MAMTA II - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

109

Views

8.5k

Users

14

Likes

1

Frequent Posters

pj2012 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 18 years ago
#41
CHAPTER TWENTY THREE





The girls get into their beds.Mamta says her prayers and lies down.Tanisha taunts her...... "So,what did you say to him...?Did you told him that the sleep of your nights have gone ....hmmmm.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† ???"

"Tanu... 😳 😳 Go to sleep..."

"OK,fine...if you don't want to tell me....your best friend...Good night... 😑 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† "

Mamta nods her head smilingly...and they both go to sleep...But some time later Mamta hears Tanisha's stifled sobsπŸ˜•.She lifts her head and looks over Tanisha's head.

"Tanu,tu ro rahi hai....I am sorry 😭 I am really not feeling happy....I can never be by hurting you...you are not just my best friend ,you are my sister ,more than that...and I can't be selfish...I don't need any happiness by hurting you...Tanu....I'll tell the truth to everyone....if he is not yours then he's not mine either...Tanu are you listening....you are crying and I know that you can't hide your feelings from your Mamu.... 😭 "

"Mamu,it's midnight....paagal ho gayi hai kya...I guess Akshay se milne ki khushi mein ,you've lost your hearing capacity...I was sleeping peacefully and you woke me up in the middle of the night with your stupid ,crazy doubts... 😑......Mamu...I am not at all sad,infact,I am very happy for you two...true love is rare and you are going to give it up for me....that'll be a sin...and I won't ever forgive you for that...samjhi...And now go to sleep or I'll definitely kill you..."

Tanisha turns around and goes to sleep.Mamta is still confused and takes her GB in her hand and tells him in her heart, "Hey!Ganapathy Bappa,you've troubled me a lot...and after that you are giving me your innocent smile as if nothing has really happened...hmmmm....Tanu's happiness is more important to me than mine...She's sacrificed her love for me.She isn't showing her sorrow,but I know it'll be tough for her...Please give her strength to face her grief and bring all the happiness and joy back to her life.....Always shower your blessings upon us and now stop your naughty ,innocent smile 😳 ...and go to sleep...Good night GB..."

In the night sky,somewhere a cute,fat star winks and giggles and a fresh breeze blows a melodious music of love and innocence 😳 .

The next morning they were all supposed to leave for Mussourie on a college trip....The college bus with the college banners unfurled and excited looking students came and Mamta's parents and Tanisha's parents saw them off..... πŸ˜ƒ...They both got in with their luggages and searched for their seats... 😊Akshay was in the bus...and Mamta tried to look away from him with a smile....He too looked at the window and slapped his head with a smile 😊 😳 .

"Mamu,look he's kept a seat for you...go and sit near himm...go... πŸ˜† 😳 "

"Tanu,stop it...'am not going their .We'll sit here." They both sat together at the adjacent seat to Akshay's.Mamta was still blushing...and Tanisha was busy poking her head out of the window to look at the check post...and other scenaries....

"Hi,Mamta...Hi! Tanisha..."

"Hi..Akshay... 😳" "Hi....Romeo.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† "

"Tanu.. 😑 "

"u-g-h...ho ,both of you are really weird.Now see what 'am I going to do? πŸ˜‰ "

"Tanu...what is this paagalpan? πŸ˜• "

'Listen up,Guys....There's a great news for all of you. πŸ˜† "

"Tanu...what are you doing?Sit down ...please for God's sake.... πŸ˜• "

"... πŸ˜† πŸ˜† M-a-m-t-a and...Akshay love eachother and they are soon gonna get married.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† "
Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
eternal thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 18 years ago
#42
thank u 4 da chapter, u did really good, it is so romantic, and oh tanisha, u will find ur love soon! plz continue
niti_26 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#43
sat-sun 'mamta II' nahin aata kya?? πŸ˜†


can't wait........... 😳

tell me,tell me what our naughty Akshay is up to???? πŸ˜‰ 😳 πŸ˜›
pj2012 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 18 years ago
#44
GUYS BIG BIG PROBLEM


I was at my Bade Pappa's place for a few days cos my bro is having chicken pox 😭 I came back today evening only...but there's a bad news,I am going to Mysore for a training to join Infosys ....then I'll be goin to Bangalore or Pune.......pata nahi why did I get selected in the campus interview But I'll try to come back soon.....I've to give MAT also for MBA......my plans are all ruined 😭 I have to go in two ,three days.... 😭 😭 I'll try to post as many chapters as possible in these few days....Guys I'll miss you people a lot....and also this wonderful forum.......my AM..... 😭 😭 😭


loads and tonnes of luv for all the ailing AM fans
Pooh πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
star2 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#45
Congrates πŸ‘
But we miss u and your FF alot.
pj2012 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 18 years ago
#46
CHAPTER TWENTY FIVE





"Tanu πŸ˜• ....shut up....." But the news had already got out of Tanisha's mouth and everyone came to them and congratulated them...even their teachers blessed them happily 😊 Akshay really looked excited but Mamta was embarrased and blushed like a red,red rose 😳After some time all others went back to their seats to have naps and gossips...leaving them alone 😳 Akshay called Mamta....and gave her 😳 😳 πŸ˜‰


"Mamta,here I brought you a book,a poetry collection of Emily Dickinson,your favourite 😳 ."

" Akshay, but........ok....Thanks 😳 😳 "

"o-o-o-h-h-h 😳 so,he knows all your favourite things also???hmm...... 😳 "

"Oh! Tanu....cos he loves me 😳 ....you'll never change.. 😳 😊 "


"Oh....How sweet?? 😳 Raja ......no no...Akshay ki aayegi baraat ,rangili hogi raat,magan Mamu nachegi.."

"SSHHHHH 😳 ....he'll listen...keep quiet...I'll hit you Tanu..if one more word you utter..."

"AM...AM... πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† "

"T-A-N-U... 😑 "

"Ok...ok....now open that favourite thing of yours...lemme see what Mr.Romeo has given her Juliet? πŸ˜† "

"Not now...and in front of you I'll never open it,kabhi nahi πŸ˜† ...you've already flashed everything...is baar no no 😳 "

"Fine...as you wish 😑 na na na na na πŸ‘ πŸ‘ AM...AM...AM πŸ˜› "

"Tanu... 😊 "

After some time she glances at Akshay shyly 😳 ...who was sleeping at the adjacent seat with Rudra Shastri,his friend.She smiles 😊 at his innocent face 😳 and opens the book...a note falls down on her lap...She picks it up and reads...

Tumhi tum chayee ho meri in dhadkano mein 😳
Sansen chal rahi hai tumhara hi naam leke 😳


Hosh toh kabke gavah bathe hain 😳
tum kaho toh yeh jaan bhi loota denge hum 😳


Kabhi toh palken utha kar dekho is taraf bhi 😳
Taras gayi hain ankhein tumhari ek muskurahat ko sanam 😳


Humein pata hai hum tumhare dil❀️mein rahte hain 😳
Tumhari bholi ankhein chupke se hami ko dhoondati hain 😳


Tumhari isi masumiyat par toh hum fida hain 😳
Jaan ho tum meri tumhare liye hi hum zinda
hain 😳
😳I LOVE YOU MAMTA😳
KHUD SE ZYADA......KHUDA KI TARAH......DEEWANO SE ZYADA....DILWALON KI TARAH.....BAS CHAHTEIN HAIN TUMHE PAGALON KI TARAH.....HOSHWALON KO KYA KHABAR ....KI KIS TARH HUM HOSH GAVAH BAITHEN HAIN...TUMHARE PYAR MEIN

😳I LOVE YOU MAMTA😳
Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
niti_26 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#47
will miss u & ur FF a lot pooh..........

will miss u both in IF & CMH..... 😭 😭


can't u come online from Mysore or wherever u going to be at?....is that possible????
Edited by niti_26 - 18 years ago
pj2012 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 18 years ago
#48

Me too😭,but I'll be back very soonπŸ˜ƒ...after all CMH wale mujhe thodi naa chodenge....just a short leave....πŸ˜ƒI'll try to come online...after all this forum is like water and food for me and you guys are the best.....😳

Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
pj2012 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 18 years ago
#49
CHAPTER TWENTY SIX





Mamta get's emotional 😭 She wipes her tears and looks at Akshay 😳 .He was still sleeping.Mamta folds her hands and places them beneath her head and looks at him turning on her seat 😳 .He too opens his eyes.She drops her gaze 😳 and they look into each other's eyes 😳 .Mamta blushes and gives a shy smile to him 😳 .Akshay places his hand on his heart and gives a smiling sigh πŸ˜ƒ !! and falls on his back on the seat 😳 ...Mamta laughs πŸ˜† πŸ˜† and takes out "GB" from her bag. "Thank you "GB" 😊 ...." she touches "GB's" feet to her forehead and kisses it 😳 😭.

At night everyone got down from the bus to see the scenary and Akshay stayed cos he wasn't feeling well...Mamta too was worried and returned back giving an excuse...but Tanisha understood and she winked at others πŸ˜‰ In the bus Mamta saw Akshay shivering ,she pulled out a blanky from her bag and covered him properly..and turned to go back...when he held her hand and said, "Mamta....you are going? 😳 Won't you sit near me for a while....?Kya tum mujhse itna bhi nahi pyar karti?..han!!!"

"Akshay....Please let me go....They'll come her now.... 😳 😳 😳 "

He leaves her hand with a jerk and says angrily, "Go....go to your friends and enjoy...I don't mean anything to you go....now don't look at me with your big rabbit eyes or I'll change my mind πŸ˜• 😳 .......I'll stay here thinking about you πŸ˜• ,you can't stop me from that...or can you?????? πŸ˜•Jao...." and he closes his eyes... πŸ˜‰

Mamta feels bad ...She smiles and goes near him.She bends and kisses him on his forehead and meanwhile he opens his eyes she runs away.....he smiles...and sees her going...but........ πŸ˜‰ She hits someone in the dark...and the face becomes visible.... "Aha!!So,Romeo is ill and Juliet comes to look after him .....how romantic?Isn't it guys? πŸ˜† "

screams the rest of the students laughing....Mamta is really embarassed and rushes to her seat blushing 😳 ...."Y-E-S!!!!!"

They reach Mussourie and go to different places to look at the beauty of the magical nature.... πŸ˜ƒ The Himalayas were the most enchanting with waterfalls,cool springs and spell binding flower valleys....terraced fields and laterite rocks houses.... πŸ˜›

"Mamta ,this place is heaven .isn't it? πŸ˜ƒ "

"Yes,Akshay."

And they both stand there silently enjoying the beauty.Akshay rubs his hand on her's and holds her hand....she frowns at her smilingly and nods to him to leave her hand πŸ˜• 😳 ...Tanisha calls all others "Look how they are standing here close to eachother leaving us alone....hmmmmm πŸ˜‰ "They all creeped slowly behind them and they surprise both of them from behind😲

"Mamu,you were saying you wanted to watch the mountain view alone....oh shayad alone ise kahte hain,in your dictionary,I mean in Shakespeare's Romeo-Juliet...right friends πŸ˜‰So,what's he doing here? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† Oh.....'am sorry he too might have wanted to see the view A-L-O-N-E!!"she stressed the last word and bursted into a laugh πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†Mamta blushed and ran from there... 😳😳

" πŸ˜• What???? Tanisha....I got a moment with her alone with a great difficulty and you ruined it... Anyways ,I wanted to talk to you too."

Tanisha becomes sad but hides her pain in a smile 😊

"Tanisha,there's a Lord Shiva and Mata Parvati temple nearby.My mum told me to take Mamta to that temple and take their blessing.You bring her along with you after taking permission from Mrs.Patel.I'll be waiting for you two there at 6:30 p.m. when the aarti begins..."

"Okay done!!! 😊 "

Akshay leaves and Tanisha stands there with tears in her eyes 😭 😭 "Akshay,it's very,very hard for me to forget you but I'll try and I'll do it for my Mamu....she's very innocent...she has always done everything for my happiness since childhood and now it's my turn 😭"

............................................................ ........... "Tanu πŸ˜• ,where are you taking me?"

"You'll come to know in a few seconds... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† "

They reach the temple and Akshay is waiting for them there.He comes to them and gives his mobile to mamta... "Mamta,here Mum wants to talk to you 😊 "

"But...Akshay....Aunty? πŸ˜• Hello...Aunty...Namaste 😊 "

"Namaste beta,jeete raho 😳 .....and you don't have to call me aunty...Call me Maa.Samjhi 😊Listen carefully beta...I've a surprise for you.Close your eyes and wait."

"But...ok Aunty...I mean Maa 😊 πŸ˜• "she closes her eyes and Akshay and Tanisha looks at her confused πŸ˜• .

"Okay,beta now open your eyes....."

"Aap...aur......Yahan😲,but how???"Not only she alone was surprised but both Tanisha and Akshay were looking astounded πŸ˜• 😲.

"Yes,mum.How are you here?And where's Dad and everyone else? πŸ˜• "

"Akshay,beta,,I've come here alone.Your dad and uncle have gone to London with Abhay and Rahul for some business deal.Aditi and Radhika are pregnant so they can't travel and Ragini is there to look after them...And your Dadi you know can't travel much...I had to come cos I have an urgent thing to complete here."

"Urgent thing?What mum? πŸ˜• "

"Akshay,I know it's really strange.....b-u-t I've taken the oath to fulfil it otherwise something dreadful'll happen. πŸ˜• "

They all look wonderstruck and in the next second something unbelievable was uttered by Rakhi Sharma,Akshay's Mum.

"Mamta...Akshay you both will have to........... "



What new trouble is stored for AM ?Why is GB testing their love again and again πŸ˜• ???Are they not meant to be together 😭 ????What will fate and stars play in their life??What is the urgent news πŸ˜• ?????What is Rakhi's intention πŸ˜• ?????Hold your breath😲 and wait for the next explosive chapter.....Milan 😳 yaa Judai??? πŸ˜•akhir what's waiting for our wonderful,adorable AM 😳 ????
Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
sania_12 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#50
wow, I can't wait! continue soon

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".