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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#961

Originally posted by: aan-rish
Hey.. I am still waiting to read this story

Hey Arya!! How are you? Wow... I don't know what to say... thank you so much... I will update this within an hour.Would love to read your response.

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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#962

Originally posted by: aravindam100

Wwoowww THANK U SOOO MUCH yaarrr. V r still here waiting for uuu. Tnx fr ur reply yaar. Thank u. Waiting eagerlyyy to read dis story. But plzz promiz dat u will complt dis. Dis story wass totalyy diffr. Plz continue dis

No, please don't thank me. I should have completed this ages ago. Sorry, but I got busy and then disconnected with the story. But now I am motivated to finish this thanks to two of my friends here. Will finish it soon. Promise.

Update coming in less than an hour.

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trolldemortx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#963

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Hey guys!! Don't know if any of you are still here or still interested in this story but I thought I should reply you all to let you know I am going to update this soon. As soon as I get someone to proofread the chapter.

MEE MEEE !

I have done it before :D I can do it again :D

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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#964

Originally posted by: ..Steph..

MEE MEEE !
I have done it before :D I can do it again :D

Haha! Hey Steph! I just asked Najat to do it for me. 😆

But I will be done with next chapter tonight so I will send it to you tomorrow. Proofread that one. 😳😆

And maybe others after that... 😛 ... bet you are regretting your offer now.. 😆

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trolldemortx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#965

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Haha! Hey Steph! I just asked Najat to do it for me. 😆
But I will be done with next chapter tonight so I will send it to you tomorrow. Proofread that one. 😳😆
And maybe others after that... 😛 ... bet you are regretting your offer now.. 😆

Not at all ! 😆

Backup proofreader, at your service :D 😆

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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#966

You are the best! 🤗

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Maria

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Survival

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Posted: 9 years ago

#968

Welcome back Maria 🤗 Finally we will get to read something deep and consistent!

I liked you update as usual, you didn't lose your touch, rest assured 😆 I'm sure it's gonna only get better with next chapters

Rudra, from what he is going through is the one who is suffering more!!! : See when each one of the others is dealing with the pain Rudra is frustrated because he tries to figure a way to heal their pain. Basically Rudra's happiness is in their happiness (Maya's and Rishaan's)!

I know he wants his Madhu/Maya to connect with him back, so yes there is a selfish reason there too, he wants her to find him just like he found her especially because he was being waiting for a lifetime already which makes him impatient and frustrated but I think soon he will understand her, I mean that Maya though being Madhu has her own identity too but on the other hand Maya also has to accept that she had another identity the Madhu wala identity.

Rudra wants to help her out of her pain but he is also impatient as he has been waiting for so long!

I liked the scene on the breakfast table with his frustration, I liked the scene in the office ki how he was frustrated and couldn't quite stand her difference from Madhu!!! and also how he poured his heart out to Bittuji and how Bittuji as usual showed him that they are meant to be anyways and these hurdles are time hurdles which was never their friend anyways, they were fighters, And obviously the scene with Mrs Roy is one of the best scenes in the update, this woman really loves the brothers, she is also guilt ridden ki she couldn't help in the past but she wants to do it now and she wants to convince him that there is still hope and there is, but he just brushed away what she told and he is adamant to solve things his way!

Rishaan's scene though through a song shows how this man is in the quest of his identity, but at least he knows what he is not but he still doesn't know what he is!!!

Shaurya!!

I wonder how you do it to write such twisted characters 😆 but you told me that you used to read a make lot of research about serial killers! these twisted people have always a normal facade, at times even a good facade, they are taken for being good people. I wonder if Shaurya had a backstory of his own?!! I mean what happened in his own childhood to make him this way!

Anyways these were some scattered thoughts about the update! wating for more updates!

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Edited by arshisfan - 9 years ago

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POULOMI22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#969

u've updated after such a long time, last time when i read this ff i was in graduation & now i'm in masters. that apart u gave another wonderful update, rishaan still remains like a mysterious puzzle waiting for 2 ne unraveled , maya is a broken bitter soul afraid 2 be out of her boundaries that she has bound herself into & rudra he is confused & doesn't know hat he should do 2 redeem d love the love that he has lost