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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: kendra

nice one but pls do continue ur ff -walk to remember !!

waiting for that since ages.

i am suffering from writers block. Once i get ttm in 2 mnths. It will have continue updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Whoa deepak nice start...😊

seems lyk interesting...m waiting to read more...
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
awesome

send me PM too =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
interesting deepak 😊
do continue.👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
awesome do continue 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Nc start..Hey Deepak pls continue... Dis time, unlike last time u gv proluge nd den Gayab... Waitn.. Nd pls do pm wen u write d same
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Os the betrayal




" kundra family and malik family shared a long hate relationship.
but future have some better plans for them which gonna change their whole life
"


" twenty years ago "


Misha kundra and sahil malik were
madly in love with each other. Misha belonged to a rich n powerful family.
kundra empire was eveywhere, whereas sahil's family condition was totally
different. but love has no boundaries.


but their love was not given a yes.
kundras not considered malik at their level and maliks thought marrying a rich
girrrl will cause problems in future.



but misha bombarded kundras with
somethng which was not accepted. she was pregnant with sahil child. it didnt go
well with Mohan kundra and he killed her by giving poison.


Sahil malik had d same fate and he
was mercilessily killed by goons of
Mohan kundra.



Malik got to know about all this
but they cant do anythng and prove anythng. But he promised to himself he will
make Mohan kundra regrett this.



" after 20 years "


Malik's had been become a brand in
india, biggest rivals to kundra empire.


Madhu Malik and rishab Kundra studied
in same college in america and tehy fall in love with each other. Their start
was like of enemies, but opposite attracts. RK the bad boy heartrob of all
gurls fall in love with gal like Madhu who was opposite half of him. They both
were unaware of their family dark history.


Madhu - Rk i love u


Rk - i love u too jaan.


they were going back to india by a
same flight.their flight landed in dehradoon airport.


Madhu - it is tym to say goodbye.


Rk - i will go home and will inform my
family abt u n ur family.


Madhu - same here rishu. i am sure
they will accept our relationship. their will be no complication.


rk hugged madhu and took her lips in
his and kissed her passionately not bothering of d crowd there. Afet few
minutes of kiss of desire n passion, they parted away. madhu blushed to the
core. Both waved gudbye to each other and took their taxies to their
destination unknown of what future has hold for them


at kundra mansion


a big blow to rk face by mohan kundra.
Rk was purely shocked gto core by his father reaction and he just told abt
malik's to them.


" how dare u rishab kundra to
think of marrying malik gurl "


" what is the problem with it dad
"


shutup u bas***d, mohan kundra shouted
at top of his voice and told him all d history of both families.


" RK was shocked to hear all this,
it took some minutes to facts to sink in and he replied back "


i hate u dad, i hate u dad.


he dialled Madhu's number and he was
just to mutter words but he heard heard sobing cries


" madhu jaan what happened "


" Rk i i just putmy purposal
infront of dad and he slapped me hard " he told abt our families rivaliry
history and u know whattt


" Madhu i know everything "


rkkk


"madhu dad told me
everything"


"rk u will not leave me"


" never madhu never "


" Madhu i had a plan


We had to run away



Precap ' there was no love it was just
a game to trap u or am i lying


guys this update was just a base setup for future ones


Edited by deepak148 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
too good...
carry on...
want to know who made a trape...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Oh wow Deepak! You write stories as well? That's a kind surprise and you have done a marvellous job. I love the concept. Two rival families, Two lovers.. and do I sense betrayal. The precap says otherwise! I'm waiting eagerly for the next chapter.

Excellent chapter!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: RuthlessQueen

Oh wow Deepak! You write stories as well? That's a kind surprise and you have done a marvellous job. I love the concept. Two rival families, Two lovers.. and do I sense betrayal. The precap says otherwise! I'm waiting eagerly for the next chapter.


Excellent chapter!

thnx it is my poor attemp 😊

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