Raghvi OS : Mercy or Hope - Page 4

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

os ki tareef har koi karega so what else I can add😂 keep writing.

Thanks.

Will write but not this kind. It's too much for me. 😆

Originally posted by: Joyness

Me too...I am forever believer of happily ever after ❤️

I don't believe in happily ever after in real, but in stories I like that. ❤️

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Yeah, a bit more work and time were spent on this unlike others. But was an easy write which I didn't expect.

I have always wanted to write something on mercy killing.

What did you get from that end?

It was left open ended for a reason. But that end felt incomplete as neither of the decision were taken and both left open ended.

Her death was suggested and his 'hope' was also suggested. It felt u got too emotional to make choice there.

You made me cry....It's beautiful....

This was painful--I felt bad for Raghav who still held onto the hope for 6 years that Pallavi will wake up, for Sai who must have been craving for her mother's love at such a tender age of 1 when she had just started forming memories with her mum, for Pallavi who despite being in pain and under medications and needles did not show an ounce of pain in her face

So beautifully written Keechu and the end seemed like a happy one to me---Raghav let go of Pallavi--freeded her from the pain and walked towards a new life with his daughter who will piece his broken heart together

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

It was left open ended for a reason. But that end felt incomplete as neither of the decision were taken and both left open ended.

Her death was suggested and his 'hope' was also suggested. It felt u got too emotional to make choice there.

I think I should change my title to mercy and hope.

I love open end that's the reason.

No, it's not that. I thought, holding his hope in his arms was enough to realize what he chose.

Originally posted by: bips_freedom

You made me cry....It's beautiful....

Thank you.

Hugs for you because I made you cry. 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I think I should change my title to mercy and hope.

I love open end that's the reason.

No, it's not that. I thought, holding his hope in his arms was enough to realize what he chose.

Its fine.

Then I don't like the end.

Originally posted by: ReemShah

This was painful--I felt bad for Raghav who still held onto the hope for 6 years that Pallavi will wake up, for Sai who must have been craving for her mother's love at such a tender age of 1 when she had just started forming memories with her mum, for Pallavi who despite being in pain and under medications and needles did not show an ounce of pain in her face

So beautifully written Keechu and the end seemed like a happy one to me---Raghav let go of Pallavi--freeded her from the pain and walked towards a new life with his daughter who will piece his broken heart together

Thanks Reem. Yeah I went with a hopeful ending as I always do. Though she died, he has hope as his daughter to live. You got exactly what I intended. 🤗

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Its fine.

Then I don't like the end.

What you wanted then?

You wanted him broken?