Every Breath I Take (II) : Epilogue on Page 8 (02/04)

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tanuja.siri

@tanuja.siri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

thats a fantastic ending Lazy...loved it very much

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

wowww 👏👏...what a cute epilogue!!! 😊😊

i really thought ashik and ashika r rishbala's ...and i think that ws ur intention also...to confuse us 😆😆

i was crying when neev and ayesha brought crib for rishbala...it was so emotional scene 😭😭

liked the way the happy family lived...really enjoyed dear 😊😊

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Oh girl!!!That was Freaking Amazingly Brilliant!!!Thanks for pm!Very sorry for extremely late reply!Actually I was away from IF coz of My final exams!First I too thought Ashika & Ashik were Rishbala's kids!But when They were shown as Neevu-Ayesha's kids I felt very sad for My Rishbala!Loved how RK didn't wanted to give up on His Biwi coz She hadn't gave up on Him in the past!Loved RK hiding His wallet!Finally Rishbala's wait came to an end & came the news of them having Triplets!RK fainted hearing the news!Loved Rishbala's naughty kids!Everything was perfect Lazu!

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Sorry I am so late...😛😛 Amazing part 22 and I really loved the parallel story of Neev and Ayesha...I loved Okay RK's impatience and madhu 😡😡 why does she keep thinking about Ayesha...actually to be true everyone is busy to do what will make Ayesha happy...I wish I would have been Ayesha...thnks for pm sweety...

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Awsum ending...At frist i thought that Aashika and Ashik were Rishbala's children..sadly the couple who wanted a baby with each country they visit did not get the blessing of being parents for 9 long years...

but gladly they became parents and that too of triplets!!!

I simply loved this story of oh girl and oh boy bt missed my alrite Madhu here...thnks for writing this dear...