RM FF: Entwined - Thread II (Chapter 32 POSTED) 6/04 - Page 4

Originally posted by: manna43

Congrats for new thread.Awesome updates. Thank you so much. Lake scene is like something is happening in front of my eyes.That's the best compliment you can give me. Thank you so much. Poor rishaan ,Yes, poor Rishaan. 😆 Has he some painful past. Ummm... Oh yeah! But let's see... 😆

Viraj is vibrant one but he is also after a delusion as like meera. Love often does make you delusional I think. 😆 Ur all characters r well defined n story is well narrated. Thank you so much. You are too kind. plz continue soon.

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Beautiful chapters Maria. A long update.. Sorry i could not comment last chapters because of lack of time. But this time i have to comment because we have reached a new thread and that calls for a celebration 🥳

Thank you so much. I missed you and your comments. I am glad you could comment this time. Means a lot. 😳 and yes... what do you know! A new thread! 😆

Rudra and Rishaan witnessed his real face in the lake. There were many dead bodied in the lake. I am really scared of Shurya now. Who is he actually? I thought he is an eccentric nymphomniac director. But now it seems like he is not only a pervert but a serial killer also. I am really feeling bad for Kapoor brothers and Maya.

Yes, he is much much more than what he seems, which is definitely a good thing for our protagonists.

Rudra approaches his mentor and father figure Prakash for further advice. And he helps him. Thank god he called doctor for Rudra. I really like Praksh and his ever sleeping old servent Ramu 😆. They went to excavate the property. At the same time Rishaan called creep and informed him that he is ready to meet him. Rudra wanted them to meet in a public place (me too..) but Mr creep called him to his studio. Rishaan agreed. I hope Rishaan is ok. Hope Rudra reach him in time.

I am glad you liked Prakash and Ramu. 😆 Yeah ... let's hope Rudra gets there on time...

Maya enjoyed with Viraaj, i hope so. Viraj is a nice guy. He is in love with Meera since childhood. Meera loves Rishaan and Virj knows that. Meera wants Viraj to move on, but he is not ready for that. he knows that Maya is Rk's Madhubala. Maya overheard their conversation.

Yes, it is almost a love cycle. 😆 ... a love jalebi of sorts. 😆 and that was one awkward moment for Maya.

I have a few doubt about Mr. Creep, I conclude tht this guy is really intelligent. Normally such psychopath's turn out to be extremely brilliant,.Does he know that Rishaan is not The RK?? He wanted to direct Rishaan before Maya entering BW. Did he want to finish him before he reach Madhubala? Did shourya know the real RK and Madhubala? I mean did he direct them in a movie ? Bittujii aware of him or not? Why did he kill all those people? Why is he behind Maya? I remember his dream from chapter 23, He was dreaming about Maya right? then maya's mom came in and attacked him with a chair and he wake up!! Did this guy ever mess with RK because of his obsession to Madhu?

Spot on about his dream. And you ask intriguing questions! Some of them will be answered in the next chapter itself.

Please update the next chapter soon. I am dying with curiosity. Thanks for the double update dear

Originally posted by: mimibm

Reserving my space for comment...I will read the chapters now and get back here again 😛

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OMG OMG!! That was way more intense than I could ever imagine!!
Thanks!!! 😳
In my last comment in Thread 1, I was still in the catch up mode, so trying to understand the characters all over again. But now these two updates have been so eventful and action packed!!
I am glad you caught up and that you enjoyed the chapters!
First of all, the brothers going after the monster 're-incarnated' without taking much help with them was kind of reckless I suppose. But even then they were not exactly privy of what to expect...
It was more Rudra's restlessness actually but you can't really blame him, given his set of mind and the fact that he could not expect Shaurya of being a serial killer.
Their accident was terrifying, but what followed after that was way more horrific. You won't believe me, I read the first part and that very night I had a scary nightmare which made me wait for some more time to get back to the story 😛 ...so you know how efficient you are to portray scenes with your words in your readers' mind 😳
Woah! That's... the best compliment ever. So, maybe I should try my hands on horror! If I don't get scare myself writing it that is... 😆
So Shaurya is a diabolical character who lives two extremely different lives at the same time...no wonder Kapoor brothers would face lots of hurdles to bring his heinous crimes to light.
Yes, Shaurya is very twisted.
As usual, the conversation between the brothers is cold and detached even after the horrific accident, though it seems Rudra's persistent attempts at getting into his brother's head are coming to effect slowly.
Yes, they are detached in many ways... let's see how the latest developments affect that.
Viraj was like a blow of fresh air in this assemblage of people haunted by their past...he loves Meera and does not deter from making it clear to her, as well as make her realise her futile attachment to Reeshan. I suppose now Maya will try to help him in her way, although it would not be accepted by Meera all too well. Or may be Maya will try to keep herself away from all this fiasco, as she already knows her position in Reeshan's life is all too complicated for her as well as Meera. But finally it was good to see her getting some sort of comfort from Bittuji.
Yes, it is all very complicated. I am glad you liked Bittuji-Maya scene.
And now, the showstopper...what was that? Shaurya must have been informed about the involvement of police in the dead bodies found from his property. Is he going to take Reeshan as hostage to get himself safely out of the way? Or is it going to be more gruesome than that? It felt as if I am sitting at the edge of my seat and watching this hair-raising thriller on a big screen.
Let's see what he has planned for Rishaan.
You are a god-gifted writer...this story should get appreciations from a bigger population if you publish it beyond TV show forums..
Oh thank you so much, You are too kind. Means a lot coming from you since I love reading your stories.
Waiting for more...let's see what is going on in that convolutions of your grey matter
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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!! outstanding updates dear...loved it...Rishaan is so complicated...Meera can have any guy , but viraj is mine...He is funny , adorable and a little weird...loved him...

Originally posted by: zelja89

Read both chapters in a go, loved them. Please continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: silverfire

Mind blowing update.

Thank you so much.

Omg! What was that in the water bed.?! 😲 Eeeks... It must be horrifying to see so many bodies. Poor Rishaan n Rudra. They must be traumatised by now. Shourya is into something deep.

Yes, it was. And Shaurya is really into something deep and twisted. You will see.

Love viraj guy. How can a girl choose bw him n Rishaan? Very difficult. Harish cannot forget Meera n meera cannot forget Rishaan. What a triangle. There is Maya in the middle. Still not sure about her thoughts about Rishaan.

Yes, it's a love jalebi of sorts. 😆

Love Maya n bittuji convo. I thought he is going to break down n tell her everything.

But Bittuji is very loyal to his chief. Won't do anything he won't approve of.

Rishaan walked into a trap. Shaurya didn't believe him fully. Oh God! Hope he is alright. Hope he doesn't blackmail Maya with this now.

Yeah... let's hope nothing of that sort happens.

So many parallel tracks n it's all beautifully interwoven. Great writing.

Thank you so much. Happy that you think so.

Thoroughly enjoyed the update.

That makes me happy.

Thanks for the PM.

As usual another wonderful chapter 😃

The scene where Rudra discovers that secret room is my favorite in this chapter, the anticipation, the clues he keeps finding till it dawns on him that Shaurya actually might be the person who killed Rishbala!

I liked his emotions and his turmoil in the whole chapter actually, that gut feeling he had about something going wrong with his brother which is confirmed by inspector Agnihotri

He must be going through a lot, frustration, anger, pain... So many things, he is such a strong man actually for not having another breakdown, but I guess now is not the right time since there are many things at stake and he needs to save his brother


Maya thought for a while about what Viraj told her, but she didn't ponder much over it, as you said she must be doubting something about Rishaan's feelings towards her but she doesn't want to know, let's see what will happen in the future, I'm especially waiting for her bonding with Rudra but I know she will feel guilty for Rishaan because she will hold herself responsible for what happened to him


Her interaction with Viraj was good by the way

The last scene was another good scene though a painful one, Rishaan is being tortured by that freak, but what you like about Rishaan is his witty replies and his tit for tat with Shaurya. Poor Rishaan will be tortured even more but Shaurya doesn't know that he is holding the wrong Rk captive, I'm really waiting for the scene where Rudra beats the hell out of him, for now we are helpless and we will have to stand more torture sessions on Rishaan by Shaurya!


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