Raghvi OS : Mercy or Hope - Page 3

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

A nicely put together write. I noticed some changes in writing style and it enhanced impact of the story.

This seems like a story u will complete. Good writing.

Thank you.

Wrote from heart. 😆

Felt the emotions?

And the change in writing style happened in the last editing. Not sure about completing.

Aise hi rulate raho 🤗👏

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

Aise hi rulate raho 🤗👏

Didn't expect this type comment at all. 🤗😆

You made me cry badly😭 it was so beautifully written , i can't even process what i have read. Most touching os i ever read🥺Really you wrote it beautiful❤

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Didn't expect this type comment at all. 🤗😆

Originally posted by: Rutu05

You made me cry badly😭 it was so beautifully written , i can't even process what i have read. Most touching os i ever read🥺Really you wrote it beautiful❤

Thank you so much. It means alot when the emotions are felt but I'm really sorry for the tears. 🤗

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Thank you.

Wrote from heart. 😆

Felt the emotions?

And the change in writing style happened in the last editing. Not sure about completing.

Yes got that while reading. From sentence formation to choice of words and arc, it was evident a lot of work has gone into it.

For me personally end was incomplete and it seems like a two shots atleast.

Originally posted by: Shri_12

Kee, here it is

https://www.wattpad.com/769765217-ishqbaaaz-os-series-48-to-help-you-greet-the-end

If I say that I read this then I will be lying. I went through it, skipped so many parts because I cant read such emotional stories. Too much for me. Thanks for sharing shri. 🤗

Me too...I am forever believer of happily ever after ❤️

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Yes got that while reading. From sentence formation to choice of words and arc, it was evident a lot of work has gone into it.

For me personally end was incomplete and it seems like a two shots atleast.

Yeah, a bit more work and time were spent on this unlike others. But was an easy write which I didn't expect.

I have always wanted to write something on mercy killing.

What did you get from that end?