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Jairamji

@Jairamji

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Posted: 10 years ago

Would love to read your views! Excited about something different

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Yajnaseni

@Yajnaseni

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Posted: 10 years ago

You are writing Yudhistir's POV. It is a nice job that you have taken up Urmila. Yudhi is a character beyond my comprehension and I have a deep mistake in my heart for all his qualities. Somewhere I an relate to him for not speaking untruth. Speaking only truth is seen as a hazard to life which I also hv. But unfortunately the evils of life hv caught up with me very fast.

Urmila I have some requests-

1. Please show his wife Devika in the POV.

2. Highlight his happiness, pain and guilt equally.

3. Please highlight his reflections on Mahabharat Yudh and the aftermath.

4. Please highlight on his relationship with Draupadi.

5. Give some space to Nakul and Sahdev. They were among knowledgeable persons of that era.

6. Do highlight on Pandu.

7. Do highlight on Yudi's relationship with Karna, Dhritarashtra, Bhisma and Vidur pre-war and post-war.

8. Don't show Bheem as a laddu maniac.

Continue soon...

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

Wow ! Its A Great Idea !! Please Continue Soon !! And, Brilliant Intro, Its Surely Going To Be A Genius Piece Of Work !!!

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KHUSHI-99

@KHUSHI-99

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

😊 Thanks for sending PM Urmila di,Hmm...its not easy to write on Yudhishthir,lets see how this goes,nice idea..

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997935

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

Urmila, you truly are a Yudhishthir patni...😊

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naq5

@naq5

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

hmm i would like to read from yudi's point of view..

Also ive read few citations from KMG from which its very apparant that yudi shared a great chemistry with krishna & though being elder to him depended so much on him. mostly people have failed to depict this relation. ⭐️mb specially

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sindhusri

@sindhusri

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow OS on Yudhisthir...great..Urmi waiting for that continue soon dear... 😊
Btw sorry for the late reply dr...

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

UrmilaDi...very different concept👏...Me too want to know more about Yudhishthir...want to know his inner feelings as well during various circumstances...eagerly waiitng...do cont without any hesitaion..thanks for the pm😊

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LiveYourDream

@LiveYourDream

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

What a brilliant idea!! I love the concept of torn out pages from a diary!

And you are writing about Yudhisthir, the man most people love to hate! I think understanding a character like him takes a lot of resolve and patience It is so easy to blame him for everything.
I must really congratulate you on trying to write on such a difficult and unexplored topic.

Awesome start , really looking forward to reading more. Thanks for the PM😊

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Yagya

@Yagyaseni

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

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Awesome,darling!!! Would love to read it!! Aryaputra Yudhishtir ki yeh gatha avashya vichaar dharon ko badal dega!! Thanks for the PM and update soon!!

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