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Posted: 10 years ago
fascination fantastic update
rather scintillating dear
too much happened in this update
i will keep reading this till u give the next one
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Posted: 10 years ago
I loved this update as well 😃and I join Stephanie in the fact that your writing is very captivating, so logical, so logical that we don't need love scenes and those kind of lollipops to keep us interested in the story, everything makes sense in your story, the build up is well done, we can connect to the characters, we can feel their turmoil

Rishaan genuinely cares for Maya, it's not only because of his films, I guess he has feelings for her, I don't know yet which kind of feelings, maybe love maybe not, but whatever he feels towards her is genuine and for her wellbeing, even Maya forgot all about how they met and how he forced her to come to India and become his heroine, now she feels very comfortable with him, she trusts him and she considers him like a friend, a much needed friend after the life of a loner she has been leading all these years


Rudra, I was pleased to know that besides that he is a successful business tycoon, he is also a talented criminal laywer, we always like intelligent heros😉 and yes now he has donned his Sherlock Holmes avatar and you bet he succeeded in reaching the guy who stalks his Maya/Madhu😃, now he just needs to find why this guy is troubling his Madhu, I wonder how he will do to know the truth, now we know Maya will tell the whole truth to Rishaan as a friend but I wonder when Rudra will know about the truth as well?, as far as I know Rishaan he won't disclose this truth to anyone apart from Mrs Roy woh bhi just because she might help Maya overcome her past other than that we know Rishaan doesn't speak much

So I'm curious to Know how will Rudra know the truth, is it through Shaurya?!!, through Mrs Roy ?!(I doubt it, psychiatrists usually respect the professional secret) or through Rishaan!!!? ( it's hard to get the truth from this one too unless Rishaan comes to know that Rudra is Rk!! and Maya is his Madhu!!!) last option is Maya herself !!!!, but to get the truth from her, she needs first to accept who she is and who he is, her Rk!!!


Back to the scene between Rudra and Maya, it was heartwrenching for Rudra, poor soul, he has to wait and be very patient (which is not his forte😆), he wants to help her to reach to her but she just can't let him come close, though he makes her feel many things but for her he is still a stranger and the fact that he has this inexplicable effect on her makes her run even further away from him, there is a limit to what she can handle, she is already fighting her inner demons, now she can't allow anything or anyone make her lose the control she had over herself

So we need to wait, she will very soon take the first step towards her recovery, she will share her pain, fears with someone, she will release the feelings of hurt of frustration, of terror she has all these years, she will share them with someone, she will feel much better and Rishaan will be there for her, I guess even Rudra will be there for her in the next step, when she gets much more ready


so all in all I loved the update, looking forward to knowing about Maya's past, how things will unfold

Hats off to you for the brilliant update👏, no need to say UPDATE SOON!!😃



Edited by arshisfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello Maria! I have heard about this story quiet a few times before but I never went ahead to read it. Today while going through the DVD thread I saw everyone appreciating you work and here I am. I just read the prologue, by which you have already rendered me speechless. You are such an amazing writer dear! I am so hooked to your story now!😃😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
I read all updates in one shot! Rishabla's re-birth is interesting concept! I read your note too! You are amazing writer Maria, i liked your writing style, don't butchered any character, write the story on your own way!
Now coming to the update!
First you write about Rishaan & Maya, that time i thought that they are rishbala! But i got shocked when you mention about Rudra! But then another twist in the story Rudra & Rishaan are twins!
I liked Rudra & Rishaan's bonding!
I liked Rudra & Bittuji's convo. in 16th part, he left him confused & speechless!
Now Rudra started his investigation, by using his criminal lawyer mind!
Rishaan is hilarious in his drunk state!
So Shaurya is doing all this things, but why? Did he know about Rishbala's rebirth, but how its possible! or he is only trying to scare maya! Rudra remembered his past, but maya thought its only her scary nightmares! She is avoiding Rudra, poor Rudra its hurt him!

Eagerly waiting for the next update! please pm me!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 1 - You have written it down so beautifully! I love it so much! So Anna will be Maya's first ever friend. Glad she thought she should socialize, thought this one step seemingly will change her life.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 2- This was again a very beautiful update! RK has ultimately come to a decision that all he needs is her. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 3- Now that was one lovely update! "I need My Madhubala"😆
But I don't feel this went quite well with Meera, did it?
And I am not very sure till now that Rishaan will be Maya's hero, Rudra might as well be.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 4 - I am so in love with this brotherly bond Rudra and Rishaan share! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 5 - Something is terribly wrong and the feeling that Rishaan might not be her hero just grew more stronger.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ooohh ... what an update! So much happened! Btw, I loved drunk Rishaan! And why did you stop at the most interesting point? Please continue soon!

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