Every Breath I Take (II) : Epilogue on Page 8 (02/04) - Page 5

Fab update Lazy 😛😛😛 ! Finally ho hee Gaya 🤣

Sorry double post !! Guess my excitement went overboard witnessing Okay RK's victory 🤣

Res Yippieee...me first in Lazy's epilogue...🥳

first of all hats off to u lazy fr penning down this wonderful n amazing story of o boy n o girl.just loved it.a v interesting epilogue too.when u mentioned dat half indian n half pirtuguese guy i just thought dat oh like vivian n right after that u mentioned pkyek n finally vivian Dsena.dat was a brilliant stroke.loved loved it.thanx a lot fr giving us dis story

awesome story! right 4m d title till end everything is perfect 👍🏼 👏


not just liked actually I loved the story of oh girl & oh boy 😛
what a way to end this beautiful story 😛 muahha... u r d best lazy dear ⭐️ ❤️

initially I thought It was rishbala's kids but their also u kept one twist 😊

after waiting for 9 long yrs they were blessed with triplets wow that's great but poor madhu! rk is really a sweet hubby! he is a gem of mankind 😃 their love is unconditional! feeling happy 4 them 😊

I loved all d 5 kids 😳 all r very cute & naughty in their own way & I loved their name 😛

rk hiding his wallet🤣 , madhu's first kiss😆 rk & neev teasing each other, & rk fainting on hearing d news of triplets😆
everything was cute 😛

I will miss my okay 😭 😆 , o boy 😉 , o girl 😳 u know what lazy dear now a days even I started using these words that's d impact ur story created on me 😃

thank u 4 this wonderful story 🤗 ⭐️

keep writing more stories whatever u have in ur system (mind) pls pen it down bcs only 6 ss/ff is on going 😭 😆

❤️ U ⭐️

Awsmmm Ending Di Oh Girl

Awesome epilogue...
First it as a lil sad part bt then toh u gave us triple treat 😆
9 Yrs ki requirement ek hi baari mei complete 😉

lovely ending lazy ,i will miss oh boy and oh girl ,specially okay and his crazy talkings

Amazing n super hilarious tooo...loved it..!!!!