Os - the betrayal part 1 on page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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His whole world shattered in just a minute what happedned. He just said one thing i love u madhu and darkness eclipsed him but her dark life started now.

What happened to two lovers ? As their families hate each other to core but their children have somethng different plans.
They loved each other or is it just a delusion

darkness defined them n is that a betrayal or somethng else.



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ok guys i know it is boring but it is 2nd attempt at os writing. I may update in 2 days.

Depending on d response i get. I want huge no. Of likes if u want update n cmmnt

p.s. - if storuline clash with some1 work kinda inform me. May be idea can clash but writing is mine
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arpita20

hey,
good one...
please continue...

thnx dear hit like for motivation pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
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deepak awesome start.do continue.👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Is this going to show dark side of madhu? I would like to see that. It's different where heroine isn't always a goody two shoes. You should totally write this!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vmpy

deepak awesome start.do continue.👍🏼

thnx dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shweta2728

Is this going to show dark side of madhu? I would like to see that. It's different where heroine isn't always a goody two shoes. You should totally write this!



this is d suspense so no cmmnt on it. Hmm i have written half of d story but climax is very tough to write n i suck at writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept!!😃
Please do continue,And don't forget to Pm me.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woww deepak your first os:-D great:-)
I like the concept:-):-)
Sound Interesting:-)
Please continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vaani21

Nice concept!!😃

Please do continue,And don't forget to Pm me.😊

thnx di
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Rose--

Woww deepak your first os:-D great:-)
I like the concept:-):-)
Sound Interesting:-)
Please continue...

thnx rashi n i have an ff too which i have not updated in 3 mnths

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