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This is my first story here in this forum I hope you like it

I was reading all you lovely stories and you encouraged me to write my first one here

I used to write stories long back in time but in my first language in Arabic

after I read all you lovely stories I decided to translate one of them it called true love I wrote it from more than 20 years back in time

but I felt it can be translated and transformed in Reshabala

so here it is

This lovely cover designed by my lovely sister Naima

aka JodhaAmer

love you my dear sister




Part #1

Dear Diary

It is me Madhubala Malik I didn't use to write in diaries but since today is my first day in new life so I decided to write my diaries so here we are

I'm simple girl from very simple family my father Shamshir Malik is a very simple and loving father he can do anything to fulfill our demands he loves us sooo much and loves our mother the most she is Padmini a simple house wife she is my friend more than my mother I share with her everything and she loves me and my brother and sister the most when I got admitted in medicine faculty they didn't want me to travel and live alone in town so my father transferred his job here in the town and we all come here to live here for my studies

even when I told them that medicine faculty is away expensive for us and we can't afford it my father told me that "we can starve but you don't give up your dream. And it is not your dream only Madhu it is our dream to see our lovely daughter the greatest doctor in the country" did you get what I mean when I call him the best father in the world.

Ok by now, I need to sleep because tomorrow is my first day in college

In Morning

"Madhu Madhu wake up" Padmini calls Madhu

"Yes mom I'm awake and already ready to go" Madhu

"Wow so you got up early" Padmini

"Sure mom it is my first day and I can't get late" Madhu

"Ok come and have your breakfast then you take Aryan and Trish with you to show them the way to their new school" Padmini

"But I will be late mom" Madhu

"No you will not they are in your way to bus station to take them with you cause I have many things to do and your father left early for his new job" Padmini

"Ok mom by now" Madhu

On road

"So Madhu you will be doctor" Aryan

"Yes Aryan" Madhu

"Please when you are a doctor give Trish a very big injection" Aryan

"Why you should have it you are a bad boy you broke my toy last night" Trish

"Cause you didn't want me to play with it you are a bad sister" Aryan

"Stop you two here you are this is your new school don't fight there and be good come and give me kiss you both" Madhu

they both left for their school and Madhu went to bus station to take a bus to her faculty she stood in front of her collage smiling for her new life her eyes full of hope her face shine in happiness then she step in her new life and her new future

after her day in collage end she went to bus station to take her bus to home while she was standing man started to stare at her and she felt uncomfortable under his gaze on her then he started to approach her

"Where are you going beautiful?" the man

"It is not your business" Madhu

"Just tell me maybe we can go together" the man trying to grab her hand

"What the hell go away" Madhu

"I told you we can go together" the man tighten his grab on her hand

Boom

first thing Madhu saw that the man on the ground screaming from pain putting his hands on his face and she saw a strong handsome man standing telling the man "she said not your business so leave her"

Madhu looked at this handsome guy he is tall with fit body big muscles blue eyes she couldn't remove her eye from him

she thanked him and her bus came she get in the bus but she noticed that the handsome guy got in the same bus with her she decided to forget it may be his bus to after a while her stop came she step down the bus but the handsome guy step down the bus too. She started to worry and every turn she take to reach her home he is there behind her she started to walk fast and she really got worry from him till she reached the block her new house in so she turn to face him and told him screaming to make everyone in the street hear her and help her. "Why are you coming after me you helped me and I thanked you. What do you want from me to take the same bus with me and leave it in the same stop I got? Then even here you are tracing me this is my house do you want to come up to my house so my father can beat you up" Madhu

"Who told you I'm tracing you this is my street and this is my house too" the handsome guy

"This is Sultan, he lives here with his mother he is a good guy don't worry from him my dear" old man in the street

Madhu felt awkward and her face turned in red she looked down and told him "I'm sorry I didn't know" then she ran to the house very embarrassed from what happened

"Mom mom Madhu called her mother

"Yes Madhu, why your face is red like tomato what happened how was your first day Padmini

"Mom you can't believe what happened with me now" Madhu

"Ok go and freshen up and come in the kitchen with me to prepare dinner your father is coming soon and you can tell me everything while we are cooking" Padmini

"Ok Mom" Madhu. Then she did what her mother told her. Then she told her mother everything happen between her and the handsome guy called Sultan

"Paminim, Madhu Malik calling them

"Papa you back go and freshen up dinner is ready" Madhu

They all sit to dinner

"So Madhu tell us about your first day in collage did you like it did you find friends" Malik

"Yes dad I got new friends I can't say friends they are just colleagues, there are Ria and Dipali they are funny girls but I don't feel that I fit with them" Madhu

"Why my dear" Malik asked concerned

"They are from rich families" Madhu

"So" Padmini

"The way they dress, the way they talk it is very different from us Ma" Madhu

"Sorry my dear I couldn't buy you dresses like them" Malik feeling guilty

"No Papa you are the best father in the world and I'm not sad that I'm not like them no in the opposite, I'm proud of who I'm. The way you raised me is more than enough for me. I'm Madhubala the daughter for the best father and best mother in the world and they are more spoiled rich girls you don't know how they talk and what they are talking about" Madhu

"How they are talking and what they are talking about Mdhu?" Padmini asking

"They laugh loud all the time and all their talking is about boys who is handsome and who is not and who is dating whom" Madhu

"What! Are they going to collage to check out boys or for their studies?" Padmini angry

"Exactly mom and when I tried to tell them they called me naive and laugh at me Madhu

"No No Madhu. Do not befriended with this kind of girls my dear. We are cut off from our meals for your studies and your brother and sister, so do not waste your time and concentrate on your studies. And when you become a doctor you will find a good husband please Madhu don't waste your time on this things now Madhu" Padmini concerned and worry

"Don't worry mom nothing will distract me from my goal and my dream to become the greatest doctor in this country" Madhu

Part 2

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Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9

Part 10

Part 11

Part 12

Part 13

Part 14

Part 15

Part 16

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EVIL_ANGEL thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hii..

thankyou so much for pm..

and Congrats on the story !!

just a few days ago.. in ur comment in Tum hi ho thread.. i got to know that u writes too..

but then.. from ur comments.. i have always felt u holds the potential..
and Its not in my place, junior like me, to judge senior like u..
so, all i would like to do i appreciate !!😳

fab start..
fully day to day life things..
everyone is not filthy rich & everyone dont gets their dreams easily..
and the way madhu's parents are sacrifising.. !
its fav..
and the guy in the bus.. i thought its Stalker Rk.. but it turned out to be sultan.. hmm.. interesting..

now waiting for rk..
all the best with ur story :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

Hii..

thankyou so much for pm..

and Congrats on the story !!

just a few days ago.. in ur comment in Tum hi ho thread.. i got to know that u writes too..

but then.. from ur comments.. i have always felt u holds the potential..
and Its not in my place, junior like me, to judge senior like u..
so, all i would like to do i appreciate !!😳

fab start..
fully day to day life things..
everyone is not filthy rich & everyone dont gets their dreams easily..
and the way madhu's parents are sacrifising.. !
its fav..
and the guy in the bus.. i thought its Stalker Rk.. but it turned out to be sultan.. hmm.. interesting..

now waiting for rk..
all the best with ur story :)


My dear lovely friend

I appreciate your opinion a lot cause you are my fav writer here in the forum your sotries just tke me to another world

yes I write long time ago but all my novels are in Arabic it is my first one to write it in English so I considered as junior and you are my senior here my dear friend

about the sotry
yes this story is Rishabala but RK entry will be little late I hope you will not got bored
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start, superb..!!
Madhu is from a middle class family who's aspiring to become a doctor..
& at first i thought the guy who helped her is Rk, but it's sultan..
Madhu found him handsome but I'm sure her opinion will change after seeing our Rishab..
Thanks for the pm..
Update soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for ur first story in this forum,
Superb start,
Malik's are from middle class family to give best to their daughter and to fulfill her dream they are sacrificing so much,they're best and lovely parents
thought the guy who helped Madhu is Rk,but he is Sultan,
waiting for Rk's entry,
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hend congrats on the story
Amazing update, I loved it.
Madhu'a parents are adorable, love the bond they share. Madhu is an aspiring doctor and her parents have sacrificed a lot for her.
I thought the guy who helped Madhu is RK but he turned out to be Sultan.
Is RK their professor.
Continue soon.
Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing start Hend ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: harini_

Congrats for ur first story in this forum,
Superb start,
Malik's are from middle class family to give best to their daughter and to fulfill her dream they are sacrificing so much,they're best and lovely parents
thought the guy who helped Madhu is Rk,but he is Sultan,
waiting for Rk's entry,
continue soon


Thank you dear for your lovely reply

Yes Madhu is coming from loving and happy simple family that is why love is so important for her more than anything else

I know all of you will think it is RK
RK entry will be late
please be patience with me a little till RK appear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishu007

Nice start, superb..!!

Madhu is from a middle class family who's aspiring to become a doctor..
& at first i thought the guy who helped her is Rk, but it's sultan..
Madhu found him handsome but I'm sure her opinion will change after seeing our Rishab..
Thanks for the pm..
Update soon..


Thank you dear for your lovely reply
I know all will think him RK but he is Sultan

I will update weekly with ALLAH welling
I'm writing the rest right now and I reached to part 4
but I feel it is better if I made update weekly



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya2010

Hend congrats on the story

Amazing update, I loved it.
Madhu'a parents are adorable, love the bond they share. Madhu is an aspiring doctor and her parents have sacrificed a lot for her.
I thought the guy who helped Madhu is RK but he turned out to be Sultan.
Is RK their professor.
Continue soon.
Waiting for the next update.


I'm glade you loved the start of my story
thank you so much my dear for this warm reply

you gussied it right he will be professor but he will enter little late in our story

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