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Part 4


Deepali's happiness knew no bounds when she saw Rishab. She literally jumped on her feet and tightly hugged Rishab immediately when he entered her room.

R: Di sambhaalke, ab tu bacchii nahi hai jo itna uchalkud kar rahi hai...baby kya soch raha hoga?

D: Baby yehi soch raha hoga ki Mummy mamaji se kitna pyaar karti hai. Such Rishu...tujhe pata hai...tere bina mujhe yaha kitna bura lagta tha. Yaha pe meri baatein Madhu ko chorke aur koi samjhta hi nahi tha...

R: Madhu???

D: Haan maine tujhse kaha tha na? Meri nanad...usse bhi ab yaha nahi rakha bauji ne...

R: Kyun? Aur ab kaha hai hai woh?

D: Baujika manna hai ki Madhu key aha rehne se bacche pe abhishaap ayega...vidhwa hai na woh isiliye...abhi to baju mein jo choti haveli hai na waha reh rahi hai...accha tujhe to history pe information chahiye na?

R: Haan...kyun??

D: Accha hai na...Madhu teri madad kar degi aur isi bahane mera use milna bhi ho jayega...rook main Madhu ko bulati hoon...tu tab tak haveli dekhle...

Choti Haveli

Madhu was doing her regular activities when Gulabo, a maid from Badi haveli came and informed her that Deepali has summoned for her. She was very happy as it had been two weeks since the two met. She directly went to Deepalis room.

D: Madhu? Tu aa gayi??

She hugged madhu.

D: Pata hai Madhu..tere bina ghar kitna soona soona lagta hai...mujhe to yah arehne ka bilkul man hi nahi hota hai...kash tu pehle ki tarah yehi pe rehti to kitna accha hota na??

M: Bhabhi...accha to mujhe bhi nahi lagta...par bauji ka hukm tal to nahi sate na?

D: Isiliye to main eek bohot accha plan banaya hai...

M: Kya plan bhabhi?

D: Madhu tum to janti ho na ki mera bhai Rishab, yaha apne History papers complete karne ke liye aanewala hai?

M: haan..

D: Tumhe uski madad karni padegi aur uske liye tum Badi Haveli aaya karna...Rishu ki madad bhi ho jayegi aur humara milna bhi...

M: Bhabhi yeh to bohot bariya plan hai par agar Bauji ko pata chal gaya to?

D: Kuch nahi hoga, main sambhal loongi...tum raaji ho na?

M: Haan haan bilkul...

D: Main Rishu ko bulati hoon...RISHU!!! RISHU!!!!

RK entered Deepalis room. Madhu turned to face him and automatically she spoke out, AAP??😲😲

RK- (delightfully) AAP!!!!!😛😃

Madhu was getting irritated by seeing him.

D: Tum dono ek dusre ko jaante ho?

Before RK could say anything, Madhu left from there.

D: Arre Madhu...Rishu tune uske saath kuch kiya...

RK- Di, I love you...tujhse acchi behen aur ho hi nahi sakti...arre yeh to wahi ladki hai jisse aaj main mandir mein takraya aur jo mujhpe giri. Ab yeh mere saath saath rahegi to line marne ke aur chances milenge...didi...

D: Ek minute Rishu...Tu Madhu se mandir mein...thik hai tune waha job hi kiya main kuch nahi kahungi par aage aaisa kuch nahi hona chahiye...samjha? tu uske saath atleast flrit mat kar?

RK- Kyun na karu? Young hai, khoobsurat, tujhe pasand hai,plus already ekbaar main use flrit kar chukka hoon ...phir?

D: Rishu wo vidhwa hai...jisse uski shaadi hui thi woh to use chorke chala gaya par uske sasuralwalon ne bhi use nahi apnaya...

RK- OMG!! Mujhe yeh sab ...

D: Ab pata hai na? To ab use tameez se pesh aana...aur ha...yeh dekhna ki woh khush rahe...apni zindagi mein aage barne ki koshish kare...uska accha dost banneki koshish karna tu...thik hai?

RK hugged Deepali and said, Okay would be mom!!

Madhu was damn angry with RK. How dare he come here. She was strolling on the terrace. She did not notice that RK had also crept there.

Silently RK came behind Madhu and shouted, "VOOOW!!"

Madhu was scared and jumped up. RK started laughing and said, Kitni darpok ho tum...hahahaha

Madhu was again angry and started to leave but RK caught her hand and said, EK minute...mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai.

M: Par mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni...😡

RK- come on ab itna bhi gussa mat karo...Accha I am sorry...subah ke liye bhi aur abhi ke liye bhi...Main to hoon hi aaisa...stupid sa...ab gussa mat karo...warna mujhe help kaun karega??

M- Woh aap jaane...mujhe nahi karni hai aapki madad...

RK- Arre bola na sorry...dekho pehle jo ho gaya so ho gaya...hum ek nayi suruwat to kar hi sakte hai...

Madhu turned towards him and looked at him with doubtful eyes. RK smiled and said, Hum dost to ban hi sakte hai na? Pehle ki baate bhul jao aur apne naye dost se milo...Main Rishab Kundra...RK bhi keh sakti ho...Deepali di ka bhai...25 saal ka ho gaya hoon par ek bhi dhang ki girlfriend nahi mili...ussi ke liye search kar kar raha hoon...par yaha apne History papers complete karne aaya hoon...aur tum??

Madhu could not help but smile. 😊She also introduced herself, Main Madhubala Chaudhury...Madhu bhi keh sakte hain aap...Deepali bhabhi ki nanad...main aapki madad to kar sakti hoon par ha aapko apni yeh flirt karneki aadatein badalni hogi...

RK- Tumhare liye to apne aap ko pura badal denge jaan...to yeh aadat kya cheez hai...😉

Madhu rolled her eyes, Fir se??

Both of them broke into laughter that echoed through the terrace.


Precap: Rishbala started to work on the papers...

Edited by rg0782 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
interesting update...keep it up dear 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RISHAB GOT A DOSE FROM DIPALI NOT TO FLIRT WITH MADHU AND SO HE NOW WANTS TO BE FRIENDS WITH HER
AND BEING WITH HIM MADE MADHU LAUGH AFTER A LONG TIME
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
awesome update 😳 thanks alot for the pm 😊 please update the next part very soon & pm it to me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Wow. They r being close. I'm sure very soon Madhu wd have feeling for RK.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was awsum, i jst loved all the parts and red it together
plz send me pm when u update nxt part
plz, prity plz
Edited by asyaarshilover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow! its awesome. cont. soon dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Read all the updates in one go...very interesting storyline...and the way you are narrating is also captivating...👏

Plz pm me when u update..😳

Waiting eagerly for the next one..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
love rishbala convo & cute fight b/w lovely couple
waiting for nxt update, to know more about how these beautiful + lovely fall in love
thanks for pm & continue soon
* sorry for late comment busy in study & project
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5

Deepali came on the terrace and found Rishbala laughing. She smiled and asked, "Ho gayi dosti dono mein?"

M- Haan Bhabhi. Par aap apne bhai se keh dijiye ki mujhse bilkul flirt na kare.

RK- Nahi karoonga baba. Waise tum mujhe mere papers mein help kab karogi.

M- Aap abhi abhi to aaye hai thoda aaram kar lijiye, hum kal se kaam karna suru karenge...

RK- Main tumhe tum keh raha hoon fir tum mujhe aap kyun keh rahi ho?

M- Rishabjee, humare yaha mehmaano se issi tarah ijjat se baat ki jaati hai. Aur waise bhi, bhabhi ne mujhe bataya hai ki aap umar mein mujhse bare hai...

RK- Wah di, tune yeh bhi bata diya?

D- Arre issmein na bataanewali kaunsi baat hai?

RK- Bataanewali bhi kaunsi baat hai?

D- Teri umar hi to sirf bataayi hai..

RK- Tujhe pata nahi ladkiyon ke saath saath ladko ke bhi umar nahi bataaye jaate...

Madhu could not control her chuckle and said, "Aap ab niche chaliye aur chaudhurion ki khaatirdaari dekhiye... warna yeh bhaibehen ka jhagda to chalta hi rahega."

While coming back to Deepali's room Deepali asked Madhu, "Madhu, Rishu ki madad karneke liye to tujhe yaha rehna padega...par bauji ko kaise manaye??"

RK- Di, tu chinta mat kar, tera yeh jo charming sa bhai hai na woh tere sasurjee ko mana lega..

M- Rishabjee, yeh aapko jitna aasan lag raha hai, utna hai nahi...Bauji kabhi nahi manenge...

RK- Maine kaha na...main mana loonga...

M- Ho hi nahi sakta...Bauji unmein se hai hi nahi jo sabki baat mane...

RK- Par woh meri baat manenge...

M- Aajtak unhone gharwalon ki baat nahi mani fir aapki baat kaise...

RK- Hey Madhubala...Don't underestimate the power of a common man...main kuch bhi kar sakta hoon...

M- Kabhi nahi Bauji nahi manenge...

RK- Mujhse Challenge le rahi ho?

M- Main agar Haan kahoon to??

RK- Theek hai. Kal tak tumhare Bauji ko mana nahi liya na to mera naam bhi RK nahi...Challenge...

M- Theek hai...Challenge...dekhte hai ki kaise manate hai aap Bauji ko...

RK- Dekh lena...waise agar main challenge jita to mujhe kya milega??

M- Jo aap mangoge? Aur agar main jeeti to jo main mangungi wahi dena padega...

RK- Theek hai...done!!

Next morning when Madhu came to Badi Haveli, she was completely shocked to listen from Padmini that Balraj has asked Madhu to stay in the Badi Haveli itself. She quickly went to Deepali's room and asked Deepali, "Bhabhi, yeh, maa ne kaha ki Bauji ne mujhe yaha firse rehne ke liye kaha hai...Kya yeh sab Rishabjee ne kiya hai?"

D- Haan, kal sham se woh Bauji ke saath apna saara waqt bita raha tha...pata nahi bauji ko kuch samjhe raha tha. Aaj subah Bauji ne achanak se maa se tujhe yaha rakhne ke liye kaha...

M- Par kaise??

D- Pata nahi...le woh agaya, tu khud hi puch le usse...

Madhu turned to see Rishab who took her to his room. Madhu asked, "Rishabjee aapne..

RK- Ssshhh...kitna bolti ho...main jaanta hoon kit um yehi puchna chahti ho ki maine yeh sab kaise kiya...hai na?

M- Haan??

RK- Simple. Pehle unclejee ko apne attitude se apna fan bana liya...fir unka laadla hone ke naate unse ek favor maanga...ki tumhe yaha rehne de...woh acche mood mein the to unhone haan keh diya...kaha tha na tumse...Don't underestimate the power of a common man...

M- Kya baat hai...Aap to kaabeel-e-taareeff hai...

RK- Sirf taareef se kaam nahi chalnewala hai Madam...kal ka challenge yaad hai na?

M- Haan hai...baataiye aapko kya chahiye?

RK- Filhal to mujhe Motihari ke baare mein kuch baataaiye...challenge ke bare mein main baad mein sochunga...

M- Theek hai...puchiye ka puchna hai...

RK- Motihari kaise apne rajya ki raajdhaani bani??

M- Yeh ek bohot hi lambi kahaani hai...(the story given here is completely fictional and has no similarity with Indian History...just randomly thought and shared...)

Ekbaar yaha ki Raajkumaaari Madhuja apne sahelion ke saath sarobar mein nahane gayi thi. Paas ke rajya ke raja Rishabhdev ne jab unhe sarobar mein dekha to woh ek hi pal mein unse pyaar karne lage...deewano ki tarah chahne lage...unki deewangi iss had tak pahunch gayi ki woh Madhuja ke pita ke paas unka haath mangne aaye. Par Madhuja ke pita bohot hi ghamandi the. Woh chahte the ki jo unhe haraa payega woh hi unki beti ko pane ka haqdaar hoga. To Raja Rishabhdev ne yaha hamla kiya aur aakhirkar woh hi jeet gaye...fir Rishabhdev ke Rajkumari Madhuja ka vivah ho gaya aur Motihari ko Raja ne apna Raajdhani bana liya...dono pyaar ke jore the...bilkul Radha- Krishna, Heer-Ranjhna jaise...humare yaha unki prem kahani ko amar mana jaata hai...kehte hai ki har yug mein unka janam hota hai...

RK- Madhu, dekha na...mera naam Rishab hai...aur tumhara Madhu...chalo na hum bhi pyaar karte hai...fir humari prem kahaani bhi amar ho jayegi...

M- majak mat kijiye Rishabjee...pyaar majak nahi hota hai..

RK- Main majak nahi kar raha...I am serious...dekho main haans bhi nahi raha...

M- Aap nahi samjhenge...choriye iss baat ko...ab aage bataaiye kya jaan na hai...

RK- filhal mujhe thoda sochne do...tab tak tum free ho lekin jaise hi main bulaaun aana padega...

M- Theek hai...

Saying this she stepped out of the room...

Precap- RK irritates Madhu by his nonstop bakwas...


Sorry for the mistakes friends...hope you like it...😊

Edited by rg0782 - 11 years ago

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