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Originally posted by: Mohiniapearl

Beautiful! At one time I just forgot that I ws reading rather thought I was watching... The set up was quite similar to starbharat.
The dependence and finding of problem solver, that was the most amazing part!
Oh my innocent yudi doesnt know, where krishna was...
The karna's part also was short and sweet.

Another thing Draupadi's thoughts nd feelings werr also marvellously written very much like an ordinary girl yet very special.
You and varaali di write too good together.. (even that Yudi Arjun os was also fantastic)
Kudos to you... eyes waiting fr nxt update! ⭐️

Originally posted by: ThePirateKing

Very nicely written. I need to read the first 22 chapters now.

As Jonathan Swift had said " Vision is the art of seeing things invisible". You have that art.

Originally posted by: Yashomati

Very well written Sema Di!! Loved reading it!!! 😳

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

First of all, toh, did Bheem get his food? Or did he have to wait till Drupad recognized them?

He will have to wait till the evening at least 😆 lunch nahi milega aaj 😭 but, kuchh aur zaroor milega 😉 they will go out for bhiksha after the swayamvar is over, so hopefully he will not have to skip his dinner 😆

And this Nakul, he's soo naughty, but wait! Let Kanha come! He'll get back all of these jokes! 😆 And yes, Yudi's arguments turned out to be so so accurate! Not Drupad, but his cousins, no, cousin managed to crack their disguise! Then, the description of the swayambar arena was so beautiful! It was all before my eyes! After that,

His eyes seemed to suppress laughter within them!
^His always does! ☺️

Yes, yes!!! The best cousin of the world has caught them 😆 and you know why Kanha is laughing within Himself 😉 His bechare bhaiya is still searching for Him when He is in front of his eyes 😳 but don't worry, Kanha will solve this mystery soon 😃

Yes we all can depend on him, blindly!! He's the best guardian, and the best thief!
Aww, Yudi is really bhola! Or maybe Kanha is too cunning!

Problem is, Yudhi knows the face of his Saviour, but does not know His name! On the other hand, he is searching for his brother Krishna but does not know his face 😉😆 a serious problem for him 😳 but not for us who already know where his brother Krishna is 😆 But yes, Yudhi is going to get a surprise 😃

But either way, this aankhmicholi is really funny! Seriously, all those kings were a bunch of donkeys! Kanha must have had a gala time watching the live comedy! After all he wasn't so modest, like Yudi to have kept his thoughts within himself and only shook his head!

Definitely Kanha was enjoying this live circus 🤣 even we do while reading or watching this scene 😃

And this Karna! He was good, no doubt, but his definition of goodness missed the most important phrase, i.e. if you plan to be loyal to your friends to the very end, you better choose them carefully. ANd ift was Draupadi's life, and her choice to choose a man she liked! Maybe she didn't like Karna by intuition, and took advantage of the one and only 'flaw' of him. What else could she have done at that moment?

Karna is good, Duri, Dushi, Shakuni everybody is good, as I say, I do not hate any of them because I see them through Yudhi's eyes. They knew Dharma but could not follow it, is that not a pity? You know where light is, still you are loving darkness and you are so true, that was Draupadi's life and she had the right to choose her own spouse. That should not be taken as an insult if anybody does not want to marry you. You should know how to respect other's wish. Karna failed to understand this.

Oh my Kanhaiya! He always takes care of everyone, this way or that way, but he does.
Yudi took the right decision, to give 3/4 of the responsibility to Kanha! Bheem couldn't be trusted when it comes to Dury!
Oh I wish I could see him myself, speaking to Yudi with his pretty eyes and smiles on his handsome face! He's just so adorable!! My Kanha. 😃

I am glad that you have felt your Kanha in this 😊 I too was feeling my own eyelocks with Kanha 😳 I just LOVE this Bhakt-Bhagawan prem ❤️ though this is Shaanta Bhakti, you will see that Shaanta, Maadhurya, Sakhya, Vaatsalya, Daasya...all are same at the end of the day, isn't it? 😊 Once I made a VM on the theory that there is a Radha in every devotee, bhaav anek, but Bhakti ek 😊 if Maadhurya is sweetness, then I would say that sweetness is found in each bhaav! God-devotee relationship is always sweet in itself!

Originally posted by: Bella02pie

Great chapter urmali 👏

Well certainly draupadi deserves pandavas as her husbands😳

Yudhisthir's thoughts are well described 👍🏼

Great writing on draupadi's POV Varaalidi👏

Eagerly waiting for next chapter😃

Originally posted by: Krishna_Sourav

awesome amazing part

loved it

Originally posted by: Maverick_me

So Urmi, I am commenting again 😆 well done, again 😆

Jokes apart; You've put forth Yudhisthira's thoughts very beautifully, so many thoughts in his head at the same time and all brothers were restless; Bhimsena's restlessness is for a different cause 😊 don't know when he'll get to eat but when he gets someone very priceless he wont be bothered when he'll get to eat ..

Thank you for liking this part 😊 yes Bheem will not get lunch today but will get something else 😉 btw did you enjoy Brahmins guessing that the princess will garland any of them 😛😆

finally the moment came - an event which turned their life forever, the presence of Draupadi-Krishna in their life gave them a new meaning, filled up the hollowness of their life .

Krishna-Krishnaa 😃 both guard Pandavas from both sides!

Yudi finally has his audience with Krishna , who he had been dreaming about and very soon Krishna would be inseparable from them, his words, deeds all had such impact on Pandavas

finally his moments when he saw Krishnaa and kept wondering about her qualities, Arjuna winning her swayyamvara surely was the happiest moment for him..

Yes, of course he was very happy to see Arjun's victory 😃 the purity personified woman is his family member now ⭐️ but he will have to go through a tough moment very soon which leads lots of misunderstandings even I'm scared of writing that part 😆

Draupadi's thoughts also are put forward very beautifully , she is fearless about the unknown future and only a woman with immense self belief and confidence in self and whose hand she held can do such a thing...

She took the new turn in her life with determination and was not scared of new responsibilities , that is the inspiring Draupadi for us!

Varaali didi thanked you for loving her part 😊 she is very busy so I'm doing everything on her behalf 😳
And, priya balike, Draupadi must be an unique lady, because she is my wife 😳 thank you for loving her so much 😊

Originally posted by: Krishna_Sourav

awesome amazing part

loved it