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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#981

Originally posted by: rima4ever
welcome back Maria😃
fabulous update

Thanks Dia. 😊

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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#982

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
WOW!! outstanding update dear...loved it...hope this time u will frequently update...please try to give one update at least once in a week...

Thank you so much. I will try my best to update frequently. Yes, that is the aim. At least once a week.

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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#983

Originally posted by: ..Ananya..
I don't know how you do it, but with every update I fall in love with this story again and again. Yes, it's complex! yes, there are things I don't understand but the things you leave unsaid, just transmitting them through their passion, through the way they just look at each other- this is volatile. completely volatile!
It is not just the dynamics of RK- Madhubala relation or Rudra-Maya-Rishabh but all the characters including Buttuji and Meera. These characters come across as genuine, the kind of people you come across everyday of your life! These are the aspects that make me love your story more and more..
Coming back to this update. It was complex, it was passionate and it was absolutely amazing.
Please continue soon.
P.S.: I had certain doubts regarding the story. Can you please clear them? I'll PM you (if it doesn't cause you any inconvenience)!
Thanks a ton

Thank you so much. You are too kind. I love that you are able to connect with the characters and comprehend the dynamics and the subtext. I really cannot ask more from any reader. I am so glad that you are enjoying and that you liked the update.

I will be updating tonight. I am already done with the chapter. It just needs proofreading.

And yeah, sure you can PM me or comment here. I would be happy to reply to you either way.

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aan-rish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#984

Sorry for commenting so late Maria and Welcome back 🤗. I thought you forgot this story 😛

And the update was really nice. My poor Rudra. He needs sleeping pils for a peaceful dreamless slumber. I hope Maya can give dreamless nights to him in future. He is very confused or disappointed not to find Madhu in Maya. Rudra knows that he is Rk , but Maya is still not aware of it. Maya does not even like Madhu or wants to be like her. Cant Rudra accept her as Maya Talwar? Who is very different from Madhubala. Rudra shares his anxieties with Bittuji. I liked his employees reaction when he appeared in office despite on leave. He is hurt by Maya's indifference , He is trying to be friendly with Meera. Is he trying to make Maya Jealous?

Rishaan is missing. Finally Meera tracks him. They reach him and witnessing his performance. He knows that he is an imposter. He is still a mystery to me. Dr Roy suggested to something in his eyes for Maya. Is that means he feels something for her ? Why cant he see Meera, poor girl!!

Shaurya, Reading about him giving me an eerie feeling. He lead a perfect life. A perfect husband, and a perfect father to 3 kids. I have a doubt ,did he abuse some one else other than Maya? How is he related to Madhubala? Or was he just a crazy fan of her? I was suffocated to read that he woke in the middle of the night and went to watch that old audition video of Maya 🤢. Only a creep can have such a feeling for a child , and it surprises me that he is still pursuing her 🤢

Expecting the next update soon 😊😊

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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#985

Originally posted by: aravindam100
Yooo Welcom baakkk dear. Wass waiting for uu. Itz been mor dan a yr naaa. I thought i will nvr get to read dis story furthr. Whol cncpt was totatl diff frm our othr RISHABALA stories naa. Anyway A big Thank u for coming bak and giving a Fast update. Soo the filim shoot is going to start. The real Face behind dat Bas*** s now reveald. He s still behind maya. Bt it will b a tough task to Expose him i thnk. Letz wait & see. Waiting fr d rest. Plz update soonn.

Thank you so much. And I am sorry it took me so long to get back to this story. Don't thank me.. thank you for still reading this story. Means a lot. Yeah.. we will get on that movie concept soon enough... but not just yet. And yes, we will find out more about that creep later. 😊

Updating tonight. 😳

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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#986

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Fantastic update dear, loved it.

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Welcome back and thanks for giving the update, please continue soon, shall be waiting to read more of this story, i would be happy if you could PM me.

Thank you so much. Alright, I will send you a PM whenever I will update.