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WOW!! outstanding update dear...loved it...hope this time u will frequently update...please try to give one update at least once in a week...

I don't know how you do it, but with every update I fall in love with this story again and again. Yes, it's complex! yes, there are things I don't understand but the things you leave unsaid, just transmitting them through their passion, through the way they just look at each other- this is volatile. completely volatile!
It is not just the dynamics of RK- Madhubala relation or Rudra-Maya-Rishabh but all the characters including Buttuji and Meera. These characters come across as genuine, the kind of people you come across everyday of your life! These are the aspects that make me love your story more and more..
Coming back to this update. It was complex, it was passionate and it was absolutely amazing.
Please continue soon.
P.S.: I had certain doubts regarding the story. Can you please clear them? I'll PM you (if it doesn't cause you any inconvenience)!
Thanks a ton

Yooo Welcom baakkk dear. Wass waiting for uu. Itz been mor dan a yr naaa. I thought i will nvr get to read dis story furthr. Whol cncpt was totatl diff frm our othr RISHABALA stories naa. Anyway A big Thank u for coming bak and giving a Fast update. Soo the filim shoot is going to start. The real Face behind dat Bas*** s now reveald. He s still behind maya. Bt it will b a tough task to Expose him i thnk. Letz wait & see. Waiting fr d rest. Plz update soonn.

Fantastic update dear, loved it.

Welcome back and thanks for giving the update, please continue soon, shall be waiting to read more of this story, i would be happy if you could PM me.

Welcome back..
Finally we are goings to get more update for this..

Brilliant comeback😃 I wish to see rudra and maya together but looking forward to seeing what you have in store😉

Originally posted by: arshisfan

Welcome back Maria 🤗 Finally we will get to read something deep and consistent!
Thanks a lot JJ! 🤗 It's good to be back!

I liked you update as usual, you didn't lose your touch, rest assured 😆 I'm sure it's gonna only get better with next chapters

I am still struggling a little to get back that connect, honestly. Maybe I will get the hang of it soon. I hope at least.

Rudra, from what he is going through is the one who is suffering more!!! : See when each one of the others is dealing with the pain Rudra is frustrated because he tries to figure a way to heal their pain. Basically Rudra's happiness is in their happiness (Maya's and Rishaan's)!

That is true. He wants them to be happy but he is tired of being miserable himself as well.

I know he wants his Madhu/Maya to connect with him back, so yes there is a selfish reason there too, he wants her to find him just like he found her especially because he was being waiting for a lifetime already which makes him impatient and frustrated but I think soon he will understand her, I mean that Maya though being Madhu has her own identity too but on the other hand Maya also has to accept that she had another identity the Madhu wala identity.

Yes, they both need to learn a lot.

Rudra wants to help her out of her pain but he is also impatient as he has been waiting for so long!

I liked the scene on the breakfast table with his frustration, I liked the scene in the office ki how he was frustrated and couldn't quite stand her difference from Madhu!!! and also how he poured his heart out to Bittuji and how Bittuji as usual showed him that they are meant to be anyways and these hurdles are time hurdles which was never their friend anyways, they were fighters, And obviously the scene with Mrs Roy is one of the best scenes in the update, this woman really loves the brothers, she is also guilt ridden ki she couldn't help in the past but she wants to do it now and she wants to convince him that there is still hope and there is, but he just brushed away what she told and he is adamant to solve things his way!

I am glad you liked those scenes. Bittuji is motivating RK but Mrs. Roy understands Rudra to some extent and trying to help him. It's interesting to note that he is inclining more towards listening to Bittuji.

Rishaan's scene though through a song shows how this man is in the quest of his identity, but at least he knows what he is not but he still doesn't know what he is!!!

Yes, it is the conflict of identity and morality that is his life all about actually.

Shaurya!!

I wonder how you do it to write such twisted characters 😆 but you told me that you used to read a make lot of research about serial killers! these twisted people have always a normal facade, at times even a good facade, they are taken for being good people. I wonder if Shaurya had a backstory of his own?!! I mean what happened in his own childhood to make him this way!

I have always been a fan of crime fiction genre and yes, real life studies help as well. 😆

Anyways these were some scattered thoughts about the update! wating for more updates!

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Originally posted by: POULOMI22

u've updated after such a long time, last time when i read this ff i was in graduation & now i'm in masters. that apart u gave another wonderful update, rishaan still remains like a mysterious puzzle waiting for 2 ne unraveled , maya is a broken bitter soul afraid 2 be out of her boundaries that she has bound herself into & rudra he is confused & doesn't know hat he should do 2 redeem d love the love that he has lost