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ananya2000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

nice but madhu & makhi..oh no

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Titli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: rekha.366
nice titili but yeh tumne kya kiya madhu aur mukundh ko i cant imagine my poor rishabh ,please un dhono ko ek kardho ,i hate mukku

Originally posted by: colorsluv
What d ... Madhu with Makki ... 😲... Yuck .. 🤢

I wanted Rishbala ... Is there any chance of 2nd part .. Pretty pls ..!!

BTW story beautifully written 😳 ... Can feel RK's pain .. .

I knew it!!
Btw life doesn't give what u expect everytime..does it? Thats why I made it in this way. But at the same time I don't want to hurt u guys..and sorry for making u all feel bad. So I'll come with 2nd part very soon.😳

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Titli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: kg15
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN...

BUT I DON'T WANT ANY OTHER PART..

EVERYTIME WE SEE RISHBALA TOGETHER IN ALL THE STORIES... LET'S HAVE SOMETHING DIFFERENT...

thanks..u seems to be the only one to say like this..everyone wants a happy ending so I'll write 2nd part

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Titli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: singhshailesh86
beautifully written , titli 👏 👏
but titli , yeh tune kya kiya madhu & makhi in one frame

thanks u..2nd part will be updated soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: meiejrishbala
nice os😊
poor rk,the unnamed feeling died even b4 he can figure out it😒
but madhu &mukund????...it is unbearable...can u giv a2nd part where rk meets madhu after so many years and both fell in luv????...its only my suggestion!!!!
any way good job dear👏

@bold nice suggestion..thanks for it. Will write a 2nd part n surely it'll be happy ending. 😆

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Titli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL

u r an awesome writer👏👍🏼

poor rishabh n his love 😭💔
madhumakhi..hell no 😡🤢Plz make it RISHBALA . pretty plz plz plz😳😃 n make us happy

BUTTERFLY make it RISHBALA PPPLLLZZZ🤗

Originally posted by: sani9226
nice os, but can't see madhu and mukund together, pls write another part with rishbala ending together

thanks..will write 2nd part..don't worry 😃

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Titli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: rima4ever
well it was a different type of os
rk is a teacher / professor and madhu is a student
but mukund and madhu ? 🤢😕
not applicable 🥱
but the story was nice i liked it

thank u Dia..I know a boy like mukund doesn't deserve Madhu's heart..but wanted to make it different.. well I can't let u cry..so will update it soon.😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Chitrarocking
nice os titli 😊

Originally posted by: -Stephanie-
Amazing stuff Swagger :) ❤️

xxx

thanks chitra n stephy..😳

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Titli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: beautiful_heart
Mast story hai I loved Rishbala and unnamed feeling of RK...

😈ab tu Rishbala ko mila rahi hai ya main tere pm ko spam Karun...😡

Jokes apart ...Frankly and from heart please make it Rishbala... don't know why but a girl loving a guy who is spineless enough to save her is too much ...Mukund ne yahan pe bhi nahin bachaya usse 🤢🤢🤢 ... ye Mukund kabhi nahin sudrega... please continue it ... agge teri marzi.🤗

thank god u dint spam..already I'm struggling with my PMbox!!😆
yah will make part 2.. n will give a happy sweet ending.⭐️
Sad ending kisiko pasand nehi hai..