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bubli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#881

Its very nice update,am so hooked to this story,love it,its just AWESOME.

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Swati

@PRATHA1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#882

Awesome & emotional update Maria!
Rudra's feelings are nicely described! he shattered due to pain & mostly guilt of unable to protect maya from suffering! Finally Bittuji recognized his chief! RK got his lost friend bittuji, who helped him in that state & took him with himself at his home, Bittuji fed him by his own hand & put him to sleep! Bittuji encouraged rudra to take care of himself to protect maya from that evil person! He told him to believe on his love, his madhu will come back to him!
Rishaan brought maya at his home to protect her! He is so smart, he found out that Rudra has taken that CD from Mrs. roy! But i curious to know, Did he know that there is some relation with Rudra & Maya? He is so mysterious! I think he have some feeling towards maya! I liked Rishaan & Rudra's bonding!
waiting for the next update!

Edited by PRATHA1 - 10 years ago

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Tanya Kaur

@muzikk93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#883

Lovely update. Really hoping that rishaan doesnt fall for maya😕

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Aravind Das A M

@aravindam100

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Posted: 10 years ago

#884

Ohh my god... Itz just SUPERBN. I lovd it realyyy. I read it twice.. Der was tears n my ice wen u descrb the pain f Rudra. And my favrt part was ofcrs d scene f our Hero & Heroine. Very Touchy.. U r amazng Yaarrr. Gud job. I realy mean it. Thank u 4,dis LENGTHY updat. And a big Thank u 4 PM

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#885

WOW!! beautiful update...Rudra heard the recording in the CD & shattered...he is guilt ridden thinking that he couldn't save his biwi...But bittuji saved him from losing himself completely...The way bittuji controlled his overwhelming emotions & consoled Rudra & supported him was fabulous...👏...Meera's face lit up whenever Rishaan calls her , but poor girl always get disheartened...Although she dislikes Maya , still she is a perfect at her work...I loved Maya & Rishaan's bonding & Rudra is a little jealous ...thats quite natural...but Rishaan is smart enough to know that something is going in Rudra's mind regarding Maya...I think he suspected when Maya said Shaurya's name to Rishaan in the car...may be he was keeping eye on Rudra & thats why he knows that Rudra will take the CD...But now it will be interesting to read both the Kundra brothers hunting Shaurya down & in between this the start of Rudra-Maya love story...By the way I am liking Rishaan more than Rudra...that kinda weird...

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GOODLUCKANGEL

@GOODLUCKANGEL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#886

Awesome . loved it to bits. ❤️

pretty long n beautifully written too👏👍🏼

meera likes RK n she feels dat RK likes maya.Even i feel like RK likes maya or he has started to fall for her. The way he cares for her n tries to protect her it cant b only for his movie. There is more to it. I guess RK wud give rudra a tough competition.😛

Dnt knw why but i want both RK n rudra wid madhu/maya only😉😆 bcz rishaan reminds me of original RK n iknw dat rudra is original RK .

Sometimes i think rishaan knws dat rudra is original RK n maya is his madhu.

was rishaan sultan bhai in his prev birth ?dats why he is copies everything of original RK

n thinks dat madhu wud consider him her original RK n he wud get her in this birth.

cont soon dear🤗

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war_is_peace

@war_is_peace

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Posted: 10 years ago

#887

kutti , kamini, main tera khoon kutto ko pila doongi! tuune mere bittuji ka look kyu nahi describe kiya? 😡 what was he wearing? does he wear glasses? (nahi, scene mein suit nahi hoga😆) ...waise iss baar bhi knock nahi kiya 🤣

RK ne sahi kaha tha...har janam ke humsafar hain, bittuji aur unki hero-heroine mein taang adaao 😆 😛

AUR rishaan ab sach mein RK jaise behave karr raha hai...all that boxing n sweat! HOT!😉 and all that smirking and all...ab bhi time hai ..i m telling u rishaan is RK and rudra is for bittuji!

AUR tell me Rudra lost how many kgs? 4? 😉

and i know roses are red and violets are blue and all u see is illusion coz all u show is not wat we shud envision 😉 😎

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OK NOW ABT THE UPDATE

loved the update! 👏 🤗so much that i read it three times u know y 😆

pity that Rudra is so helpless always, maybe coz last life he was never helpless in getting wat he wanted 🤔
bittuji is very happy i know...he will never have a clue wat happened with madhu, rudra will never let him know...he will never know wat Rudra felt...so it has to be rishaan at rescue for rudra...well still a pity...rudra still wont be able to help rishaan in that case 😒 😭 (m confused if i m sad for rudra or rishaan...i think rishaan 😆)

meera is jealous of maya staying in the house! 😆 poor thing...even rudra felt angry n jealous 😆

i like how rishaan teased rudra abt that 😆

maya Rishaan scene was amazing...i wonder y maya wasnt angry later though? 🤔 😉

Rudra - maya scene was really nice! so her hand was moving towards his shoulder..i c! 😉 👏

abt the last part - everything thats on the dinning table is not edible, some of it goes in envelopes 😉

PS- iss baar bohot lamba comment ho gaya 😆 update soon! tab tak ke liye kyun main jaagoon? 😎

Edited by war_is_peace - 10 years ago