Every Breath I Take (II) : Epilogue on Page 8 (02/04)

yayyy... Me 1st again... D update was Good... Poor rk... He was so cute...😉

wonderful update.madhu can be so insistent at times,poor neev was pushed by madhu just because she wanted the cd.nd rk was feeling miserable as he was unable to spend tym wid his wife .lovestory of neev nd Ayesha also back on track,great.continue soon

Awesome update... Bt pls give more of rishabala in d next update.

RK and his virginity🤣🤣

Amazing update Lazu!Thanks for pm!So the secret is out!RK was unhappy bcoz His brother DID IT & not Him on His own Suhaagraat!Loved RK's Virginity song!Finally Rishbala made Love!& RK ke Dil ko mila sukoon!Aww!Loved Neev-Ayesha's reunion!Waiting eagerly for epilouge!Pls update it soon!

A very nice chapter lazy, I liked the way how ayesha convinced herself on neev, but what cracked me up was, rk thinking of dying as a virgin, even at some serious situation, loved him.

awesome update!!

awesome update...

lovely update! 😳
okay! I m going to die a virgin 🤣 🤣

I really wish madhu could read rk's inner voice then for sure she will love okay! more than rk 😆
I will seriously miss this okay! 😉 alrite 😛 O boy 😎 &
O girl 😳!
finally! neesha found their love on ayeesha's birthday
"every breath I take" is a very sweet story with different emotions & very well written rite 4m d start till end 👏
I totally enjoyed reading this story 😃 👍🏼
thank u so much dear for easing me with u wonderful stories 🤗 ❤️
waiting for epilogue 😳 ⭐️