RM FF: Entwined - Thread II (Chapter 32 POSTED) 6/04 - Page 6

Originally posted by: ..Steph..

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I am actually gonna Edit this post man ! :D Not kidding :D

Originally posted by: arshisfan

As usual another wonderful chapter 😃
Thank you so much, JJ!
The scene where Rudra discovers that secret room is my favorite in this chapter, the anticipation, the clues he keeps finding till it dawns on him that Shaurya actually might be the person who killed Rishbala!
I am happy you liked that scene! You know how I wrote that scene, don't you? Haha! It was fun to write!
I liked his emotions and his turmoil in the whole chapter actually, that gut feeling he had about something going wrong with his brother which is confirmed by inspector Agnihotri
Yes, he knew somehing was wrong... he had this vague feeling ever since Rishaan drove off with Harsh.
He must be going through a lot, frustration, anger, pain... So many things, he is such a strong man actually for not having another breakdown, but I guess now is not the right time since there are many things at stake and he needs to save his brother
He is going through a lot... a lot is going on his mind... that you may find only later... yes but he is strong. Breakdown? Yes, you would expect him to breakdown emotionally... but actually... okay let it be.. 😆 you will see... 😆
Maya thought for a while about what Viraj told her, but she didn't ponder much over it, as you said she must be doubting something about Rishaan's feelings towards her but she doesn't want to know, let's see what will happen in the future, I'm especially waiting for her bonding with Rudra but I know she will feel guilty for Rishaan because she will hold herself responsible for what happened to him
I know you want her to think more... look ahead... as I said in the note... it's all coming to a close...
Her interaction with Viraj was good by the way
Thanks!
The last scene was another good scene though a painful one, Rishaan is being tortured by that freak, but what you like about Rishaan is his witty replies and his tit for tat with Shaurya. Poor Rishaan will be tortured even more but Shaurya doesn't know that he is holding the wrong Rk captive, I'm really waiting for the scene where Rudra beats the hell out of him, for now we are helpless and we will have to stand more torture sessions on Rishaan by Shaurya!
Let's see for how long can Rishaan be strong and witty...

@Bold- I am waiting for that scene as well!

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Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Thanks JJ for your comment! Love you! 🤗

Originally posted by: arshisfan

Love you too 🤗

Originally posted by: war_is_peace

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ps- very very sorry for the late unres :(

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i like how rudra slowly reaches to the point of realisation that rishbala were probably murdered in thier last life.

Yes.. it kind of all come crashing down to him...

i also like how he called bittuji with full authority ...as if a lifetime hasnt passed at all!! infact he still gets angry with bittuji just like olden days 😆

Hahah yeah! 😆

maya is a lost soul...she really needs some serious shaking to be pushed to being herself really. with viraaj's talks maya will soon be back to her old self

She is trying to find meaning in her life... live life beyond survival... viraj's words will help her a lot..

rudra is in panic. poor thing is losing from all ends right now...maya rishaan meera...its all going to affect him worse. he has always considered himself responsible for watever happened to rishaan. this time he will lose it wen he discovers rishaan in this state ...

Oh yes... true. This is going to affect him worse... of course... after Rishaan. 😆

love the rishaan shaurya convo. waiting for more

Thanks... there is a lot more to come.. but you already know that! 😆

i loved agnihotri's character. straight and quick.

Yeah... she is. I am glad you like her.

Originally posted by: mimibm

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First of all thank god Rishaan is still alive!!

Yes.. thank God. 😆

This Shaurya is Rudra's arch nemesis from his past life..that creep was a bloody juvenile delinquent back at that time to have set people on fire to get revenge...no wonder all these years he has led a shady 2nd life as a serial killer and God knows what else...he even had his eyes on Madhubala...and now he wants to exact his revenge once again by attacking Reeshan...I hope RK/Rudra will have the fortune this time to stop him from his heinous crime and bring his crimes to the public eyes and make him suffer the due punishment...

Yes, Shaurya is one extremely twisted character. And I also hope Rudra will be able to take him down.. but let's see how that will happen.

Maya is trying to understand herself through her almost candid conversations with Viraj...it is a kind of introspection for her and I hope she will get her answers anytime soon...

Yes. Viraj is a refreshing change in her life. He does not know much about her and that is always an added bonus and he is warm and friendly. Honest. A lot of things she never gets to see in people. She has been through a lot... she will take her time because she now wants to live beyond survival. she is trying to understand people around her and their emotions. She has been a very isolated person socially and emotionally. She is trying to find meaning in her life.

Reeshan is face to face with a torturous and painful death in the hands of Shaurya...I really want to hope and see that he has the strength to sustain till his caring brother reaches to save him...

Yeah... let's see how long his strength and wit last...

Waiting eagerly for the next update..

Originally posted by: GERUA

marvelous update