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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 12
Awesome update
Rk confessed his feelings for Madhu
Padmini wanted to respect her daughte decision
Sultan didn't show any feeling for her but he got I'll due to some stress.
When will Madhu stop this Sultan mantra
What is Sultan up to?
I hope it's not some proposal for Madhu
Waiting for next update
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: magicalmirage

Part 12

Awesome update
Thank you so much

Rk confessed his feelings for Madhu
Yes he feels they are his family now and consider him from the family and it is wrong to hide his intentions from them

Padmini wanted to respect her daughte decision
Her daughter's happiness is the most important for her

Sultan didn't show any feeling for her but he got I'll due to some stress.
When will Madhu stop this Sultan mantra
Not now

What is Sultan up to?
I hope it's not some proposal for Madhu
You will know next update

Waiting for next update
Thanks for pm
You are very welcome


Thank you so much for your lovely comment
I'm waiting it from long time
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Hend_Refai

Thank you for correcting me my dear



ur welcome😛
Edited by LovelyUmang5 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
OMG!! You came here also?
Hmmm..
I am not lovelyUmang to post creative comments!
@lovely

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Sorry for the distubance @Hend_Refai
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: MyDriYa

OMG!! You came here also?
Hmmm..
I am not lovelyUmang to post creative comments!
@lovely

&
Sorry for the distubance @Hend_Refai

& why can't I cme here..
i vl go wherever i feel like.. people anyways love my company😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: MyDriYa

OMG!! You came here also?
Hmmm..
I am not lovelyUmang to post creative comments!
@lovely

&
Sorry for the distubance @Hend_Refai


there is no disturbance my dear
you both are my friends

and this post is your as much it is mine

please feel free here to comment whenever you want my lovely friends
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

& why can't I cme here..
i vl go wherever i feel like.. people anyways love my company😆


Sure my dear
your comments are so funny and you and your comments are welcome anywhere


here is some tea and snacks
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Posted: 7 years ago


Part #13

"Sultan. Do you want something?" Madhu

"Yes I need to tell aunty important thing" Sultan

Madhu heart stopped thinking that he will confess his feeling for her parents

"Ok come" Madhu

"Aunty I want to tell you something" Sultan

"Yes Sultan. I'm listening" Padmini

"I need you to take care of my mother. Because I wall leave in morning" Sultan

"Leave? Where will you leave? And why?" Madhu shocked

"I will go to Dubai tomorrow morning. My flight will be 6am. I got good job opportunity there. And I must go" Sultan

Madhu couldn't hear anything else she ran to her room to cry alone.

Dear diaries

For years now, I am waiting for your love. For years now, I love you in silence. For years now, you are always with me. Now you want to go. Now you want to leave me. Now you want to go for a year! A year. What am I supposed to do now? Am I supposed to wait for you another year? If you said you love me, I can wait for you all my life. But you didn't say anything. I got nothing from you. After all these years waiting for you to notice my love. Waiting for you to confess your love. You want me to wait another year. And after this year what will happen Sultan. Will you confess your feeling? Or will I wait for another year and another year till the day I see you marry another woman. I can't wait any longer Sultan. You choose to leave me. Mom was right. It is all my imagination. You never loved me. It was always me not you. Good bye Sultan.

Next day in college, RK noticed that Madhu is so sad her eyes was red and swollen. He knew something wrong happened. But he doesn't know what to do. To console her. What make her sad like this and cry all night. He watched her from distance trying to know what is wrong with her.

Madhu was going out from college after a long day. She is so tired and the land was muddy because of heavy rain night. Suddenly her leg slipped and she was going to fall on the ground but she found a strong hand held her hand to prevent her from falling. She looked and found RK was holding her hand. He helped her to stand straight but her leg is stuck on cesspit cover. He leaned to free her leg trying his best not to hurt her. But while he was trying her shoe slipped from her leg and dropped down in the cesspit. He looked at her with sorry look. She got very angry from him. She lost her shoe. How could she go home now? RK stood up after he freed her leg

"I'm sorry" RK

"Now what can I do? How will I go home? I can't walk like this," Madhu almost crying

"Just wait here. I'll be back in minute RK

After a minute, she saw him coming with bottle of water in his hand. He poured water on her leg for her to wash it. And when it got clean he asked her to wait for him just another minute. After a minute, he came back in his car.

"Get in" RK

"What?" Madhu

"You can't go home without your shoe. How will you walk?" RK

"But sir it is ok. You can go. I'll manage" Madhu

"Tell me how you will manage and I will go" RK

"But sir" Madhu

"No but get in" RK

"Ok thank you sir" Madhu accepting his offer. Knowing that she has no other option. Because she can't walk on streets with her bare feet.

In the way, back home RK was driving and Madhu sitting beside him on passenger seat. He started to recall her image with her legs covered in mud so angry and her shoe deep down in the cesspit. He couldn't control his laugh. And as much he resisting his laugh her image flash in his head and he couldn't resist any more so he laughed hard and loud.

"What?" Madhu

"Nothing" RK

"No what are you laughing at Madhu

"I just remembered how you looked back there" RK

Madhu getting angry

"I don't think it wasn't funny" Madhu

"Sorry, sorry" RK continue laughing

Madhu was amazed seeing him laugh hard

"Strange" Madhu

"What is it?" RK

"Nothing" Madhu

"No tell me. I hate incomplete sentences" RK

"It is the first time I see you laugh. And I know you from years" Madhu

"I'm human Ms. Malik. I'm not made from plastic. I laugh and I cry" RK

"I think I know you as a teacher" Madhu

"Yes but there is human behind this teacher image" RK

Few minutes of silence passed before RK asked her

"Is everything alright with you?" RK

"Yes. Why are you asking?" Madhu

"I saw you today you were crying" RK

"It is nothing" Madhu

"OK as you like" RK not convinced with her answer

"It is just the exams pressure. That is all" Madhu

"You don't need to worry about your exams. I know you. You are the best student I ever teach. You will be great doctor soon. So don't worry from exams" RK

"You sir saying that!" Madhu

"Yes because I know you the best and know what your potentials are" RK

"Here is my house thank you sir" RK

"It is ok. Do your best and don't worry. Everything will be ok" RK

"Thank you sir" Madhu

"Bye Ms. Malik" RK

RK was worry about Madhu. He felt she has a problem. He called Padmini

"Hello mom how are you?" RK

"I'm fine Rishabh, how are you?" Padmini

"Is everything ok in home?" RK

"Yes dear. Why are you asking?" Padmini

"Nothing mom, but your voice is different" RK

"I just have cold nothing to worry" Padmini

"Please mom take care of yourself. I will visit you tomorrow" RK

"It is ok son. Don't leave your work for me. It is just cold" Padmini

"Don't worry I don't have college tomorrow. So I will visit you" RK

"Ok I'm waiting" Padmini

"Don't forget Madhu will not know that I'm coming" RK

"Don't worry she will know nothing" Padmini


Next day at Madhu house

"How are you mom" RK

"I'm fine Rishabh. Don't worry it is cold" Padmini

"Will you please take care of yourself and rest" RK

"How can I take a rest. You know I have three kids. Who takes a rest with three kids" Padmini

"But your health is the most important" RK

"Don't worry dear it is ok I used to work hard" Padmini

"Mom please help me in this math problem" Aryan

"See, no chance to rest" Padmini smiling at RK

"Ok Aryan I will help you in it. Come show me your problem" RK

"Good so mom you explain to me this science topic" Trishna

"Hey kids mom is tired can you please leave her take some rest" RK

"But if she didn't help us who will? You?" Aryan in challenging tone to RK

"Ok I will help you both. First Aryan show me your math problem. Then I will help you Trish with your science topic" RK

"Leave them RK I will take care of them" Padmini

"No you will rest. And I will be with them" RK

"Mom I'm hungry" Aryan

"Yes mom please cook for me too I'm hungry" Trish

RK look at them in upset

"I told you. With three children, you will never have a chance to rest. Who will cook now? I have to do it. You will have your breakfast with us" Padmini laughing

"Ok mom. Please do simple breakfast. Don't exhaust yourself" ok RK

"Ok dear" Padmini

RK helped Aryan and Trish with their studies then they all had their breakfast. Aryan and Trish fighting as usual. And RK and Padmini watching and laughing

Dear diary

Today I went to Madhu house. I had breakfast there. I was very happy there. Feeling to be among loving family. Feel the worm of their love. The kids' noises. Their laughter. Their energy. I feel blessed to know this family. I can't wait till the day I marry Madhu and be with them forever. But seeing Madhu sad was very hard for me. I felt helpless. I didn't know what to do to help her. I hope everything is ok with her. I hope it is only exams pressure nothing else. I wish her happiness forever. I promise you Madhu I will do all my best to make you happy.

Dear diary

For two days now I go to college and back alone Sultan. You left me when I need you the most. You know how hard for me these days. My final exams will start in few days. And I needed your support. I need to feel you with me. I need to see your face every morning when I go to my exams. I need seeing your eyes asking me. How was my exam? I need you Sultan

You know yesterday when I was coming home my foot slipped and I was almost fall in mud. But thanks to God. RK was there. He helped me. Yes, he dropped my shoe and I had to come home with bare foot. But he did all he can. And for the first time I see him laughing. He has the cutest dimples I ever see. He is right. He is human who laugh and cry. I always see him as teacher. It was the first time for me to notice him as human. I think he is a good one too.

Little note

I tried to make comedy update I don't know how to write funny scenes so I tried to copy this scene from Supernatural serial

I know this update is far from comedy I just suck in it so please forgive me for that


I lost my shoe

Part 14

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Edited by Hend_Refai - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hendooo 🤗 , I think i'm the first to reply this time 😃
as usual i was a wonderful updates ( i read the rest in one go 😆 ) and let me tell you
i wished they never end , they where THAT good .

I'm glad that Rk found a family to feel belonged to 😳 , and now he wants to marry Madhu 👏 .
i just hope he reeeally love her not only like her and the idea of a family ( though i feel he loves her , but he loves her 'family' a bit more )

So Dipali showed her true colors in the stupidest way 😆 ( suits her) , but i was shocked to see that Ria did too ( she seemed more decent and hoped she would stand with madhu against dipali ) .

Sultan in the other hand is the one that is confusing me 😕 ..
i feel that he is really loves madhu , and when he got sick , it WAS because of Padmini's revelation .
and i think that he took this job to run away , and to let her be ' happy ' .
and if so then he is selflessly stupid 👎🏼 ( I know we all are rooting for Rishbala , but i had to state it 😆 ) .

In the end , I must say I REALLY LOVE your story and wished that the updates where endlessly looong ( greedy me , i know 😛 ) .. keep up the wonderful work and of course i would be honored to proof read the chapters if you needed me ( isn't that what sisters are for 😆😳 ) .

May Allah bless you ❤️

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Posted: 7 years ago
very succinct manner of writing and very innovative and fresh story Superb update
Loved it Waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear❤️

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