Os - the betrayal part 1 on page 7 - Page 3

Originally posted by: deepak148

Yup. I am thinking of becoming a writer here rather than making posts

You can still be a writer AND make your awesome posts.

Originally posted by: deepak148

His whole world shattered in just a minute what happedned. He just said one thing i love u madhu and darkness eclipsed him but her dark life started now.

What happened to two lovers ? As their families hate each other to core but their children have somethng different plans.
They loved each other or is it just a delusion

darkness defined them n is that a betrayal or somethng else.



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ok guys i know it is boring but it is 2nd attempt at os writing. I may update in 2 days.

Depending on d response i get. I want huge no. Of likes if u want update n cmmnt

p.s. - if storuline clash with some1 work kinda inform me. May be idea can clash but writing is mine

Os - the betrayal

Great start, Deepak.👏 Do continue.😃

Wow!! Awesome concept & very interesting start..Plzz continue soon..& plzz send me pm when u update😊

hey deepak
its gud
😊

deepak pm me whever u update ... hope that ur os ll be more rocking than ur posts...i jst luv them🤣

Awesome...Continue Soon & Thnx 4 d PM 😊

Nice start. Please continue. Would love to read further

Originally posted by: bria

deepak pm me whever u update ... hope that ur os ll be more rocking than ur posts...i jst luv them🤣

lol that is not easy

nice one but pls do continue ur ff -walk to remember !!