Rishbala SS- Junoon Tere Ishq Ka (Part 15 page 41) 21/10 Completed.

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Rimjhim Ghosh

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey Guys!!!! I am here with my second FF...The first is still continuing...this one is completely different from the show...no attitude, no arrogance...only divine love...here goes the character sketch and prologue...

Character Sketch

Madhubala Shiv Chaudhury- A 20 year old chaudhurain, widow of her childhood best friend Shiv. The only educated girl of her village, she is a teacher. Known for her wisdom and for being "apshaguni"

Rishab Kundra- A common guy of 24 years, pursuing his career in history. Came to Madhubala's village for two reasons, to meet his sister and to complete his papers on Indian History.

Balraj Chaudhury- The cruel father of Madhubala who hates her a lot. He loves only his son Rajveer.

Padmini Chaudhury- Mother of Madhubala.

Deepali Kundra/Chaudhury- Sister of Rishab and Sister-in-law of Madhubaala. She is a very nice woman who loves Madhubala a lot.

Rajveer Chaudhury- Husband of Deepali and Brother of Madhubala

Shiv Chaudhury- An army Officer and Madhubala's ex husband. After completing his marriage rituals with Madhubala, he immediately left for his duty, not even waiting for his suhaagraat or Madhubala's bidaai. On the very day he died while fighting with the terrorists. So Madhubala was not taken to her in-laws house.

Prologue

What will happen when a common guy falls for a widow Chaudhurain??? Will their relationship be accepted by their families??? Or will it be an eternal love story like Romeo and Juliet???

Index

Part 1- Page 2

Part 2- Page 4

Part 3- Page 5

Part 4- Page 6

Part 5- Page 8

Part 6- Page 10

Part 7- Page 12

Part 8- Page 13

Part 9- Page 16

Part 10- Page 22

Part 11- Page 26

Part 12- Page 31

Part 13- Page 33

Part 14- Page 38

Part 15- Page 41 (Final Part)

Edited by rg0782 - 11 years ago

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Shreya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Dipali is Rishabh's sister🤣

By the way, concept of this story seems to be very nice.

Plz continue soo.

Edited by SHINYSHREYA - 11 years ago

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Janani24

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow sounds interesting😊 continue soon 😊

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Clara20

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice concept...

u knw wht i loved most in ur story...dipali Rishabs sis🤣

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Rose

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Posted: 11 years ago

Rk's sister dipali🤣
Its very Interesting:-)
Please continue dear:-):-):-)

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

LOVELY CONCEPT

WAITING TO READ IT

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

yet another story ?

good going dear

keep it up

interesting concept

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Sh_Abhiya

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Posted: 11 years ago

lovelly rishbala story
seems like intresting concept
love rk- deepali relation i.e. sis.-bro.relation
thanks for pm & continue soon

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LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome concept 😊 thanks alot for the pm 😊 please continue soon & pm it to me 😊 yay when r u gonna update kaisa ishq yeh kaisa junoon? Please update it soon & pm it to me 😊

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Rimjhim Ghosh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 1

Motihari

Today there was very much chaos in badi haveli. Today was the grihapravesh of the badi bahu or new chaudhurain of the haveli, that is wife of the the eldest son of Balraj Chaudhury, Rajveer. All the members of the haveli were too busy. A young girl in pink saari was also busy in doing some work. Suddenly someone tapped on her shoulder. She turne dand found her father Balraj Chaaudhury smiling wickedly. She started trembling in fear.

B- Madhubala, aap ko pata hai na ki aaj ghar mein ek shubh avsaar hai?

M- jee...jee bauji...

B- (keeping his hand on Madhu's head) aur aapko yeh bhi pata hai na ki ghar ke kissi bhi shubh avsaar par vidhwaon ko hissa nahi lena chahiye???

M- Jee...jee...bauji..

Balraj suddenly pulled her hair tightly and siad, "Fir tu yaha kya kar rahi hai kameeni? Apna pati khaake tujhe shaanti nahi hua jo apne bhai ki patni ko khaana chahti hai apshaguni?"

M- Nahi nahi bauji...woh to dadine kaaha hki thoda kaam dekh le...

B- oh to ab tere bauji ke adesho se jyada teri daadi jaroori ban gayi...agar phir se yaha aayi to jaan le lunga...ab jaa yaha se...

Madhu quickly left the place and went in her room...

Madhu closed the door and sat on the floor crying. She sobbingly said, "Maine kya galti ki hai bhagwanji? Kissika jeena marna to mere haato nahi hai na?" She turned towards the photo of Shiv, her late husband and said, "Shiv, maine kya galti ki hai jo mujhe iss tarah se har roj saja milti hai? Tu to jaanta hai na ki main kabhi bhi tera bura nahi chahti thi...to phir...bauji hamesha aaisa kyun kehte hain???"

She remained in that position for a long time. Suddenly she heard a knock at the door.

precap: Deepali's entry and Madhu's past revelation...

Guys pls tell me how is it and then I will upload the next part and surely a longer one...till then pls tell me hows this??????