveer and harshad I can tell you that these guys are soulmate I men seriously they know practically each and everything about their thoughts and feelings
How painfull it is to look into eyes of a dying person and assure him of hope specially when it's nowhere to b seen
He always wanted to have both of them together and was not a moron of serial but what he can do when their is a dumb child
I love each and every sentence of harshad I mean how beautifully he explained meaning of love and was literally forcing ranveer to get out of this painfull place because he knew that all he ll get after him is heartbreak and pain
I am in love with each and every sentence you wrote about ranveer movi g on dear you seriously speaking gave soulfull meaning to the whole concept of akele ka pyar which was used by every tom dick and harry in serial
M happy that harshad wants that ranveer should settle and be successful because he knows the only inspiration for ranveer for settling and successful is robed of that day and only his promise is going make him do that
U answered my each and every question regarding band and date
So now both of them are doing the same thing ie revisiting the past but ishani have hurted our boy way too much and the irony is both of themlost everything on that day that to same person who meant world to them
Sorry dear but I cannot stop myself from writing though I want to write more but that will b like another chapter for you interludes people ll kill meme 😉
But there is so much that I cannot say.
Dear I must say you are really a talented writer m speechless beyond this
Thnx for pm
Waiting for next
Sorry dear after posting I realised it how much long I have blabbered but I ll not do from next time promise though m not promising for the interludes but I ll definitely keep them shorter now m again going for crying session and going to read this update again
Sorry a heartfelt congratulations for completing 50 chapter I forgot and happy holi thnx for giving us such a beautiful soulfull story

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