Damn!! That was one intense chapter!! That pain, the gore, that fierce passion in all aspects, be that the love for a brother, a friend, a crush or just simply the hatred for an enemy. Girl, you nailed every single emotion with perfection! 👏 Not sure if any of your other readers have noticed or not, but me having read and caught up with this story just recently, i can see the huge and amazing development in your writing! You have just been getting better and better. Believe me on that. Did i even mention how much I loved this chapter?! Like when the first part came to an end, i was just flipping out here for the next part! All i could think of was "This girl better not leave me at such a cliffhanger" and hank god you didn't! But if i am not wrong then there still is a second half to this chapter right? Woman, you better upload that soon, or believe me i will spam (I have done it before, and i even have a spamming team so do not challenge me okay? 😆
Meera + ViratNow because she didn't have much in this chapter (or just part 1 of it 😛 ) there isn't much to say but we got to know how much Viraj actually means to her. He's her best friend, who just happens to have fallen for her (ah, this destroys so many pure relationships *shakes head*), and she obviously wants to keep him in her life because come on, who would want to lose their best friend right? Him giving her a condition was a very shit move to be honest. I like him but then giving options to a person who you love and care about just because she has feelings for someone else, meh idk, just seems very hurtful to me (for Meera i mean).
And well, finally got to see more of the Meera and Rishaan ship 😉 What's their couple name btw? MeShaan? RishEra? MeRi? RiMe? RM2? 😆 Hahah, well until you decide on a ship name i'll call the MeShaan just because RishEra reminds me of RishBlala and we all know that they aren't even the reincarnated version of them 😆 Now since the beginning Meera has been showing clear interest in Rishaan who appreciates her alright but hasn't shown any signs of attraction back. But, here we got to see more of Meera's crush on him, the desperation of knowing that he is ine and that the news is a false, the desperation of not hearing anything else, that kind of desperation which made her break down!
I know i am probably wrong, but please tell me that when he was looking at the screen and saw 'her' it was Meera. For some reason i just don't think it was Maya, because first, no name was mentioned, second Meera is his PA so she would be present at those interview panels too, where he would have gotten a small glimpse from, and last but not least, because it's you writing it! 😆 You fooled us for about a good 8/9 chapters making us believe Rishaan is Rishabh, but nah, it turned out it was Rudra, so sorry to say, i am not trusting you on couple matters now 😆
Maya
Gosh I already feel like my comment is getting way too long and that you will probably just end up skipping it due to it's length. But as I told you in my last comment, I hadn't commented much about the plot or it's characters, so you will just have to put up with my essay long comment dear 😆 😉
Anyway off to Maya! Now she has been intriguing from the start! Especially those nightmares, which i feel you kinda forgot about. At the beginning you mention how she either has sleepless nights due to those 'Madhu' nightmares or just past nightmares with Big Joe (i think that was the name right), and even same goes to Rishaan, both were taking sleeping tablets because either they wouldn't sleep at night. I know you have shown it at various times, especially with Maya, but i think i'd like to see Rishaan's struggle too. And now his past is kinda coming out too.
Okay back to Maya (yea i get distracted a lot 😆), now seeing her panicking was something i loved. Not because she was panicking and all, because i got to see the Maya you introduced us to. The one with Anxiety and panic attacks. It just add's so much to her character because she isn't just fighting a battle with life and problems around her or related to her. No, she is fighting a battle with herself too. Because Panic attacks are usually triggered with memories that haunt you as a person, gosh I LOVE Depth in characters!!
I kinda like the relation Maya and Rishaan share, i know she explained to Meera, but her questioning her back kinda set me off guard too. But I'd like to believe that them two actually just share a friendly bond, someone whom she can trust and rely on. Kind of like a best friend whom you look up to and turn to in times of need. I would love to read more about these two, and see this special bond of their develop.
Ah!! And that phone call😳 They both trusted in each other and soothed one another's pain. Gosh the intensity was erupting in that scene!! Tbh, whenever we get a scene with Maya and Rudra, its intense. And I believe that will be the key to their attraction towards one another. Rudra might love her already but let's not forget, he loves Madhu and as Rishabh, the Rudra is yet to fall for Maya. The same goes for Maya, she too has to fall for him, because they are two whole new beings brought up in two different continents with two very disturbing pasts. So yes i think this un-named bond, trust and comfort which they receive from each other will make them fall for each other. And what shall be the name of this ship? 😉
Shaurya
Well I like him just for the psychopath he is 😆 Okay I know how you gave a note and all, saying how it's gonna get dark and all, and we should prepare ourselves or that we might not even like it. But Girl, I LOVE THIS!! You just made me like this story all the me just by adding this violence and torture in it, because reading those other mushy mushy romantic stories is torture!! One needs pain to make a story seem more energetic! (P.S. Believe me i am not a psycho 😆) But i really enjoy reading this obsessive, insane and manic killer!!! I want to know more about the younger him and how and why exactly he killed RishBala - would be such a better closure than the one the show gave us *sight*. And i am interested in finding out if he knows or has doubts of Maya and one of the RK's being reincarnated? I know to any person to believe such would be crazy but he is a director right? A story teller. Plus a Maniac. It shouldn't be too hard for him to believe because story tellers have this broad imagination in which anything can fit in tbh.
Okay gonna cut him short because i still have the RK's to go through and already this must be as long as your update 😆
Rudra
As i have said before, it still blows my mind that he has the memories of two lives in that brain of his! And I do not just mean romantic memories, but also all his relations with people, his mother, his father, bittuji, Sasuma, ect. And then he has the memories as Rudra, the childhood which will soon be revealed, his brother, Maya. You get what I mean? Crazy!! How hasn't this guy yet suffered from some brain hemorrhage?! 😆
But Yh I am so glad we are finally seeing more of the RK brothers!! I know they care for one another, don't want anyone to say a word against the other but we have never seen them share a real bond. A bond which brother share, who are friends and confine in each other. We know they used to in the past, but something obviously happened which broke our Batman Robin hearts 😭. But then in this chapter we saw how vulnerable Rudra became having maybe lost his brother again. To darkness??
Well phone call, I already mentioned earlier, so lets not repeat that. But yes i would want him to realise and accept that Maya is in fact not Madhu. And he needs to stop looking at her through Rishabh's eyes, but find, love and cherish Maya through Rudra.
Rishaan
Finally!! Made it!! See, i was saving the best fr the last 😆 and am not gonna lie to you, but Rishaan is my favourite character!! I know I should be going gaga over Rudra but it's this guy who keeps me on my feet wanting and craving for more! Hits wits are firstly on point! That attitude is kick ass! He is mysterious! And has a intense and deep past, which gains him brownie points from my side!! 😆 So warning you, you better return Rishaan in one piece or else... *squints eyes*
The torture was beautiful *wipes tear*, but it's that little flashback which caught my attention! I am guessing that he might be his father, and actually I don't know what to even say right now about that. The fact that he knew the belt by weight? The fact that he didn't try to stop his? Resist? Scream for help? My poor heart goes out to him!! 😭 And then the fact that he has been living under a mask all these years, under the mask of the great Superstar RK. He became him, first I always thought it was to get his hype up, because not only did he share the same initials but also that face! But now, it makes me question if he just wanted to escape his own life, live through another's, taste that stardom, the kind that consumes you, drugs you, makes you ride high (his words).
And him and Meera, idk i just have this feeling he was thinking about her when he saw her on TV, because even though he has shown no signs of attraction, he still kept her as his PA since this long. Yes she might be good at her job, but this is the superstar who has replaced countless PA's and yet he did not let her leave. He knows she likes him and i think maybe he does too but considering his past he doesn't want her to get close to him. Rather be a mean brat so that she can hate on him. I am possibly thinking it all wrong, but hey let me dream okay 😆.
Okay I am to tired to continue so whatever i left out, i'll add it with the next part of this chapter comment. Now goodnight I am off to bed 🥱
And Hopefully i didn't bore you with my essay 😆
Edited by Mentally-Insane - 9 years ago
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