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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
wow good update n thanks for pm waiting for next update 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ohhh my gudnesss..,just marvlus, fantastic, Awsm, SPECTACULAR. Itz just Superbbb. I was n d edg fy seat, tensd. Ohhh god. Applause yaarrr. Mindblwng. Sooo d mystery s out. He was behind madhu datz why he s behind maya nw hmmm. Intersting! D best part f dis story. Soooperbbm wating impatiently fr d rest. Why maya s still n dilemaa. When wil she s going 2 realiz her past. Anywayzzz waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Amazing update, loved it, was in trance while reading, waiting for next update, thanks for the PM Maria
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my goodness! What an update?!?!.👏👏 👏I was so tensed while reading this update.
Shaurya had a liking for Madhu. Was thrown out of the sets by RK. Finally killed them both. But now he got the wrong RK. The idiot does not know the real RK is outside waiting to slit his throat for thinking about his biwi n touching his bro.
How r they gonna nab him now? Just hope he does not harm Maya n bittuji too.

Viraj is such a sweetheart. Loved the convo bw him n Maya. Why is Maya so confused? When is she going to realise her true self? I know I'm being so impatient but I'm just waiting for that realisation.

U had me at the edge of my seat while reading this chapter. U r an amazing writer.👏 Can't wait for long for the n t chap. Plz.make it fast.

Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Amazing update Maria ⭐️

Rudra, Prakash and the police team go inside Shaurya's mansion. They found a studio inside. And (If i get it right) there was a small room inside the studio, which is not easily visible to others. As expected the inside secrets were not tolerable to Rudra. Now its very clear that Shaurya is a obsessive pervert fan of Madhubala. Madhubala was his muse, and he was fantasizing her all these years !!yucky fellow 🤢. Rudra could not take it any more. from the drawings found in the room his obsession for Madhu is clear, and he hated RK which is evident from what he did to Rk's pics.they found Maya's audition video too. Rudra thinks bout his hatred for RK and calls Rishaan. He did not pick up. Inspector Smita Agnihotri came to know bout missing Rishaan from his panicked twin . She is angry with them for this wrong move. She should be.. she seems to be a nice lady.

Rudr calls Bittuji asks about who killed him. Bittuji says it was an accident. Rudra had doubts about Shurya. He did not remember anythig but he is familiar with past life incidents. Bittuji confirms Shaurya was there in the studio. Rudra must be feeling dejavu during Bittuji's description about what happend in the studio. Shaurys was planted on request. Yuck!! Pervert was fantasizing her right from the age of 16 😲 Chheee!!! He was thrown out of the sets by RK because of madhu. I actually expected this part.

Viraaj maya scene was nice. Poor Maya is confused wether to have break fast or not. Viraaj came to appologize. Poor guy!! Meera refuse to have break fast with him. He asks Maya to sit with him because he dont want to eat alone. Maya agrees. I am glad that she did not ditch him like Meera😆. Whenever May is alone she is thinking abpout Rishaan. An ardent Rishbala fan in me is not really happy with this.. I want her to think about Rudra. I hope she wont mistaken Rishaan as RK. It will not happen right,.. Maya already called him an imposter.

I dont want Rishaan dead. Not with that pervy's hands. I dont like Rishaan as much as i like Rudra. But still his condition pains me.. Shaurya is too cruel. I cant beleive he killed 8 girls in the worst way possible. Why did he kill them. Did they all look like Madhu?? Or they were fans of Rk?? I can understand RK and Madhu' death. But why did he kill those girls?? I want to know about it first. Pls Maria save Rishaan some how 😭 . I am crying for him. But seems like the intelligent pervert did a mistake in finding the real RK. He actully thinks Rishan as RK !!! Didn't he ever meet Rudra??

Please update the next part soon. Cant wait more.. Please dont let Shaurya meet poor Maya ever again.. Can't even imagine Maya in his clutches again 😭
Ps sorry for typos. My Phone does not like alphabet "a"..


Edited by aan-rish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Hi dear
U r back finally and also started thread 2 congrats at least u didn't left this story in middle like many writers did what a marvelous story and the way u write it. Coming to story all characters r mindblowing rudra very much worried for rishaan what a brothers bond I like prakashs entry and feeling bad for yuv death bittuji feeling guilty not able to caught the real criminal Maya aka madhu hope fully she remember all and don't kill rishaan waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
I see most of you are are anxious with Maya and her inner monologues. 😆 Why she thinks about Rishaan? When she will realize she is Madhu? When she will think about Rudra?

These are all legit questions but the thing is ... it is all intentional. I mean. I know what you are talking about and if I am not showing you all that right now... it's for a reason.
She thinks about Rishaan because she has a relationship with him. I am not talking about any romantic relationship. But she does have a relationship with him, you know. And also, because it is a build up for something that is gonna happen soon. Very soon. Things are gonna change, drastically. The story will enter a new phase... where the characters will change... dynamics will most definitely change. Just bear with all this for two to three more chapters... it's basically coming to a close...

Now, about Maya thinking about Rudra... it's a slow burn... it's going to be that way... rest assured... I have a plan for them too... when this Shaurya episode is over... a lot will change ... Rudra and Maya both will be quite different from what they are now in many ways and so will their equation... ugh! I cannot tell you much... sorry! 😆 I hope I haven't said too much and spoiled anything...

About Maya realizing she is Madhu... well... that may look like a solution to you but it is not all that simple... 😆 ... I have something planned for that as well.. 😆
My answers may have confused you further I know ..I hope you are not mad at me... 😆 I am sorry... but I don't know how else to tell you that all that is happening is intentional and kind of planned... just trust me please... 😆

By the way... whoever is still reading and giving me their feedback.. thank you so much... I won't lie ... it is quite disheartening to see the number of people interested in the story getting decreased so drastically with each chapter... I guess ... it's my fault... but still ... thanks guys for sticking around... means a lot.. I hope I won't let you down too.. 😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yaarrr u R an Outstanding Writtr kk. No doubt n dat CLEAR😊. And regarding d nmbrs, dont b sad yaarrr. Jisko yeh story follow karna hai dey wil do it fr sure. Jisko nahi yaa bhir jisko bhi yeh story dragging lag raha hai let it b, Nvr mind. Agar Ek Loyal readr hai den itz d biggst thng hai naa?? You hav soo many😛😃😃. And yess v knw u hav planss & V trust u cmplty. Aftr alll V waited fr dese long den v can wait nw also. Justt want to sayy dis Story s complty diff noo 1 has brng a concpt lik dis till nw. Sooo cheersss,. Want too sayy dat plzz dont stop dis story due to lak f likes r decreas n nmbr f pplll. V r here, & V will b wid u till d end. & waitinggg eagrlyyy. May b d wrd s wrong😲. V r waiting IMPATIENTLYYY😆😉😛
Edited by aravindam100 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Don't be disheartened. Its a fabulous story. Ur writing style is amazing. Such a thriller. U kept ur readers engrossed. I am a loyal fan of this story. Waiting for next part eagerly.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for clarifying our doubts Maria 😆 I knew Rudra Maya is the end game but i was just worried you know ... 😛. Waiting for the next updates. This is one of the best stories i have ever read. I am eagerly waiting to read more. Shaurya is giving me nightmares .. I feel Maya's pain..

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