Rishbala SS- Junoon Tere Ishq Ka (Part 15 page 41) 21/10 Completed. - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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brilliant fantastic update
have no words
please continue
happy janmashthami
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update 😳 thanks alot for the pm 😊 please update the next part soon & pm it to me 😊 N YA HAPPY JANMASHTAMI 🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update.cont. soon .Happy janmashtami
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Madhuja and Rishabhdev ...too much of coincidence, isn't it? 😆

Loved the way these two are mingling with each other without any bias...but Rishabh already seems to be inclined romantically...full on propose kar raha hai 😲😉

Lovely update...continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow very nice update
finally balraj allowed madhu to stay at badi haveli thnx to rishab
looking forward dor nxt part so update ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
love the rk-madhu convo , & waiting for nxt update
thanks for pm & continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Even balraj had fallen fr our rk...awsome upddate...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RISHAB CONVINCED BALRAJ TO ALLOW MADHU TO STAY IN THE MAIN HAVELI AND WON THE BET
WHAT WILL HE ASK FROM HER
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First off thanks for the pm! Awesome ff!
Read the first two parts( wanted to comment before reading the rest!)
Feel so so so bad for Madhu!! And then finding out that no one even cared to look for her or care to see if she is alright, awww my heart went out to her! 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 6


As soon as Madhu stepped out of the room, Rishab called her out, "Madhoo!!"

Madhu got inside the room and asked, "Kya baat hai Rishabjee?"

RK- Mujhe yaha ke ruins ke kuch tasveere chahiye.

M- Par mere paas to tasveere nahi hai.

RK- Koi baat nahi kal hum ja kar photos le lenge.

M- Theek hai.

RK- Theek Hai ab tum jaa sakti ho.

Again, no sooner she did step out, RK called out, "Madhoo!!

M- Ab kya baat hai Rishabjeee?

RK- Motihari ke rajya ka decline kaise hua?

Madhu told him the story of the decline of the kingdom. Once again Rishab said, "Theek hai ab tum jaa sakti ho."

Again as Madhu got out, RK called her.

This continued for several times. Every time Madhu got out, Rishab immediately called her and asked her some questions and then tells her to go out but immediately calls her again. RK was doing all these things just irritate Madhu but to his surprise every time Madhu came with a calm face and calmly answered his questions. She did not yell at him for disturbing her so much. Finally RK himself gave up and asked Madhu, "Madhu, main tumhe itni bulake disturb kar raha hoon, tumhe to mujhpe gussa hona chahiye, par tum to bilkul shant ho?"

Madhu smiled and said, "Agar aap meri jagah hote to shayad aap bhi shant hi rehte."

RK- Matlab? Main to bohot gussa ho jata.

Madhu looked a bit sad. She said, "Iss ghar mein meri jaroorat kissiko nahi hai. Issliye jab bhi aap mujhe bula rahe hai, mujhe yeh soch ke khushi ho rahi hai ki koi to hai yaha jisse meri jaroorat hai. Aur issiliye mujhe bilkul gussa nahi aa raha."

RK was also feeling sad seeing her. Before he could speak, a maid came and told Madhu, "Aapko Bade Chaudhury saab panchayat mein bula rahe hai."

Madhu turned and wiped her tear so that RK could not see that and said to him, "Aap bhi mere saath aaiye, thoda ghumna ho jayga aapka." She moved out without knowing that RK saw her wiping her tear.

When both of them reached the panchayaat, every body stood up seeing Madhu. Madhu asked them to sit down and asked one aged man that what had happened.

Man- Choti Chaudhurain, yeh Bhavarlal Rathi hai. Inhone aaj humse yeh shikayat ki hai ki hai inke bete Mahavir Rathi na to khayal rakhte hai nahi inki patni ka, aur upar dono par atyachar karte hai taki yeh apni saari jaydad inke aur inki patni ke naam karde. Inhone pichle do mahino tak apne hi pita ko ek kamre mein band karke rakha tha.

Bhavarlal- Choti Chaudhurain, Humne kabhi kissika kuch nahi bigara, aur apne bete ka to bilkul nahi. Par woh humare saath aaisa kyun kar raha hai hume nahi pata. Hume jaydad ka koi shaukh nahi, hum bhala kya karenge uska? Woh hum usse hi de denge, bas humpe koi julm na ho.

Madhu- Bhavar kaka, agar aapki jaydad hum gaon ke pathshala ko aage badane ke liye istemaal kare, to kya aapko koi apatti hai? Aapke aur Kaki ke liye school ke paas hi ek alag makaan rahega jaha sirf aap dono shanty se rahoge.

Bhavar- Nahi beta, hume koi apatti nahi hai.

Madhu- To panchayat yeh faisla leti hai, ki Bhavar kaka ki jaydad school ke liye istemaal hogi aur Bhavar kaka aur kaki school ke paaswali makaan mein rahenge. Agar Mahavir jee ne firse unpe jurm karneki koshish ki ya unhe khatra pahunchane ki dhamki di to unhe police ke havale kiya jayga.

Every body again stood up as Madhu stood up. She came near RK and said, "Chaliye ghar wapas chalte hai."

At home, Rishab was asked to get fresh up while Madhuwas called by Balraj for some discussions.

B- Tune yeh faisla kyun liya?

M- Bauji, jo kaka ke liye sahi tha wahi faisla maine liya.

B- Tu to yeh bhi keh sakti thi, ki Bhavarlal apni saari jaydad Mahavir ke naam kar dega agar woh usse theek se apne ghar mein rakhe to.

M- Par Bauji, Mahavir accha insaan nahi hai, woh iss faisle ko bhi nahi maanta.

B- Dekh Madhu, Mahavir ne tere saath jo kiya so kiya, par uska badla tu aaise legi?

M- Bauji, yeh koi badla nahi hai...maine bas yahi kiya jo mujhe sahi laga.

Now Balraj got angry and he shouted, "Madhu!! Teri zabaan bohot jyada chalne lagi hai aajkal. Apni aukaad mat bhoolna iss ghar mein. Yaad rakh ki bahar tu chahe job hi ho par ghar mein sabki jooton ke neeche rehne ke liye hi hai tu. Samjhi?? Chali jaa yaha se!!"

Madhu silently ran away from there. The moment she reached her room, she could not hold her tears anymore and broke down. Unknown to her was that Rishab saw everything that happened with Balraj and Madhu and now Madhu's crying. He thought to stop her from crying but then backed as he thought that she should need some time. He thought, "Jo ladki bahar ke logo se itna samman pati hai, uss se apne hi ghar mein itni buti tarah se kyun pesh aate hai sab???"


Precap: Rishab comes to Madhu's room at night... with a plate of food for her...


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