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Semanti Chakraborty

@DharmaPriyaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#691

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar
sorry for being so late.. It was a fascinating update.. but somehow I did not feel the grandeur.. I cant say anything is missing.. but Yudhishthir was too devotional and not realistic.. I am sorry if I am hurting you. I would like to see him more human and realistic :) And also, a good description of Krishnaa could be good. But what is interesting is that the feel of the actual epic is intact here.. the epic is not much about feelings and this is the kind of feel which comes.. you were successful in capturing that.
Waiting for more...

No dear you are always welcome to criticize, it only helps in improvement 😊 Actually you know what, this is Yudhi's pov and he is terribly blamed at this point (you know what I mean) so I could not make him 'describe' Krishnaa in detail 😆 already all novels have ruined his character here but I think even if he looked at Krishnaa, he felt a kind of respect only. Respect too is a form of love so yes, all Pandavas fell in love with her can be explained this way. 5 Pandavas have 5 different kinds of mentality, so I'm sure Yudhi's first feeling & Arjun's first feeling will not be same.
As for human and realistic, I think he is not like that. He belongs to a height. Ordinary people cannot understand him, cannot relate to him. He is an idealistic man. That's why his only flaw becomes so prominent in ordinary eyes. Just my understanding 😊
Sorry I could not satisfy you 😳

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ltelidevaralak

@ltelidevaralak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#692

Originally posted by: Urmila11

Thank you so so much dear 😊 definitely Draupadi deserves Pandavas and Pandavas deserve Draupadi 😳 they are made for each other 😊
Varaali didi said thanks to you for liking her part 😊

I think it is apt to remind the nine types of bhktis that are given in mahabhagavat,written by Vyasa and narrated to parish it by Suka Maharishi. sravanam,kirtanam vishnoo smaranam padasevanam ,archanam vandanam dasyam . sakhyam aatmanivedanam. These are the nine prominent types of devotion which are illustrated with examples. Sri vishnostu sravanam parikshitabhavat. Vaiyasakih kirtane, prahlada smarane, tadanghri bhajane Lakshmi,prithuh pujane,akrurastvabhivandane,kapi patch dasye cha, sakhyam arjunah sarvasvatmanivedane, balirabhut. Kaivalyameshah phalam. King parikshit is the one who followed sravanabhakti as he heard the story of The Lord with utmost devotion.Vyasa's son Suka for kirtanam Ashe sang the story of The Lord.Prahlada for smaranam as he always chanted the name of The Lord.Goddess Lakshmi for padasevanam as she always served his feet.King prithu for worship,which he continuously did.Arjun is for devotion through friendship well, no need to explain an already proven fact,Akrurastvabhivandane for saluting the god with great devotion Anjaneya for his devotion through service and king Bali for his total submission before the god.The result of such devotion certainly is moksha,salvation.

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Jayeeta Paul

@Jayeeta_06

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Posted: 10 years ago

#693

awesome update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...loved the swayamvar part...👏👏👏...loved it...❤️❤️❤️...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...

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Semanti Chakraborty

@DharmaPriyaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#694

Originally posted by: Gopikaa
Magnificent update.

Welcome to the palace of Dharmaraj 🤗
Thank you for reading and commenting 😊

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Semanti Chakraborty

@DharmaPriyaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#695

Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06
awesome update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...loved the swayamvar part...👏👏👏...loved it...❤️❤️❤️...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...

Welcome to the palace of Dharmaraj 🤗
Thank you for you lovely comment 😊 I'm glad that you loved it 😊

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Jayeeta Paul

@Jayeeta_06

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Posted: 10 years ago

#696

u r welcome dr...😊...but what is the meaning of Dharmaraaj dr...😳...

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Semanti Chakraborty

@DharmaPriyaa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#697

Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06
u r welcome dr...😊...but what is the meaning of Dharmaraaj dr...😳...

Dharmaraj is Yudhishthir's another name dear 😊 and this thread is Yudhishthir's palace 😊

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varaali

@varaali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#698

Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06
u r welcome dr...😊...but what is the meaning of Dharmaraaj dr...😳...

The King of Dharma is DharmaRaja

Dharmasya Raja iti DharmaRaja

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naq5

@naq5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#699

so sorry have not been able to read updates since a long time . i missed few in between n waned to read everything at one go n was not finding time for it. im reading now from yudis coronation.

chapter 15. it was divine. the shlokas the ceremony described in so much detail. it wud have taken so much effort from your side to put together all that. And the krishna connection to yudi it was beautful

chapter 17 what a sly dhritarashtra was. ok so what dos the epic say did he know tht his son was planning to murder the pandavas? and did karna have a hand in this too😕. poor yudi he is in dharmsankat as to weather take his responsibilities as crown prince or listen to his uncle. big decicion it was. makes me wonder if the kurushetra war have hapened if he had taken a decicion of not going.😕 vidur yudi convo was well done. i love his riddles.

chapter 20 .. so hidimbaa comes. was it really her who fell for bhim .. well she is so courageousaccepting her love in front of every1. kuhd hi rishta le ke aa gyi😆. poor bhim it was hilarious how his eyes became bigger knowing a rakhshasi had fallen for him😆

chapter21 baby ghatotkach. hes attracted to arjun the most. made me sad to know he will be sacrifices for him in the war. loved the bantering the twins n bheem have between them😆

and this is so true Happiness resides within us; we just need to feel its presence even in worst situations! Why should we allow situations to rule over us? We should learn how to become satisfied with little! If we can do so then no pain of discontent will be able to touch us!"

devi hidimbaa wow bheen has newfound respect fr his wife😆 but its sad how much both hidimbaa n her baby had to sacrifice you expressed this so well There was the lovely kid of our family, and we were snatching his most precious throne---his father's lap, from him!! Instead of it he was forced to sit on such a throne which would destroy all his juvenile instincts!!

chapter 22 wow so krishna enters thru yudis imagination it was beautiful. loves the way he smiled different smiles at yudi. reminded me tht SRJ did tht part so well different smiles. n tht poem was beautiful. m arjun krishna tht was way before established in yudis mind even before this duo met.even i feel a certain magic in these two words when taken together

one day i would like to read a FF thru sahdev's POV. it wud be v interesting

chapter 23 aww so krishna's real entry. loved how yudi spotted him n connected with him. krishna's naughty smile n loving gaze towards draupadi. no noticing Arjun😕 he was his soulmate. And so yudi remembers his cousin krishna not knowing he is the same who he was meeting in his imagination

so yudi waiting for the god to come n win the princess.. well but god had choosen arjun for it n yudi at last finds someone he can turn to in dilemma. feeling happy for him. loved how he immediately turns to krishna to seek aprooval😊

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naq5

@naq5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#700

Originally posted by: Urmila11

Dr. Shinde, welcome to this Dharma palace 😊 this is not only a FF, for me this is a pious place where righteousness prevails! Hope you will love this atmosphere!
Thank you for reading & commenting 😊 I will feel blessed if you read all the previous chapters as well and continue reading. It makes me pleased when true Arjun fans like you come here, it shows how strong & lovely Yudhi-Arjun relationship is ⭐️
I guess Yudhi was coronated at age of 30/31. Then at least 4-5 years passed before lakshagriha, within which Bheem learned mace from Balaram (in Dwaraka) & Arjun conquered some kingdoms. So Yudhi should be 35-36 at lakshagriha.

just a question when bheem was learning mace fighting at dwarka from balram how is it that he did not meet krishna there😕