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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

wow good update n thanks for pm waiting for next update 🤗


Thank you so much, Chitra! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: aravindam100

ohhh my gudnesss..,just marvlus, fantastic, Awsm, SPECTACULAR. Itz just Superbbb. I was n d edg fy seat, tensd. Ohhh god. Applause yaarrr. Mindblwng. Sooo d mystery s out. He was behind madhu datz why he s behind maya nw hmmm. Intersting! D best part f dis story. Soooperbbm wating impatiently fr d rest. Why maya s still n dilemaa. When wil she s going 2 realiz her past. Anywayzzz waiting...


Oh my God, thanks! 😆
I am so happy you enjoyed the chapter so much and liked the twist.
See, I know your concerns are legit and I tried to explain it to you on the note I posted but I will just add that... Maya is in dilemma because think about it... what all she has been through... what kind of life she has been living till now... she never had love in her life... not even from her mother.. never had a friend... she is very isolated.. alone.. she is opening up ... but it will take time... and about her realizing she is Madhu... as you know she suffered a lot because of the name Madhubala... and how stubborn she is... let's how all that goes...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Amazing update, loved it, was in trance while reading, waiting for next update, thanks for the PM Maria


Thank you so much! Will post the next chapter soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: silverfire

Oh my goodness! What an update?!?!.👏👏 👏I was so tensed while reading this update.

Thank you so much! I am so happy you enjoyed the chapter.
Shaurya had a liking for Madhu. Was thrown out of the sets by RK. Finally killed them both. But now he got the wrong RK. The idiot does not know the real RK is outside waiting to slit his throat for thinking about his biwi n touching his bro.
Yes... Rudra will.. I don't know what to say... Shaurya has destroyed both his worlds in many ways... let's see how Rudra deals with him... but before that ... we will have to see what Shaurya has in store for Rishaan and why exactly he took him.
How r they gonna nab him now? Just hope he does not harm Maya n bittuji too.
It won't be easy... but Rudra will do it, we just have to wait and see how. 😉 And I hope so too...
Viraj is such a sweetheart. Loved the convo bw him n Maya. Why is Maya so confused? When is she going to realise her true self? I know I'm being so impatient but I'm just waiting for that realisation.
Like I told everyone else... you can easily see why is Maya so lost and so hesitant. trust me it is a breakthrough for her ... talking to Viraj... having conversations with him.. making a friend. she has lived a very sorrowful life till now. And about that realization... well it's not really simple.
U had me at the edge of my seat while reading this chapter. U r an amazing writer.👏 Can't wait for long for the n t chap. Plz.make it fast.
Thank you so much. Yes I will post the next chapter really soon.
Thanks for the PM.


Thank you so much!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Amazing update Maria ⭐️

Thank you so much, Arya!
Rudra, Prakash and the police team go inside Shaurya's mansion. They found a studio inside. And (If i get it right) there was a small room inside the studio, which is not easily visible to others. As expected the inside secrets were not tolerable to Rudra. Now its very clear that Shaurya is a obsessive pervert fan of Madhubala. Madhubala was his muse, and he was fantasizing her all these years !!yucky fellow 🤢. Rudra could not take it any more. from the drawings found in the room his obsession for Madhu is clear, and he hated RK which is evident from what he did to Rk's pics.they found Maya's audition video too. Rudra thinks bout his hatred for RK and calls Rishaan. He did not pick up. Inspector Smita Agnihotri came to know bout missing Rishaan from his panicked twin . She is angry with them for this wrong move. She should be.. she seems to be a nice lady.
Yes. Shaurya is very disgusting and twisted. And Smita Agnihotri was right to be angry. She should know the entire truth about the case she is investigating.
Rudr calls Bittuji asks about who killed him. Bittuji says it was an accident. Rudra had doubts about Shurya. He did not remember anythig but he is familiar with past life incidents. Bittuji confirms Shaurya was there in the studio. Rudra must be feeling dejavu during Bittuji's description about what happend in the studio. Shaurys was planted on request. Yuck!! Pervert was fantasizing her right from the age of 16 😲 Chheee!!! He was thrown out of the sets by RK because of madhu. I actually expected this part.
Yes. Chheee! 😆
Viraaj maya scene was nice. Poor Maya is confused wether to have break fast or not. Viraaj came to appologize. Poor guy!! Meera refuse to have break fast with him. He asks Maya to sit with him because he dont want to eat alone. Maya agrees. I am glad that she did not ditch him like Meera😆. Whenever May is alone she is thinking abpout Rishaan. An ardent Rishbala fan in me is not really happy with this.. I want her to think about Rudra. I hope she wont mistaken Rishaan as RK. It will not happen right,.. Maya already called him an imposter.
Okay I will say it right now so you never have that doubt again: She will never mistake him for RK (Rishabh Kundra) ... she knows, understands and cares for him because he is RK (Rishaan Kapoor) and they share a bond. You know me... I am a RishBala fan through and through... don't you remember my posts back in the day? 😆 I am still the same Bharia! 😆 ... but see this is how this story is... I write characters objectively not as a RishBala fan. Maya will always have that bond with Rishaan, even when she falls for Rudra. She will always care deeply for him. But that does not mean RishBala's pairing is threatened in anyway. They are meant to be together.
I dont want Rishaan dead. Not with that pervy's hands. I dont like Rishaan as much as i like Rudra. But still his condition pains me.. Shaurya is too cruel. I cant beleive he killed 8 girls in the worst way possible. Why did he kill them. Did they all look like Madhu?? Or they were fans of Rk?? I can understand RK and Madhu' death. But why did he kill those girls?? I want to know about it first. Pls Maria save Rishaan some how 😭 . I am crying for him. But seems like the intelligent pervert did a mistake in finding the real RK. He actully thinks Rishan as RK !!! Didn't he ever meet Rudra??
Your questions will be answered in the next couple of chapters... Shaurya is ... very very cruel. There is a lot more to know about him and why he took Rishaan. you will find in the next chapter.
Please update the next part soon. Cant wait more.. Please dont let Shaurya meet poor Maya ever again.. Can't even imagine Maya in his clutches again 😭
I will update tonight, hopefully.
Ps sorry for typos. My Phone does not like alphabet "a"..
Haha It's alright. I loved that you commented. I love reading and replying to your comments!


Thank you so much! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nadia724

Hi dear

U r back finally and also started thread 2 congrats at least u didn't left this story in middle like many writers did what a marvelous story and the way u write it. Coming to story all characters r mindblowing rudra very much worried for rishaan what a brothers bond I like prakashs entry and feeling bad for yuv death bittuji feeling guilty not able to caught the real criminal Maya aka madhu hope fully she remember all and don't kill rishaan waiting for next update


Hi!
Thank you so much! Yes, I felt bad that I never completed this story. I aspire to be a writer so I thought I shouldn't leave any story, even if it is a fanfiction, unfinished. Need to bring discipline in my work.
I am glad you are liking the characters and enjoying the story. There is a lot that will be revealed and that will happen. Stay tuned and please keep giving me your feedback.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: zelja89

Fabulous update 😊


Thank you so much!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: aravindam100

Yaarrr u R an Outstanding Writtr kk. No doubt n dat CLEAR😊. And regarding d nmbrs, dont b sad yaarrr. Jisko yeh story follow karna hai dey wil do it fr sure. Jisko nahi yaa bhir jisko bhi yeh story dragging lag raha hai let it b, Nvr mind. Agar Ek Loyal readr hai den itz d biggst thng hai naa?? You hav soo many😛😃😃. And yess v knw u hav planss & V trust u cmplty. Aftr alll V waited fr dese long den v can wait nw also. Justt want to sayy dis Story s complty diff noo 1 has brng a concpt lik dis till nw. Sooo cheersss,. Want too sayy dat plzz dont stop dis story due to lak f likes r decreas n nmbr f pplll. V r here, & V will b wid u till d end. & waitinggg eagrlyyy. May b d wrd s wrong😲. V r waiting IMPATIENTLYYY😆😉😛


Originally posted by: manna43

Don't be disheartened. Its a fabulous story. Ur writing style is amazing. Such a thriller. U kept ur readers engrossed. I am a loyal fan of this story. Waiting for next part eagerly.


Originally posted by: aan-rish

Thanks for clarifying our doubts Maria 😆 I knew Rudra Maya is the end game but i was just worried you know ... 😛. Waiting for the next updates. This is one of the best stories i have ever read. I am eagerly waiting to read more. Shaurya is giving me nightmares .. I feel Maya's pain..


Thank you so much guys for your kind words. They mean a lot to me. I will keep writing here as long as I have readers like you. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys!

I have something important to discuss with you all. I have finished writing the next chapter and it got really long like... even for my chapters.. 😆 16000+ words. 😆 And it had too much going on for one chapter.

Anyway, so I had no choice but to split it. I will split it into two chapters (each one consisting of two posts) the first one I will post tonight, once Hiyu has edited it. Then depending on the feedback I get, I will post the next one. That means, if I will see that you guys are on the same page as me and you want to read it eagerly, I will post it soon otherwise I will post it as I post other chapters.

Also, I have to warn you, and do not take this lightly. The next two chapters are intense and maybe unexpected for many of the readers in some ways. The characters you think you know very well, will reveal shades (that by the way I have given clues of in the subtext in the past) that might be a little unexpected. The next few chapters are to be read with diligence and patience (and objectivity, if possible).

I will say it out loud. The story has never been for gullible minds and the next chapters will prove just that. Please do not read it if you are in a bad mood or upset or anything like that. It is violent, intense and grim. So, brace yourselves.

Also, if you see too much of one character in one chapter or nothing of some other character, then it is because it was supposed to be one chapter and I had to split it. I am not ignoring any characters. This is also the reason why chapter 26 and chapter 27 will be very connected and will be on the same pace.

I promised you a dark story surrounding dark, flawed characters with serious issues dealing with mature subject matters and I am giving you just that.

That's all. I hope you get what I am trying to say.

Love,
Maria.

Edited by Valar.Morghulis - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Maria shall be waiting for you to post the update, thanks for the PM.

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