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Originally posted by: Urmila11

Welcome back dear 🤗 I was missing you 😳 Thanks to Krishna that you have arrived here with His arrival 😃 I always long to meet Krishna fans 😳
I knew that you would like Krishna-Yudhi connections, I told you na, they really shared a cute relationship which is less known and less discussed.
And Dhritarashtra wanted to banish Pandavas from HP. Yes, Karna too was involved in the lakshagriha conspiracy. Our Yudhi is always so good to everybody which makes him suffer 😭
Now Hidimbaa, yes she proposed Bheem 😆 simple & sweet girl she was 😳 and yes, poor lady had to sacrifice a lot 😭 that's why there is a temple of Hidimbaa in North India.
Ghatotkach, lucky boy he was, sacrificed his life for Dharma's service 😊
Glad you liked Krishna's smile, He is always Manmohan...mesmerizer of hearts 😳 and He noticed Arjun too but Yudhi could not notice Krishna-Arjun eyelock 😆 he was busy watching swayamvar 😉 and what do you think, Arjun stood up by his own wish? Certainly Krishna gave him an indication through His lotus eyes sadly I could not show this because it is Yudhi's pov, not Arjun's 😔 but yes, I do feel their connection.
And see, Yudhi still does not know that his Saviour is none but his brother Krishna 😆 just imagine what a surprise he is going to get 😆
Thank you for your long comment dear 😊
As for your question, I think I have written it wrong. Bheem learned mace from Balaram when the later was in Mithila, and Kanha was not with him at that time. Harivamsa says such a situation appeared. I have to check it once again.

Wow I have read few of Varaali's update. She is really good.

Originally posted by: Urmila11

@Itelidevaralak

No one is denying Krishna-Arjun bond here. I have a huge respect for their bond. But this is Yudhishthir's POV, not Arjun's, so Arjun's inner feelings after meeting Krishna can't be shown here. Yes, external activities can be shown and I hope I will be able to portray them.
As for Krishna sharing His love for Arjun, let me remind you that He indeed shared His Abode with both Yudhi and Arjun. If Yudhi was not a keen devotee then how did he get moksha? Arjun's devotion to Krishna is well known to us, but unfortunately none can notice Yudhi's Shaanta Bhaava Bhakti while reading the Epic. I'm just trying here to show that unseen devotion. I myself am an ardent Krishna devotee. So this is not my intention to demean a devotee like Arjun, rather I want to highlight another great devotee (Yudhi) who is always overlooked. Hope Krishna will help me to continue this work peacefully.
As for Draupadi garlanding Arjun, it happened after Yudhi left the arena, so Yudhi can't see and write it in his diary. Hope you understand my point.
Please ignore this FF if you do not like this. None will force you to read it. But please try to understand, this is a fiction, a story. Here I have creative liberty as an author. I'm not writing a research paper here, I'm writing a fiction. So it's my humble request, please ignore this FF if you can't agree with it. Please read the disclaimer given on the first page.
Please do not say that I'm misleading my readers. I have read original Epic. I try to follow the original Sanskrit version unlike some modern fictions which mislead readers even more with distorted facts. You will find my FF having least or almost no distortion.

well,how can you admit that there is no distortion. You are showing the non existing eye lock interaction between Yudhi and Krishna inplace of that existed between Nara and Narayan,Your excuse for this is creative liberty.Distortion happens under the cover of creative liberty.As for sharing the abode,Yudhi is not the only one privilized to share it.Uddhava, ambarisha,prahlada,pundarika indradyumna,...The list is endless.So many great seers exploited Mbh in the later ages.Jaimini,Nannayya,Tikkana,Errapragada ...to many modern scholars like Sukhthankar,Kmg,Iravati karve,K.M.Munshi,Buddhadev Bose,Satya sai baba,Sri malladi chandrasekhara sastri...I can't even count the names.They never spoke any thing minutely nearer to what you are interpreting.Every one of them unanimously sang aatma hi krishnah parthasya,krishnasyatma dhananjay ah.As one who continuously worked on Mbhproject,for a reputed university by conducting seminars and discussions I consider it my duty to point out where it is needed.I remind you again if yours is a kaliyugi ff,I would not have bothered at all.I would have disregarded it as per your kind advice.As per Draupadi's garlanding,I still feel you should have included it in Draupadi's musings.

Originally posted by: Karunima

Wow I have read few of Varaali's update. She is really good.

Originally posted by: naq5

yes yudi-Arjun os was fantastic.

v spiritual. one shud not have an ego of even obeying your elders .. tht was one of the messages.

Originally posted by: naq5

wow uve studied on arjun.. i just love madhav-parth😳😳 im just a mad fan of them. For me its the most beautiful deep queer platonic relationship tht existed on this earth. would like to read more on their bond. if uve written more about it.

dharmashetra has been crap in terms of the madhav parth bond it dosent exist there only. madhav telling parth." i wud not have befriended you " cannot happen😡

of course for krishna Arjun was the most important person in his life. but for yudi -possible tht it was krishna for him. yudi depended a lot on krishna. I cant remember if its KMG translation or not but ive read how after the dhyut sabha krishna visits pandavas in the forest n yudi is so pleased to see him tht he holds his hand as soon as he sees him n dosent even let go of his hand. now dosent tht point towards a bond (which we missed).

this is an FF so certain creative liberties have been taken .. and yes this is not the 1st telepathic connection between characters in FF's there was one more FF on arjun krishna where krishna converses with arjun even before they meet.

Yudhi holding the hand of Krishna as far as I know vana Parva,describes thus...Vaasudevam puraskrutya...yudhisthir am abhi vaadya,kurusreshtam vishannah keshavo abravit...The Panchalas ,dhrishtaketu and others visited Yudhi Lord Krishna saluted to dharma raj and said thus with sorrow.No holding of hand at all.After that Krishna fiercely says The cheaters should be killed and Yudhi should be coronated again.krishna appeared as if he will burn every one.didhakshantamiva Prajah...then Arjuna pacifies him with his prayer.Krishna was pleased and says thus.mamaiva tvam tavaivaham...you own me. I own you.we both are nar,Narayan taken birth on this earth. There is no difference between us.After that Draupadi comes and praises him.After assuring her of the destruction of kauravas,Krishna consoles her.satyam te prati janami...Then Yudhi questions Krishna about his war with salva...matham Krishna tavaasid vrishni nandana...After narrating salva war ,Krishna took leave from Yudhi and left for dwarakanagar.Evamuktva mahabahuh...Nowhere holding of krishna's hand by Yudhi is described.

Nice update Urmila 😃

very beautiful urmila, yudi and drau are one of my fav couples. yudi is my second fav pandav after bhim. very few ppl can understand yudhistir ,u brought out his character sketch very well.

Sema and Varaali beautiful update!! The inner turmoil and conflicting emotions are not easy to write and understand. You both have pulled it off nicely.. I'll write more of what I feel later..