Every Breath I Take (II) : Epilogue on Page 8 (02/04) - Page 3

Loved Okays virginity song...nd d funny part was my collegue during lunch time had put dat very song nd hearing it... i couldnt stop laughing imagining dat okays lyrics...🤣😳 and my boss was lk..isse kya ho gaya...😕

Neev nd Ayesha after night der turnmoil...der distancing der fear...der sadness...nd dat cute bday part was all so cute...i lovved it very much...lovly...
Ofcourse der too okay stole d show wit his cribbing of dey doin ahem ahem*** nd dey sleeping in suhagraat...lol😆

Oh last part is epilogue...I want to cry...😭

bt waiting for it eagerly

this is for d lovly update u gave🤗

Awesome update

awesome update...I loved how RK was worried about his virginity...🤣...loved ur poetry...😆...& neev ayesha part at the end was emotional...& the best...😳

Emotional yet hilarious update and this is the uniqueness of this story.

Liked Ayesh and Neev's emotional part but as usual hero of the update was none other than our beloved "OKAY!" 😃😆

Trust me lazy ... "OKAY!" was on fire today 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
I m so gonna miss him ... his cheesy lines abt virginity and SR were damn funny and hilarious.

I am truly,madly and irrecoverably in love with my "Okay!" ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Thanks for the update n PM sweets ❤️

BTW why have you fast forwarded my "Okay!"'s SR scene 😡

I so wanted to hear his thought while doing IT 😃😆🤣🤣🤣

RK's "Main or meri virginity" poem 🤣🤣🤣

Heya! Thanks for the PM. Haha omg Neev at the beg was so damn funny and how RK with Madhu burst into his room that was hilarious and I seriously couldn't have imagined Ayesha hiding under the cover haha that was LOL😉 So glad they got married and I liked how Ayesha made the first step after realizing she had been infatuated with RK. Hmm roses how romantic😛So glad they managed to sort out their differences! Can't wait for the epilogue now!😊

read chapters 18, 19, 20,21 and 22 superb upates, loved all rishbala moments, feeling bad for madhu as rk agreed to marry ayesha, liked how madhu gave left and right to rk, loved devar bhabhi talk, how they planned and rk confessed his feelings and rishbala got married, happy for neev and ayesha

superb update lazy,u r an awesome writer😃 ⭐️ ⭐️ 😊 👏