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Posted: 12 years ago

good hai continuee kar 🤣 🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago

interesting os deepak...😊
continue soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nidu_dsena
good hai continuee kar 🤣 🤣

ok bacha 🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice deepak..plz jaldi contiue kr..tu isse tragedy bana na plz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sai.janu350
interesting os deepak...😊
continue soon...

thnx dear

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepak148
ok bacha 🤣

bachha 😲 😡 im.not a kid ok 🤣 🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: love.abhay
nice deepak..plz jaldi contiue kr..tu isse tragedy bana na plz..

it is sad one for sure i have written half climax is tough to write

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nidu_dsena

bachha 😲 😡 im.not a kid ok 🤣 🤣

u r under 18 🤣

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alina.b

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepak148

this is d suspense so no cmmnt on it. Hmm i have written half of d story but climax is very tough to write n i suck at writing

Aww...its okay deepak. We aren't perfect. But still give it a try. You will improve as time goes by. I'm not too great of a writer either especially fiction. Persuasive essays is more of my thing...kinda funny...cuz of all the bashing that goes on here.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Yup. I am thinking of becoming a writer here rather than making posts

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