RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 90

Originally posted by: momi78

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Loved the update! Rudra feels guilty because he could not find his biwi earlier and help her when she needed him the most. Really liked Maya and Rudra scene. Both felt the connection. Update soon!

Originally posted by: Ni33

I loved the update...

I am sorry I have to give a short comment this time...I blame it on the school...😆

I will just highlight one of my favorite parts...

"I mean... some bonding over hunting is long overdue, don't you think?" he winked.

I saw Bugs Bunny and Daffy Duck bonding in order to take Elmer Fudd down...🤣

But Bugs would never need Daffy's help...He can do it all on his own...Much like Rudra (RK)...🤣

I can't tell you enough how much I loved this update...Bittuji reappearing, Maya moving in and all of that...So many things to analyze but I don't have time for that...😭

Sorry again...

Thanks for the update and for the PM...

Please continue soon...

Originally posted by: rima4ever

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: rima4ever

freaking awesome update

Originally posted by: rima4ever

continue soon

Originally posted by: arshisfan

What can I say Maria! I guess you have heard this many times , another wondefrul update👏! I told you that you never disappoint me and before I read the chapter I knew it will be a super hit 😃

Ahh! JJ! Thank you so much!!! 🤗

I don't even know from where to start! to sum up, your update is about lots of emotions, lots of hints, plus suspense and many many questions that we would want answers for 😃

Rudra was shattered as expected, but I loved the way you described how he felt, he wasn't only shattered and sad but he was also guilt ridden as I said before, he felt helpless because he couldn't help her, he blamed himself for he couldn't feel that she was suffering in her life, what made that even worse is the fact that he couldn't help Rishaan either, so that kind of rubbed more salt on his wound!!

Spot on, JJ! Like he said, he has suffered from this pain way too many times...

The nice thing , which was a pleasant surprise in this update is Bittuji being around, though we know Rudra's pain won't decrease but at least he vented out everything inside him, he had a trustworthy friend with whom he shared his pain, his helplessness, his frustration even his hoplessness as he said his existence is worth nothing since his loved ones are suffering and he is always late and moreover his love who doesn't remember who she really is, is treating him like a stranger!

Exactly. It may have not decreased his pain but having a sincere listener and a pair of arms to embrace you when you are low makes a lot of difference. Even I am happy he is not alone at least.

Bittuji tried to pull him out of that state and encouraged him to fight for his love and heal her wounds, though Rudra doesn't really know how he can do that but seems he slightly calmed down and he will try

Yeah.. 😳

I also liked Rishan and Maya's scenes, she keeps asking him why he helps her and he keeps avoiding the question, he has surely developped a soft corner for her, he might have fallen in love with her, I somehow find it possible because they shared a nice bonding, their relationship was first based on interest from Rishaan's side and hate from Maya's side but they become friends and now they have even become very good friends though we know Rishaan never opened up about himself but still she found in him a person who understands her and he has surely found in her lots of things, she is a strong woman who stood firm and tried to keep going in spite of all what she has been through in life, she is different from other women he has met for sure, so I won't be surprised if he is in love with her. As far as she is concerned, she is meant to be Rudra's but I wonder how she will fall in love with him as Rudra and not as Rk, I wonder how they will develop a bonding other than the one of their past lives, this is the one million dollar question!

You know I love the emotional connection 😉, so yes I loved the fact that Rudra felt her when he stepped into the house and when she bumped into him even before he opens his eyes to see her, I liked that she felt his pain too, they were so drawn to each other , but then we know that both have a long way to go before they become a couple as Maya/Rudra, this brings me back to the one million dollar question above!!!


Haha! I don't know what to say about Rishaan. 😆 So, I will just come to your comment on Rudra-Maya bonding... that is the thing! Their past connections can only bring them closer up to a certain extent... but that cannot be all. Let's see how they bond as Rudra and Maya... now that they are in the same house.. 😉

And now Rishaan I like him, he is clever and mysterious, I would really like to know what happens in his mind, you keep giving a lot of hints, I feel somehow he already knows that his brother and Maya are linked together, I don't think he was so happy with the scene he witnessed between Rudra/Maya; @bold the hint from the chapter 😉: 'Rudra looked at his brother for any trace of any emotion, but all he could see was a sense of amusement on his face. Yet somehow, Rudra noticed, his eyes told a different story, what was the story, he couldn't tell."

Oh yes.. there are so many hints! 😆

Anyway whatever be what Rishaan felt and that he might have suspected before also, since he doubted his brother has taken the CD from Mrs Roy and he confirmed his doubt, what matters to Rishaan is to protect Maya, I feel even if he falls for her, it will be a selfless love, so now his top priority is not to know what links Rudra and Maya, it's to protect Maya and for that he will team up with his brother.

Awesome JJ! 👏

I like the dynamics between the brothers, their love, doubts everything that happens between them is never explicite, they both read behind the lines and they don't ask much questions to each other!!!

I am glad you are liking the brothers' bond and their scenes. I enjoy a lot while writing their scenes! 😆

Last scene is the curiosity element for me, I wonder what is it about!!!

You got it late but you got it! 😆

A wonderful update, I enjoyed it thoroughly 🤗

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

again an Awesome update u r great keep writing love this FF 👍🏼
thanks for pm 🤗

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

exactly some of the same i wanted to say great comment agree with this really enjoyed the update 👍🏼love u maria keep updating 🤗

Originally posted by: Anny90

ohhh! he is bittuji! Its surprised me to see him there!
Meera doesnot like maya..hmm..
Meera works hard afterall she is daughter of bittuji!😛
RK knew that rudra has that CD..
there question and answer round will be interesting!
Though I am confuse about the last part..

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Brilliant update Maria👏

Rudra is in pain, he feels guilty because he could not find his biwi earlier and help her when she needed someone. He broke down in the lake side and Bittuji witness this and confirms Rudra as his Chief. Bittuji consoles Rudra and take him his home and feed him and put him to sleep ( god bless Bittuji😃).

Rishaan is good at heart, he make Maya shift to Kapoor Mansion in order to protect her from that creepy director. Rishaan is a really smart , intelligent guy. When Maya told him about the creepy note she got in his party, he should have thought about Rudra's interrogation in the past. Well, he knew that his brother would have taken the cd from Mrs Roy.

Maya and Rudra scene was really nice. Both felt connection, Rudra know the connection where as Maya is still clueless why she reacts this way.

Kapoor siblings are really mysterious. They dont even talk to each other properly but know each other very well. Rudra must have embarassed when Dr Roy told him about Rishaan knew about him taking the cd. And you introduced a new family. Who is 7 year old Soniya's perfectionist father?? I guess its that creepy moron director 😡

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Thank you so much, JJ for you lovely review. 🤗
You are one of the best readers I have got, JJ! In fact I am so happy that I got you as a reader. Your analysis is just so objective and interesting!
My replies in bold. 😳