RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 91

Originally posted by: flowing_river

amazing update...dear

i just loved the emotions pain anguish u put in the scene and i felt like i was feeling rk's pain and bittuji's shock happiness and also helplessness...

rudra and maya's moment was so special...one knew and other didn't still both had same emotions...

so finally rishaan knew..

but i am confused about that girl sonia part..

Originally posted by: pa24703987

Its very nice update,am so hooked to this story,love it,its just AWESOME.

Originally posted by: PRATHA1

Awesome & emotional update Maria!
Rudra's feelings are nicely described! he shattered due to pain & mostly guilt of unable to protect maya from suffering! Finally Bittuji recognized his chief! RK got his lost friend bittuji, who helped him in that state & took him with himself at his home, Bittuji fed him by his own hand & put him to sleep! Bittuji encouraged rudra to take care of himself to protect maya from that evil person! He told him to believe on his love, his madhu will come back to him!
Rishaan brought maya at his home to protect her! He is so smart, he found out that Rudra has taken that CD from Mrs. roy! But i curious to know, Did he know that there is some relation with Rudra & Maya? He is so mysterious! I think he have some feeling towards maya! I liked Rishaan & Rudra's bonding!
waiting for the next update!

Originally posted by: muzikk93

Lovely update. Really hoping that rishaan doesnt fall for maya😕

Originally posted by: aravindam100

Ohh my god... Itz just SUPERBN. I lovd it realyyy. I read it twice.. Der was tears n my ice wen u descrb the pain f Rudra. And my favrt part was ofcrs d scene f our Hero & Heroine. Very Touchy.. U r amazng Yaarrr. Gud job. I realy mean it. Thank u 4,dis LENGTHY updat. And a big Thank u 4 PM

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!! beautiful update...Rudra heard the recording in the CD & shattered...he is guilt ridden thinking that he couldn't save his biwi...But bittuji saved him from losing himself completely...The way bittuji controlled his overwhelming emotions & consoled Rudra & supported him was fabulous...👏...Meera's face lit up whenever Rishaan calls her , but poor girl always get disheartened...Although she dislikes Maya , still she is a perfect at her work...I loved Maya & Rishaan's bonding & Rudra is a little jealous ...thats quite natural...but Rishaan is smart enough to know that something is going in Rudra's mind regarding Maya...I think he suspected when Maya said Shaurya's name to Rishaan in the car...may be he was keeping eye on Rudra & thats why he knows that Rudra will take the CD...But now it will be interesting to read both the Kundra brothers hunting Shaurya down & in between this the start of Rudra-Maya love story...By the way I am liking Rishaan more than Rudra...that kinda weird...

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL

Awesome . loved it to bits. ❤️

pretty long n beautifully written too👏👍🏼

meera likes RK n she feels dat RK likes maya.Even i feel like RK likes maya or he has started to fall for her. The way he cares for her n tries to protect her it cant b only for his movie. There is more to it. I guess RK wud give rudra a tough competition.😛

Dnt knw why but i want both RK n rudra wid madhu/maya only😉😆 bcz rishaan reminds me of original RK n iknw dat rudra is original RK .

Sometimes i think rishaan knws dat rudra is original RK n maya is his madhu.

was rishaan sultan bhai in his prev birth ?dats why he is copies everything of original RK

n thinks dat madhu wud consider him her original RK n he wud get her in this birth.

cont soon dear🤗

Originally posted by: war_is_peace

kutti , kamini, main tera khoon kutto ko pila doongi! tuune mere bittuji ka look kyu nahi describe kiya? 😡 what was he wearing? does he wear glasses?

😲🤣 Oh God Hiyu!!!! 🤣
(nahi, scene mein suit nahi hoga😆) ...waise iss baar bhi knock nahi kiya 🤣

RK ne sahi kaha tha...har janam ke humsafar hain, bittuji aur unki hero-heroine mein taang adaao 😆 😛

Hahaha! Oh God! So true! 😆

AUR rishaan ab sach mein RK jaise behave karr raha hai...all that boxing n sweat! HOT!😉 and all that smirking and all...ab bhi time hai ..i m telling u rishaan is RK and rudra is for bittuji!

Chupp!!! Aisi baatain nahin kartay, okay? 😆

AUR tell me Rudra lost how many kgs? 4? 😉

Oh God! Well he needs to be in shape... he has a mission in hand! 😆

and i know roses are red and violets are blue and all u see is illusion coz all u show is not wat we shud envision 😉 😎

Wah wah wah!!! 👏😆

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OK NOW ABT THE UPDATE

Finally! 😆

loved the update! 👏 🤗so much that i read it three times u know y 😆

Thank you so much! 😆

pity that Rudra is so helpless always, maybe coz last life he was never helpless in getting wat he wanted 🤔
Yeah!!!
bittuji is very happy i know...he will never have a clue wat happened with madhu, rudra will never let him know...he will never know wat Rudra felt...so it has to be rishaan at rescue for rudra...well still a pity...rudra still wont be able to help rishaan in that case 😒 😭 (m confused if i m sad for rudra or rishaan...i think rishaan 😆)

You can be sad for both of them.. 😆 That is the beauty of it all! 😈😆

meera is jealous of maya staying in the house! 😆 poor thing...even rudra felt angry n jealous 😆

i like how rishaan teased rudra abt that 😆
Haha! Yeah... 😆 I am glad you liked it. 😆

maya Rishaan scene was amazing...i wonder y maya wasnt angry later though? 🤔 😉

Ummm... Deep down she trusts him. And later, she is more curious and alarmed over his behavior than angry.

Rudra - maya scene was really nice! so her hand was moving towards his shoulder..i c! 😉 👏

I am so happy you liked the scene!!! 😳

abt the last part - everything thats on the dinning table is not edible, some of it goes in envelopes 😉

Awesome! 👏

PS- iss baar bohot lamba comment ho gaya 😆 update soon! tab tak ke liye kyun main jaagoon? 😎

Hahah!!! That song!!! <3

Originally posted by: RAONE8

AWESOME UPDATE👏

Originally posted by: -StephinesS-

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