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Posted: 18 years ago
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CHAPTER FIVE




"Hi 😊 !Tanu..." Mamta rushed to Tanisha and hugged her.

"You just don't talk to me 😑 ," said Tanisha and pushed her.

Mamta smiled 😊 cos she knew the reason for her anger 😊 . "Itna gussa 😳 ! aur woh bhi Tanu ko.Hmmmm.....mujhe kuch karna padega."

Mamta then makes a funny and cute face 😳 and says sorry.But still Tanisha doesn't smiles though she wanted to.Finally Mamta tickles πŸ˜† πŸ˜† her and she bursts into a laugh πŸ˜ƒ and says, "Okay,forgiven 😊 .It's eight 'o' clock and I told you to come at six.Adu and Radhu di' were waiting for you.I had to do everything myself....."

"Tanu 'am really sorry.We had gone to Ganesh πŸ€— ji's temple.Today is Manav bhaiya's birthday.So, we went for offering prayers.You know that he's in Army and right now he's in Ouri,Pakistan border.And there's great disturbance going on there.He called this morning and that was when we were relieved.And so Maa thought of doing an Archana in his name........"

"Yaar!I understand.By the way when is your brother coming home?"

"Most probably next month ,if everything goes fine."

Manav was Mamta's elder brother who went on to fulfill his childhood dream of joining Army unlike Akshay and he was now Capt.Manav Sharma,in 20 Kummao Regiment πŸ‘ πŸ‘ .

"Come Mamu,I'll show you my jijus 😳 ," she pulled Mamta and slipped among the crowd to reach an opening where the two boys 😳 😳 and their would be wives 😳 😳 sat.

The ring ceremony began and suddenly Mamta's eyes fell on Akshay 😑 who was passing the rings to Abhay and Rahul.

"Tanu,What is he doing here 😑 ?" she asked but when she turned Tanisha wasn't there 😲 .She searched for her and saw her talking to Akshay 😳😳.She ignored them and went away.The ring ceremony was over πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ and everybody assembled on the floor for a dance .Mamta found it better to go and sit somewhere and that somewhere was one of the corners of the hall. Tanisha and Akshay were dancing and Mamta was busy with her drink. Tanisha finally came near her and took her to her sisters.Mamta congratulated πŸ‘ both of them and their would be's.

Meanwhile Akshay left the floor and came to Mamta 😳 and asked her for a dance 😳 .Mamta was about to leave when her mum came and told her, "Go,beta!!Don't sit here lonely...see everyone's enjoying and you too go and enjoy the party....GO..Hurry up....Akshay take her πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ....she is always shy...."

"Maa...but!!!!!!!......."

"No,buts!!,beta just go.."

Mamta frowned and went with him to the floorangrily 😑 .When Akshay took her hand she pulled her hand and stubbornly said, "Don't touch me.. 😑 "😳 πŸ˜‰

"Okay! I won't πŸ˜‰ " he said smiling at her.He was looking at her but she was avoiding his eyes. 😳 πŸ˜‰
The announcer announced that all those who are on the dance floor would've to participate in a game show called Paper Dance.He announced the rules, "It's a very simple game,when the music begins you'll have to dance with your partner on the paper and when it stops the paper will be folded and the game would go on and on till the last couple standing would be found and they would be the winners πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ." 😳 πŸ˜‰ .

Mamta was about to leave but the others watching didn't allow her to leave and cheered her to dance.She had no other option 😳 😳 than to dance with Akshay πŸ‘ .She felt like a fool.

The music began and Akshay and Mamta were like miles apart from eachother on the paper.Akshay was still smiling 😊 at her anger.the music stopped and the paper was folded and they came a bit closer.Mamta was feeling uncomfortable and Akshay didn't say anything but smiled 😊.The paper was again folded and Mamta tried to get out of the paper but Akshay held her hand and pulled her closer.She struggled to move out and looked at him angrily and said angrily, "Akshay,How dare you?..Leave me...."

"Mamta, What do you think of yourself?Why are you treating me like this?I've said sorry to you a thousand times...and still you won't forgive me....but I can feel your heart....and it tells me ,you have forgiven me then why all this anger and stubborness.......okay fine you don't forgive me ,but this is a game and you can play this considering me as a stranger.......... πŸ˜• 😳 "

"Akshay,leave me ,right now!"

"No!I won't."

Akshay then holds her closer ,smiling at her. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰ .

But she pushes him and slaps him 😑 ,but nobody watches them as they were busy with the dance.But as the music was stopped they were not out.Akshay was surprised and Mamta looked shocked😲 at what she had done.The paper was folded and they composed themselves.The girls stood on the boys feets but they both stood there looking at eachother in shock.Akshay saw tears 😭 😭 in her eyes on being forced by others to stand on his feet....she wanted to leave.When the music began and she tried to stand on his feet,he stumbled out purposely and so,they were out!

Mamta was feeling uncomfortable....and when she was about to go Akshay came to her and said, "I am sorry!" He left her standing there feeling confused and sad,she looked at him walking away from her πŸ˜• 😳 .

Mamta's father and Akshay's father were distant paternal cousins πŸ˜ƒ .They were talking gladly about their childhood and family.

MAMTA AND AKSHAY ,Will they ever fall in love? 😳

What about their fights,growing worse day by day?

Tanisha achi ya buri?

Aage ka haal in next chapter.....filhaal ........πŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒ?????????????enjoy the earlier chapters!!!

PJπŸ˜ƒ

Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi poohtarang your FF is very nice πŸ‘ .i like it very much.
plz dont mind and plz dont laugh ,plzzzzzzzz dont enter sid in this wonderful ff ,take any other oneπŸ˜†.
he is the main reason for us to stop this serial plzzzzzzzzzz i request you πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
CHAPTER SIX





"Mamu, where were you?I was looking for you.Why are you looking so upset?"

"Tanu,why did you call him here ?"

"Uh-ohπŸ˜† πŸ˜† !So,that's the reason you are upset.Arre Mamu I didn't call him.He is Abhay and Rahul jijus brother.And by the way why don't you forgive him"

"Tanu,you too.......and I can see that you both are quite good friends now,and now why would you like standing by me? "

Mamta left her and walked to her parents who were in conversation with Akshay's family.

"Baba,I am not feeling well .Can we go home now?"

"Mamta,beta! why don't you go and rest in Tanisha's room?" asked her father.

"No,I want to go home."

"What happened?," asked Akshay's Dad ,Mr.Rishi Sharma.

"Oh! there's nothing Rishi 😊.She's my daughter Mamta and beta this is Rishi uncle,my distant cousin."

"Namaste,Uncle 😊 ."

At that time Akshay came there and told his Dad, "Dad,Mittal uncle is looking for you."

"Avinash 😊 ,this is my son,Akshay.He has recently joined Gurukul Academy for Business studies.And Akshay beta this is...."

"I know Dad,this is Avinash uncle.I've already met him,he naa uncle.He is Mamta's Dad,she's my classmate"

"Anha!!So,you both are classmates.Mamta you didn't tell me." said Mr.Avinash,Mamta's dad.

Tanisha came there and said, "So,you both are relatives .Great,right..Mamu πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .I mean......."

Their fathers left and Mamta told Tanisha that she was going to her room co she's having a headache.Tanisha shouted πŸ˜• behind her to listen to her but she had already left.
Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
CHAPTER SEVEN





Akshay saw her climbing the stairs to Tanisha's room.He nodded and went to Tanisha. "Oh!Akshay what happened?You look a bit tensed......Oh...I know...Is Mamta the reason?"

"Tanisha,why don't you make her understand?I really regret what I did to her and I am ready to accept any punishment....but her silence is hurting me very much ."

"Don't worry Akshay.Leave it to me......and now you tell me how do I look in this dress 😳 ." But Akshay wasn't listening to her and was staring at Mamta who was playing with a small child 😳😳😳 in the corridor of the first floor.

"A-K-S-H-A-Y!!" she called him loudly.

"Han!!!!Oh!!!Ya! Ya! your dress!!You look gorgeous,pretty like an angel...really!!!" he said suddenly taking his eyes off Mamta 😳.

"Thanks,come I'll show you something"

She then took him to the terrace.It was a full moon night and the sky looked like a velvety curtain, from behind which brightly twinkling stars were winkingπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰, with a mysterious smileπŸ˜ƒ .

"Wow πŸ˜› !!!the sky looks so beautiful from here ,Tanisha."

"I know."

Akshay was mesmerised by the sight and Tanisha was smiling at him 😳 .There in Tanisha's room,Mamta too was looking at the sky and she was thinking about the past incidents and was really confused πŸ˜• ...She thought, "'Am, I behaving very rudely to him?But,what he did to me was unforgivable.Yes..he deserves it!" ,she tried to contend herself

But again and again his pleading face came in front of her eyes,and when she closed her eyes ,still she saw him...she was confused πŸ˜•πŸ˜³ . [Background song 😳😳 :Behta he man kahin ,kahan jante nahi,koi rok le yahin.Bhage re man kahin aage re man chala jaane kidhar janoon na...aa..aa]
"Hey!Ganesh ji 😭 ,what should I do?"

At that time only a little girl entered the room and a little boy came behind her asking sorry 😳 😳 😳 .....The lill girl angrily asked him to leave her alone and told him that she would never talk to him ..


Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ur story is more interesting than our real 'mamta',I think.................

good.......u r really entertaining us. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ........thanks.. 😊

give more............ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
CHAPTER EIGHT





Mamta smiled 😊 and asked, "What happened?"

"Didi!This Tinu,he locked me in the cupboard,when we were playing hide and seek.I was really scared πŸ˜• and he also switched off the light" said the girl.

What??Tinu come here,why did you do that?"

"I was angry 😑 at her cos she told Ballu where I was hiding.But Didi,I let her out later and also brought water for her ,but she isn't talking to me.Didi u please tell her that 'am sorry and that I won't repeat this ever again 😭 ," the lill' boy had tears in his eyes.

Mamta found their fight resembling her story.She told the girl "He's really sorry Tina,You should forgive him.And you Tinu ,promise me you won't do this ever again."

They both did what she told them and they became friends again and walked out of the room holding eachothers hands 😳 and laughing πŸ˜ƒ. Mamta now got her answer but still she was a bit hesitant..... .

She again went back to the balcony and saw a shotting star and prayed, "He! Ganesh ji,please show me the right way.What should I do?Please help me.I don't think that I am doing something wrong but why isn't my heart agreeing for it?Please help your child 😭 ."

At the same time Akshay and Tanisha also wished... πŸ˜‰ "Please, God.You make Mamta understand and I wish she forgives me....I don't understand why 'am I so concerned about her ....kya yeh sympathy he ya pyar...no!! it can't be ...it's just guilt!!!!.......... πŸ˜• "

"Hey!Bhaggu .please make Mamta accept his apology and be friends with him cos I really want them to be friends 😊 .I really like him 😳 and if Mamta doesn't forgive him,how can I ever tell her that I like him.Please Bhaggu!....ok Thankyou!!!! πŸ˜ƒ "

The party was over and Tanisha came into the room with Rani.Mamta was sitting on the cane swing in the balcony looking at the sky 😳 .

"Mamu how are you feeling now?The party is over and see who has come to meet you? 😊 " Mamta stood up and smiled at the girl 😊 .

"Mamu,this is Rani,Akshay's cousin sister.She wanted to meet you."


What has Rani come for? Will Akshay love Tanisha?Will Mamta ever forgive him?

Wait till the next chapter. πŸ˜‰
Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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CHAPTER NINE





"Hi! Rani 😊 !Come here.Why do you want to meet me?"

"Di!My brother always speaks about you and says that you are very nice πŸ˜ƒ .and you know today I came to know that you are our relative and I was so excited.You and Tanisha di must come to my home,won't you come di!"

"Yes, ofcourse,why won't we come?" said Tanisha excitedly and then grimaced at Mamta πŸ˜• .

"You are really very sweet and I'll definitely come to your home.OK ,now are you happy 😊 ." said Mamta stroking Rani hair.

"Di!I've brought something for you.Please don't refuse it."

"But Rani."

"Please Di!"

"Ok,fine...Thankyou Rani! 😊 "
and she hugged her πŸ€— .

'I also want to give you something, here ...." and she removed her bangles and slipped them into Rani's hands. "These are new and they really suits you 😊 ."

"Yes ,yes they look beautiful 😊 .Now you get up Mamu and come with us." said Tanisha pulling Mamta

They went down and everyone had left the party except the family members.

"Mamta beta ,feeling better? 😊 " asked Akshay's father.

"Yes,uncle,much better."

Mamta's parents too came their and her father said, "Ok,then Mr.Mittal,bhabi ji we shall leave now.Good night everyone!!See you soon Rishi ,Rajive at my place...ok 😊 ."

"Good night Tanu!!"

"Bye,take care.See you tomorrow."

Everyone was present there except Akshay.Mamta's eyes searched for him but,found him nowhere.she left.

"Akshay,where were you?Mamta had just now left."

"Oh!I just went to see off my friends you know na Rudra,Angad and Vishnu.Anyways ,how was she feeling now?"

"Better" and they began to talk about the party.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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CHAPTER TEN




After reachin home ,Mamta said goodnight to her parents and went into her room.She placed the gift on her bed and went into the bathroom to get fresh.She came back and took the gift,and opened it.There was a bumbly πŸ˜ƒ teddy 😳 in it,she picked it up and found a card below it that said, "A cute teddy for a sweet didi! 😳 "

But when she looked into the gift box,there was also something else in it πŸ˜‰ .It was another box,she took out the box and opened itπŸ˜‰.It was a cute motu-motu white GB(Ganapathy Bappa)with green and silver motifs πŸ˜› .She was surprised and happy to see it.A letter propped out of the box,she took it and read it....

Mamta,
I hope this Ganesh ji succeeds in telling you how much I am sorry.I don't know but I really can't bear all this anymore....Please forgive me...Sorry,sorry! a hundred times,a thousand times ,and if you want I can say it forever.........

Tumhara bevakoof gunehgar
AkshayπŸ˜•

P.S:.............You were looking gorgeous in that pink dress.... 😊

She crunches the letter and throws it....she sits there crying...then she lifts the Ganapathy ji's statue and looks at GB....She smiles at GB and touches it to her forehead,and takes it to the shelf to keep it safely...But it accidently falls down and she too falls in order to catch GB πŸ˜‰ ....She catches GB and her eyes falls on a file lying under the shelf.She picks up the file and gets shocked 😲 to see that it was her project file for which she had blamed Akshay and got him punished...She really felt sad for him,and was angry with herself for treating him so badly πŸ˜• .

"Oh!Ganesh ji!" she sighed.

She was really shocked and broken and thought she was the one who first did wrong to him.She looked at GB and started to cry 😭 .
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Posted: 18 years ago
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dear give us long episodes 😊 ........this short ones r killing me.....I'am too excited to wait πŸ˜‰ 😳 .....ur dlgs r good...nice...keep going πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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CHAPTER ELEVEN





She looked at GB and started crying 😭 with her head bent in her arms.She then lifted her head and saw the crunched letter and rushed to it and picked it up.She held the letter to her heart and cried, "GB,What have I done?,Akshay please forgive me...."

At that time the phone rang and it was Akshay. "Hello,Mamta!This is Akshay......Hello!..."

"I know you are listening,say something...your silence is really killing me πŸ˜• ."

Mamta was holding the reciever and she was trying to stiffle her sobs 😭 ...... She spoke sobbingly.... "Akshay 😭 ...Akshay 😭 ....."

"What happened?Why are you crying?....Hello...Mamta..."

"Akshay ,I am sorry 😭 .I've really hurt you." She then tells him everything about the misunderstanding..... πŸ˜•

"Mamta,stop crying and You don't have to be sorry....it happens with everyone....now there won't be no more sorrs and fights between us....and we are friends ....so...stop crying or I'll come and lock you again πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† ."

They both became good friends and actually they three became good friends πŸ˜ƒ ;Mamta,Akshay and Tanisha.Mamta now not only helped Tanisha in studies but also Akshay 😳 .They had become best friends.The first semester exams were on the vergeand they were busy preparing for it.Tanisha and Akshay were supposed to meet Mamta at her home for the revisions but as usual Akshay hadn't shown up 😊 .

"Again,he hasn't come.This boy ,he's never serious and he hasn't changed a bit."

"Yaar!Oh,no!Tomorrow is our main paper and he hasn't come....'am worried πŸ˜• ."

The girls tried his mobile but it was switched off.They revised their lessons and Tanisha left........ πŸ˜‰



I hope you guys have enjoyed the chapters till now.....Please give your suggestions to improve it,in the section "MAMTA II Reader Fantacies".....I'll really appreciate it πŸ˜ƒ ....You can also write about your fantacies about AM or your fav. characters to be added in this fanfic..... 😳


Thanking you
PJ πŸ˜ƒ

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