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Posted: 10 years ago
Another good chapter Maria 👏
I enjoyed reading it as usual😃

I liked all the scenes

The scene between the brothers


Rishaan didn't buy his brother's explanation, Rudra gave it his best though and tried to be convincing while explaining the reasons behind his behaviour but we all know that Rishaan has a very sharp mind, I felt for Rudra, poor thing he is completely weaponless infront of his brother, always uncomfortable and wondering what his brother is thinking in general and what he is thinking about him in particular

But he felt lightly happy when they started working as a team to solve the case that helds a crucial importance for both of them, he remembered how much his brother used to help him and kind of yearned to see those days coming again :the happy days, though they are working together now but it's still different from how it used to be in the past


The scene between Rishaan and Maya

Sad to see that she thinks Rishaan betrayed her trust but we can understand her reaction : Rishaan didn't explain how Rudra came to know about Maya's story, so it didn't help, and we know Rishaan he doesn't care about his image as much as he cares about his loved ones, so he just prefered to put on his cold mask and let her think what she wants!


The scene between Rudra and Maya


Baby steps, things didn't improve much, but at least from her side she is willing to be honest with him, she said that now that he knows everything about her, they share a bonding, so she wants honesty.

She is very perceptive, she can read his eyes, she can read his expressions whenever he is shocked of seeing the difference between her and Madhu, from her side she takes it as disgust from his side, but from his side, it's more of a shock to see how much his lady love has changed in this lifetime!

As you told me many times Maria, Maya won't soften easily, she is very perceptive, sensitive/susceptive, she already feels that he is judging her, we know he is looking for his Madhu in her but this won't help either when she comes to know about it, as she will feel that instead of judging her as she used to think he is now doing worst read comparing her to another person (Madhubala) and we know she wants to be Maya not Madhu, even if she was Madhu in her past life!!

The Rathore Family

So mister Rathore is trying to win everyone's heart by playing the good complaisant family man!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis



JJ! 🤗 Hope that happens soon.
I hope and pray that you successfully finish up your work on time. Any rough idea about when that might happen?

If not FB at least leave a message here whenever you get free or take a break or something. 😃



I hope it happens soon too, but if Allah helps me, I'll be very busy the whole year (2015) but I'll leave you messages here in IF. I'll also try to connect to FB from time to time
I check IF from time to time for few minutes, today I saw your update, so couldn't ignore it 😃 I had to read it and give a review 😃


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arshisfan



I hope it happens soon too, but if Allah helps me, I'll be very busy the whole year (2015) but I'll leave you messages here in IF. I'll also try to connect to FB from time to time
I check IF from time to time for few minutes, today I saw your update, so couldn't ignore it 😃 I had to read it and give a review 😃




I am happy for you JJ. 😃
May Allah bless you with a wonderful, happy and prosperous year ahead! Ameen! 😳

Thank you so much for reading the chapter and giving the review even when you are so busy. Means a lot! 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis


I am happy for you JJ. 😃
May Allah bless you with a wonderful, happy and prosperous year ahead! Ameen! 😳

Thank you so much for reading the chapter and giving the review even when you are so busy. Means a lot! 🤗



Just keep praying for me

Love you 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yayyy so I am finally updating my comment yo ! well I am taking up more space in your thread by posting a new comment but IDC :P

*Mar be like*




I love the way you write.. and I am planning re-reading the entire FF all over again whenever I have time.. cause I need to ! about the recent updates. Less Cliffhangers Thank God.. but I am dying to know about the family at the end of the last couple of chapters ! looking forward till you finally reveal who they are and what their deal is, and how this is all connected. I somehow have a feeling that it might be linked to Rudra. I could be wrong though !

as Najat said, I too felt that Rishaan knows Rudra & Maya are linked somehow. Waiting till he does something about it, but knowing you.. you never know how the characters will turn out to be :D haha
and I mean that in a good way ! :)

Rudra knows that Maya is no Madhu, and yet he yearns for her.. what will his next move be.. Surely he will think twice before he does anything cause, it seems that he doesn't wanna risk the relationship he has with his brother. and dude.. I am dying to know what their deal is! both the brothers ! this is why I need you to update soon :D :D :D

I shall post a lovely comment as soon as I am done reading the FF again :)

P.S : like I always say.. I love how you write.. you make it easier to imagine he scenario as your writing is so detailed and precise :) well done Mar.. you have a long way to go :)


-Steph

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome uptade maria . Finally i read all the pending updates 😳
RK and bittuji ka janam janam saath😆😆 Thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
Excellent update Maria 👏
I love reading the interactions between Kapoor Brothers. They are quite interesting. So Rudra made up a story and present it to Rishaan in order to avoid embarrassement. Let me tell u, I found it convincing. But but..the brilliant super star found it pointless. After all who knows Rudra better than Rishaan, right? They both will be handling the creep together now.

Maya is heart broken, she thinks Rishaan broke her trust by telling her secret to Rudra. Rishaan did not reveal Rudra's stolen CD adventure to Maya. Rudr is thinking wether Maya is aware of his little adventure. But infact Maya is still clueless about Rudra stole the CD.

Maya and Rudra scene was really nice. I think Maya is being judgmental about Rudr. She thinks he hates her. Where as Rudr is disappointed with Maya's drinking habits. He is comparing Maya to Madhu. He is trying to find his innocent biwi in alcoholic Maya. But I think he is doing it wrong. Maya is Maya, she is not Madhu. She cant be Madhu. Rudr have to accept her as Maya Talwar not as Madhubala Kundra.

I have a doubt, I can understand Maya's unwillingness to share her dark past with others. She accused Rishaan of breaking her trust. Why was she actually disappointed, is it because a third person know about her dark past or is it because he shared the secret with Rudra.??

And lastly, that creep have a lovely family with two princesses and a son. He is going on a vacation. I cant beleive that moron still writing creepy notes to Maya, even after having two daughters. Chii..I wish his daughter came to know their perfect loving fathers real face soon.

Rishaan did a gud thing by handling creep's case to Meera. She is really good at her job. She is loyal and very efficient just like her father
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Posted: 10 years ago
LUV INTERACTION BTW RUDR N MAYA N KAPOOR BRO REALLY LUV EACH OTHER
AWESOME UPDATE N HAPPY NEW YEAR😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!! beautiful update...loved it...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update Maria!
In the first part Rudra tried to convince rishaan by making story & show him some evidence! I am curious to know their past, why they are behaving like this! Now Both RK are working on same mission! Maya thought that Rishaan broke her trust by telling her whole truth to Rudra & Rudra thought that rishaan might told her about he stolen that CD!
Then Maya & Rudra's convo.! Rudra looking for his madhu in Maya! Maya read his expressions & misunderstand that he tried to judge her!
At the end shaurya's family intro.!
Waiting for the next update!

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