Rishbala TS 'FroZen uNder The MoOn' ||COMPLETED@27|| (31/08) - Page 6

Originally posted by: Lily30

Loved the first part
Very thrilling, eager for the next part.
Thank you for the pm

Originally posted by: madhurish

First..

Resed first but took forever to unres... sorry for the delay dear.. hell busy these days...🤣
Its really okk.. Coz i know u cant read my story just like a newspaper🤣

okay coming to ur 10th story... congrats first for writing 10 wonderful stories... each of its own kind... so unique & different... but one common element in all stories... FUN!! all ur stories are so fun filled & crazy... and hilarious... so like my type...🤣
Hahaha... Thankyou..!! U are inspiration for that fun element in the story😉

/DIV]
[DIV]Well, this story is so different from ur other works... i really loved it..
Thanks again.. Just experimenting with madhu & rk..!!

/DIV][DIV]haha... madhu seems scary... but surely she faced a brutal death i guess... bcos of those creeps Ria, Mukkund & even Dipali..
Yeah.. They made her this much vindictive..!!

Rk i m not sure... guess he must be innocent... but still madhu is tormenting him with her slight teasing & hurting sessions...🤣
Her is taking full advantage of Rk's innocence..!!😉

haha.. Madhu scared the shit out of Dipali.. LOL!!!

i thought Rk will also get scared a bit but he was so cool & composed.. he didn't pee on his pants.. LOL!! in fact he seemed to enjoying the cool air blowing behind his neck LOL...
Who wont enjoy the sweet tortures of sexy ghost..😆

& those wild tortures... he must be sexually aroused with her touch...
Those tortures by madhu in dipali's body was suppossed to bbe painful🤔

but then too he was in control... may be he didn't want to do it with Dips... LOL!!
Ofcourse they are ** just friends😉

but what to do... madhu has no body.. & she could find only my sexy vamps body... well, her mission was to kill her culprits... & rk is for fun romance i guess... LOL!!!🤣
Haan.. But she is counting on Rk too as her culprit.. But She's giving Rk punishment differently..

Frozen under the moon?? did mukkund & gang took madhu to mount Everest & abandoned her in the freezing cold & thats how she died?? LOL!!! poor guess i know...🤣
Not poor, hilarious guess🤣 ... I have never thought this side of the title..🤣

Rk's fiance is Dips... but cares the least for her.. LOL!! he wasn't bothered whether she comes out with him for dinner or to select the cards.. may be that becos he wanted madhu to kill her when he was gone out LOL!! see, he admitted the fact that he felt her presence... but he still left his fiance to some strange spirit... to a ghost (no offense... ghosts are not that bad... LOL)... a loving fiance will never do that... that proved Rk didn't love or even care for Dips.. LOL!!!🤣
Lol.. Ur stipulations.. U are turning the table on Rk😆... He is not a "Loving fiance".. He consider her more as a friend.. And thought to develop love for her After the marriage..😉.. But mariiage is not gonna happen..!! Coz he is attracted to a sizzling ghost..( who is not that bad)

../DIV]
[DIV]now i wonder how will a human & ghost will unite?? will madhu walk in to his body?? then their bodies will become one nah?? 🤣
Wah..!! Most convenient of becoming one naa..🤣

okay... as ever enjoyed reading ur interesting story... thanks dear... keep writing more.. will be waiting for next...🤣
Thank you sudha.. Am glad u like it.. And thanks for this Alag che comment..!!

/DIV]
[DIV]i m in a good mood... so simply ROLFing... don't mind hun!!🤣

Originally posted by: mahimesha

superb story
supernaturalhmmm

Originally posted by: manna43

Congrats u reach at ten ,many more to come na.
Thanks dear..!! Hehe.. I dont know..!!☺️

Awesome part.Madhu is spirit n come to take her revenge.
Yes.. Vindictive madhu...

Mukund out n ria is in coma.
Ya, their destined place, lol

Sultan n sikky next.
Yup..!!

Madhu hurt rk too ,why.
May be he is involved too..!!

DIV]Update soon n thanks for pm.[/DIV]

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

Awesome n different n even funny tooo
thanks dear...!!

What's the connection between madhu n all others
Deadly connection😆

mukund n ria seems to be one of her killers may b sikky n sultan also the culprits but what has rk dipls has to do with her!!??
Good question.

Maybe she used dips to kill her culprits but what about rk...

Wanna know it...eagerly waiting for next part

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
My pleasure..

It was so happy to see you with another story on Rishbala.😊
Hehe.. Thats because of the readers like you.. Who supports me throughout..!!

It was So Thrilling Part.😊

Madhu was dead😭 and her antic were so Interesting.
A different kind of madhu..

Madhu wanted to enter in Dipali's Body and the Whole Conversation was so Interesting.😊
Glad u like it.. Its my fav part too..!!

Rk Part was so Nice,He didn't said anything on Madhu's acts.😊

Dipali was also Nice.😊

The Whole Incidents were so Interestingly explained.😊
Thankyou..!!

DIV]

Who killed Madhu? Waiting for this.😊

[DIV]Please Update Next Part soon.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

Originally posted by: Supervampire

vry scary nd fab ts
scary..😆 thanks..


part 1 is amazing...is madhu taking revenge?
Yeah.. Thats why she did all that to mukund & ria..


there is something related to sultan.sikki, ria nd mukund
thanx for pm

Originally posted by: .Tanmaya.

Congratulations on your new story
Thanks Tanmaya...!"

Thrilling start of the story
waiting for the next part