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Chitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice os titli 😊

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trolldemortx

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Posted: 11 years ago

Amazing stuff Swagger :) ❤️

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silent.desire

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Posted: 11 years ago

Mast story hai I loved Rishbala and unnamed feeling of RK...

😈ab tu Rishbala ko mila rahi hai ya main tere pm ko spam Karun...😡

Jokes apart ...Frankly and from heart please make it Rishbala... don't know why but a girl loving a guy who is spineless enough to save her is too much ...Mukund ne yahan pe bhi nahin bachaya usse 🤢🤢🤢 ... ye Mukund kabhi nahin sudrega... please continue it ... agge teri marzi.🤗

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DVDfann

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice shot. But i cant take madhu with mukund 😒

Poor rishab 😭 Please continue and make it as rishab nd madhu 😊

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Haaaaawwwwwwwww

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hi :)

I hv read all other stories of urs nd they r truly amazing !! u r a fantastic writer !!

my favourite is TGLS :P

i luv the way u write !! <3

ohk so cming to the os

(PS: I m gonna b brutally honest, so plz read it at ur own risk :P)

I...actually dint read it till the end :P

at the point i realised the the actual roles of rk nd madhu nd their position nd differences...i stopped reading...

Also there were a lot of typing errors :O

i know it happens :P i m also bad at that :P

I dint know if i shud tell u all this but then i decided to pose my pov...bcoz critics also are important ;)

plz plz dont b offended...

i luv u as a writer <3

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.Shree.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautifully Written 👏

But didnt like Madhu and Mukund

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Kanchi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Oops Madhu with Mukund hmm not digestible lol !! Do continue so that even unnamed feelings can have a life too 😆. Pls continue soon Titli 😃

Ps:- loved it and felt sad for RK though 😃

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Subhra

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Posted: 11 years ago

Dnt want to see Madhu-makkhi
when we will get to see Rishbala?
BTW awesome OS titli

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mmradhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome and marvelous os... loved it so much...

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Titli

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NehaVdian
Awesome but madhu n mukund not done
Right another part n make it rishbala
Feeling sad for rk
Well titli grt os

thanks neha for feedback..almost every reader has requested for a happy rishbala ending..so will make a 2nd part..😊

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