RIMA TS: An unnamed feeling| part 2 on page 11 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Haaawww

res

unres

Hi :)

I hv read all other stories of urs nd they r truly amazing !! u r a fantastic writer !!

my favourite is TGLS :P

i luv the way u write !! <3

ohk so cming to the os

(PS: I m gonna b brutally honest, so plz read it at ur own risk :P)

I...actually dint read it till the end :P

at the point i realised the the actual roles of rk nd madhu nd their position nd differences...i stopped reading...

Also there were a lot of typing errors :O

i know it happens :P i m also bad at that :P

I dint know if i shud tell u all this but then i decided to pose my pov...bcoz critics also are important ;)

plz plz dont b offended...

i luv u as a writer <3

thanks dear..
Myhindi sucks as its not my mother tongue n I rarely write stories in hindi. I wanted to give it a try..sorry for the typos. Will write a 2nd part of this os hope u will be able to read it fully then..
thanks again for being honest..I can take criticism..😊

Originally posted by: .Shree.

Beautifully Written 👏

But didnt like Madhu and Mukund

thank u shree..I know..ending will be rishbala.😊

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

Oops Madhu with Mukund hmm not digestible lol !! Do continue so that even unnamed feelings can have a life too 😆. Pls continue soon Titli 😃

Ps:- loved it and felt sad for RK though 😃

thanks..will end with RM..😳

Originally posted by: Prettyliars

Awesme OS

thanks..😳

Originally posted by: titli4love

thank u..
I'll write 2nd part..wait..😊

Originally posted by: luv_rk

Dnt want to see Madhu-makkhi
when we will get to see Rishbala?
BTW awesome OS titli

thank u subhra..many aren't happy with the ending so will write 2nd part..😊

Originally posted by: titli4love

thank u Dia..I know a boy like mukund doesn't deserve Madhu's heart..but wanted to make it different.. well I can't let u cry..so will update it soon.😊

Originally posted by: rima4ever

sorry titili

dont want u to feel bad that u did not write a good story

but makkhi and madhu simply does not go together

though madhumakkhi is a hindi word 😆

red OMG!! I didn't notice it..🤣🤣

Originally posted by: mmradhu

Awesome and marvelous os... loved it so much...

Originally posted by: maria090

nice os 😳

thank u..😳

Originally posted by: ananya2000

nice but madhu & makhi..oh no

part 2 coming soon..😆